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Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 10:40 pm Title: My Boyfriend

LOLOL ! Bill's hair ! Omg, can't stop laughing... reading about what Tom thought of the hair was hilarious and Bill, thinking that he liked it was even more funny! oh how I love this Bill! xD

Aww! They are officially boyfriends now, they are adorable! And yay for a whole chapter just for their sex =P

Author's Response: Hahaah I'm so happy you found the hair thing funny because for some reason I kept laughing whenever I pictured it. Bill is so oblivious to what is really going on, isn't he? But he loves you back, girl ;D Yep, it's official!! I hope you liked the next chapter ;D Thank youuu!! *hugs*

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 10:35 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

2 words, Lady Boner xD

Author's Response: 2 words, Hell Yeah! :D xD

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 10:34 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

This was amazing. I mean you made it so beautiful :'D And I can't believe Tom brought Bill those tickets! I'm jelly~ I can't wait for the next one this was amazing!

Author's Response: *smiles so big* Thank you so much! That makes me happy that you found it beautiful. And I'm jelly too, girl! I wanna go to Disney World! Thank you again. I hope you enjoy the next one!! :D

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 10:32 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

So, yesterday, I pretty much found out after you and I bantered about peaches that my grandma died. I spent all day, in my own little world, trying to cope with it all- and oddly enough, I thought of the "Peaches" song, and hummed that to myself most of the day. I get home, in a most somber mood, with catchy 90s song stuck in head, and point is, besides my rambling- thank you for the update. Thank you for letting me into someone else's world, for real. I don't say it often enough, but this story is awesome. *huggles you*

Author's Response: Just so you know..that was some beautifully written rambling. I'm so sorry to hear about your grandma, I lost my grandma in April of last year and I know it's hard. I'm glad you could find some mindless comfort in the "Peaches" song, and that you felt like you could escape into another world with this story. You are so welcome for the update but thank you so much for this very sweet review. I wish you all of the best while you cope with your loss and, thank you for saying that..but you are the awesome one :) *hugs you tight*

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 09:54 pm Title: My Boyfriend

You know, I've always considered Bill's hair to be the fifth member of the band, so it only makes sense that it would have a life of its own in the morning. It's so cute that Tom was scared of it. And I agree with Bill that cooking makes a man even sexier and more desirable. ~__^ As for Bill's tendency to overshare -- that poor saleslady must have been pretty flustered. At least his aunt is cool with his plans!

Author's Response: I honestly agree that it is the 5th member; the constantly changing, and evolving, member haha. And unnf if a man can cook...that is seriously so sexy to me, as well. That poor saleslady haha, but yeah Kiran just understands and trusts Bill so she supports him ;) Although, I definitely don't have any adult family members who would have been supportive quite like that haha. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D

Reviewer: TomKRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 09:25 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

All I can say is what another great chapter I was really excited to see how this one turned out. And I was right about you taking your time this was great to see them finally having sex. :D great job once again. can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying all of those sweet things. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D I hope you like the next one as well!!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 07:41 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Yay! SEX! .... honestly it's hard to properly review smut. Good smut! Great job! :D

I loved how special Tom made Bill's birthday. It just kept getting better and better as each present was unveiled. But the biggest gift is the gift of their lurve. x3 Tom's the perfect boyfriend for Bill. Bill loves Tom more than Disney World. That's deep.

OMGZ at the peach festival, did they crown the Peach Queen? Or maybe they call her Princess Peach.

Author's Response: Haha that works perfectly for me, in terms of smut reviews :D Thank youuu! And yes their lurrrrve outshines all of the other presents. Loving Tom more than Disney World is deep. For real. YES they totally crowned the Peach Queen and it was a very old (but quite happy) lady lol. She was very pleased with her title.

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 07:13 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

A-mazing! seriously!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for thinking so and for reading :D I hope you keep liking it!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:55 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Very sweet first time!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! XD

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:18 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

*falls into a Bill and Tom smutt coma*
...................*drools*

Author's Response: Ahhh yes. The best kind of coma. *happily joins you in the coma* :D

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:10 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

omg... they finally did it!



Author's Response: They totally just did it ;D !!!

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:07 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

I loved this chapter! =) I loled at the bouncy ball and then at the Disney World tickets! That was so sweet of Tom to get those for Bill :')

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Glad it made you laugh and that you thought it was sweet :D :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:56 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Perfect! Tom is so damn loving & caring. Well, they both are towards each other =) I love this.

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much!! I'm so happy that you love this. Truly! xD

Reviewer: chaoticminds Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:52 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

woooooooooooooohooooooooooooooo!
HOT DAYUUM!!!
more more more, need more to survive!!
xoxo

Author's Response: Hahaa thank youuu!! I will definitely give you more because I want to keep you around ;D *loves*

Reviewer: Iliana Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:48 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Holy shittttt!!! Holy shit Holy shit Holt shit!!! (lol) I loved it so much... Please go past 40 chapters! Please?!

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you soooo much! I might just go a bit past 40 ;) I will let you know, love :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:31 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Lol, oh my gosh *blushes*

Did Tom stay in Bill after they came? I'm a sucker for that sort of prolonged togetherness :3

Tom brought the bottle down to wear his hand was > *where

Author's Response: I am totally a sucker for that as well. For some reason it's soo sexy and romantic, and he did stay in for a little bit ;) And thank you SO much for pointing that out. I fixed it as soon as I had the chance. Thanks for having my back ;)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:28 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

*wishes tom would kiss the shit out of her*
that was great! excellent first time sex! and i now miss the bouncy ball i had when i was little. *sigh*

Author's Response: *wishes this as well, with a daydreamy sigh* Thank you so so much!! And heeey now, there shouldn't be anything stopping you from going and getting another one, right now! I fully recommend the occasional bounce. It keeps the body healthy and the spirit happy.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:25 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

I hope you brought peaches home to share with all of us. Ich liebe peaches.

This was a beautiful beautiful birthdady. I think it was a wonderful surprise party. It just had a vey exclusive guest list. There was a party, and there were surprises, so I am going to go with it was a surprise party.*nodnod*

The sexy times were very nice. I hope Bill doesn't hurt too much when he wakes up. I think Tom should be ready with some tylenol or asprin when Bill wakes up.

Great work. I am really looking forward to tomorrow! *hugs* Hope you had fun today!

Author's Response: I really did bring a big ass basket of peaches home lol. I would send some your way, virtually, if I could!! And I LOVE your definition of 'surprise party' as it pertains to this chapter :D I will go with that as well. *nods in agreement* I'm glad you liked the sexes, and I think I am currently picturing him as a bit sore, so Tom will just have to take care of him xD Thank you, loves. I had lots of fun!! I hope you like tomorrow's chapter *hugggs*

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:58 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Did you happen to name this chapter after the song by Bad Company? Lmfao here is another confession: that was my favorite song as a toddler and I would strip to it. I hated clothes as a toddler and would always attempt to take my clothes off in public. I still hate clothes to be honest. Lmfao I'm so happy for Bill and Tom. Haha at the end of the chapter I got "I just had sex," by Lonely Island stuck in my hear lmfao. I hope you have fun with the peaches and eat some for me. As perverted as that sounds(;

Author's Response: Hell yeah I did haha. Lmao, I can just picture your little toddler self always trying to get naked lol. And seriously. Fuck clothes. Too constricting and they hide the good stuff lol. I'm glad you're happy for them!! And I almoooost titled the chapter after after "I Just Had Sex" lolol. That song always gets stuck in my head. So damn catchy. Thanks so much, love ;) I had lots of fun with the peaches and I like the perverted things in life, so I'm okay with that :D

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:49 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

okay. okay. okay. Never favourite chapter, right here. It has the smut, it has the sweetness, ad it has Bill. EVERYTHING IS AMAZING. Just. Just. I want you to get over here and just. Fuck me now. Just god. Y U BE SO TALENTED? It makes me feel lesser ¬¬ ANYPOODLE, this was... just spectacular. I swear, So. Amazing. I am at a loss for words, really. You are amazing. Re-marry me? LOVEYOU

Author's Response: *blushes and bites lip at all of the praise* Baby, how do you make me feel so good? THANK YOU! I'll get over there if you get rid of the polar bears and the wolves, k? K! Don't you daaaare feel lesser though, because you're amaaazing. I'm sooooo fucking happy that you loved it and thought it was amazing. Thank you so much and I will absolutely re-marry you!! Love you too, honey babe xD

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