Date: 07/11/11 12:25 am Title: Chinchilla!
Shower curtains. Shower curtains. More often than not, chapters contain shower curtains. This is a serious concern that cannot remain unaddressed. Shower curtains are nasty. Please replace all future shower curtains with kittens instead. Everybody loves kittens.
Yay for more sex! That was the best birthday ever for Bill! The "you deserve it all and more" "ur my more" was so adorable. x3
LOL chinchilla, that's genius! Real chinchillas do chill. I worked at a pet store, and I became acquainted with rodent behavior. Rats pace, gerbils are hyperactive, hamsters sleep, mice run and crawl over each other, and chinchillas chill.
I swear, each chapter gets better (despite the showercurtains kittens. Kinda like Bill. Each time I see him I swear he gets more beautiful than the last time I looked. Or my dog, he's cuter every time.
You are easily gonna break 1000 reviews. *cues music* "Just trust me... Right now you have 1000 views in sight, 1000 reviews because you rock, 1000 signs that we all love you~ Right now you have 1000 views in sight, 1000 comments rising like the tide, we'll show you we love this story~"
Author's Response: Look..I'm really sorry that they make an appearance so often. But, you should be happy that they didn't end up tangled up in it! Because that thought did cross my mind...and if you wish, I shall replace it with kittens. Because well..kittens are pretty great. Unlike shower curtains. There's gonna be lots of sex in the end of this story, for sure :D So I'm glad you enjoy it! And eeek I'm glad you thought that was adorable xD I love you for understanding the chinchilla joke. Because they really do chill!! A friend had one and she was soooo chill. And I love that you have observed the behaviors of rodents ;D Well, I'm gonna go ahead and say that each review you leave gets better and better. You never fail to make me smile and laugh, so thank you for that! OKAY. The end of this review made me smile, laugh, AND "awwww". Girl, if I do, it's only because of how amazing all of you are and because of all of the love you guys show me, everyday. Thank you soo much for reading and always leaving me such amazing things in response xD
Date: 07/11/11 12:23 am Title: Chinchilla!
7th Review. (:
Okay, just gonna name it off in numbers this time.
1) Shower sex. AH.
2) Bill and his random words.
3) Tom. [Just because.. ;D]
4) OMFG. CHINCHILLA. I died. Just ohmygod. Ahah! How it was suddenly there, Bill freaking out and then it getting bigger. XD
5) Okay, so you know you're one of my favorite authors. And I think you'd be good at writing this topic. So uh, would you take a story request from me? I'm too scared to ask anybody else and it's my favorite Genre!!
If you don't want to know about it or even take up the offer it's fine but I think it'd be a good new topic after this story is done. *loves and huggles.*
Author's Response: Eeek yay for lucky number 7 :D Okay, 1) Mhmmm. Shower sex. :D 2) Gotta love the random words and Bill. 3) xD :D 4) I'm sooo happy that made you laugh!! Like, truly. 5) First of all..thank you so much for saying I'm one of your favorites. That makes me so happy :D And, I would LOVE to hear your story idea!! Like, I'm super excited to hear it. You should go to my bio page and send it to me in the "contact" box, k? Thank you so much for reading and this sweet review! I look forward to hearing from you!! *loves and hugs on you*
Date: 07/11/11 12:15 am Title: Sharing is Caring
As always, Bill never fails to amuse me. Great chapter!! XD
Author's Response: Bill is very pleased about this. But not as pleased as I am :D Thank you so much!!
Date: 07/11/11 12:04 am Title: Chinchilla!
I don't have enough time so I just want t say: I DON'T WANT IT TO ENDDDDDDDDDDD.
I'm going to bed and I feel like crying. :/
But, as always, it was an amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Ohhhh noooooo! I don't want you to cry!! *hugs you* I promise you'll feel satisfied when it's over :D I'll make the last chapters really good. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter and don't be sad, k? This isn't the end for the boys ;)
Date: 07/10/11 10:48 pm Title: Chinchilla!
First of all I think everyone will agree with me when I say we want to see them go to Disney World. Unless of course they were doing that before you ended it already.
Secondly, when I saw the chapter title I kept singing that old song where the only lyric is the word Tequila, and replacing it with Chinchilla. So pretty much I was going "ba dum bada bum ba bum bum, buh bum bada bum ba bum Chinchiillahh!" I have no ideaa why, but I thought it might tickle you to know that. And I will admit it did confuse me at first why they would call it Chinxhilla, but once you explained it was pretty damn funny, and made perfect Bill-esque sense.
I will miss the daily updates, but I totally understand why you are doing it. Besides, every other day isn't too terrible. *tries to convince self* Its still way more frequent than most authors afterall.
This was a great chapter. Tom does Bill so well. And takes care of him too. I'm so proud of him.
I worry about Bill's hair. How bad must it be for Bill to think it was out of control and not aamazing?
Great work. I can't wait for tuesdays update!!...Unless of course, you might want to give us a MOnday update...just so you gave us advance warning of the impending slow down first? *puppy eyed pout* Pleeeease? *bats eyelashes while snuggling up*
Author's Response: Ohhh they will be going to Disney in the last chapter!! I couldn't leave that out. Ahahah I am so very pleased that you were singing that song with Chinchilla in Tequila's place :D Thank you for sharing that amusing anecdote with me. K, I'm really glad I did explain it in the notes at the end because I know several people haven't gotten it lol. I knew it was an obscure joke and so I felt the need to embellish, and I'm glad I did if it made you laugh! xD And I will miss updating daily..I really will. But....we will get through this *tries to convince both of us* Hahah. "Tom does Bill so well" I kind of love you for saying that lol. Amazing, really. I'm proud of YOU for saying that. I am concerned about the hair as well. I hope that the hair in its true nature will never make an appearance in this story. Okay...why you gotta look so adorable and make me feel all sorts of longing and guilt inside? *pouts and huffs* I don't think there will be a chapter tomorrow...but maybe I'll throw in a bonus chapter at some point, k? *is sorry and reaches out to hug you* Thanks for reading and for this fantastic review :D
Date: 07/10/11 10:28 pm Title: Chinchilla!
I cant believe its almost over,, this is my favorite story on tgis whole website!! You did such an amazing job writing it!!:)) this story has made me laugh like nothing else could, its made feel all happy abd shit and i even feel bills embarrasment when hes not embarassed,,lol thank you so so so much for writing this fucking amazing stort
Author's Response: Ohhhh darling...that makes me so happy to hear that it's your favorite!! And just wow, this review made me so happy. I'm so thrilled that this made you laugh and made you happy :D I'm just really glad that I could write this story and that you enjoyed it. Thank YOU sooo much for reading and loving it. And for this amazing review!! XD
Date: 07/10/11 10:08 pm Title: Chinchilla!
omg i hate huge zits >.<
Author's Response: Ohhhh girl. Me too. Meeeee too. *shudders*
Date: 07/10/11 10:05 pm Title: Chinchilla!
LOL @ Chinchilla haha I loved your explanation for it XD and ooo shower sex, fun XD and awww 42!? I'll be soo sad to see this go. I Love your writing haha , I'll totally be expecting something new from you after this is done XD
As for this chapter, I totally loved it. The robot dad thing cracked me up!
-love and hugs-
Author's Response: Hahaha I'm glad you found my lame explanation amusing xD Yup, shower sex! I'm glad you love this story enough to be sad when it's over!! Thank you sooo much for saying you love my writing. I'll definitely post something new. I would miss you guys too much, otherwise!! Yay I'm so happy you loved the chapter and you laughed at the silly robot part xD *loves on you*
Date: 07/10/11 09:46 pm Title: Chinchilla!
First of all: I love you and this story. Thank you for continuing to write it and I will be so very sad when it's over!
Seconds of all: Personally I would love to see into the trip to Disney that Bill and Tom take. But that's just an idea.
Author's Response: I love you, too!! You are so very welcome for writing it but thank YOU for reading and enjoying it. That seriously makes me so happy :D And!! They are totally gonna go to Disney World in the last chapter! So you'll get to see it and I'll end the story with a big bang! *hugs on you* xD
Date: 07/10/11 09:43 pm Title: Chinchilla!
HAHAHAHA, chinchilla! Aaaah, I don't want it to end at 42 chapters D: The updates brightens my day up so much!
Author's Response: Hahah yesss I'm glad you found it funny!! Aww the end isn't gonna be for like...*counts in head* 10 days, though! And I promise I'll be posting new things after this. This review brightened up my day..just so you know. Thank you so much!! xD
Date: 07/10/11 09:21 pm Title: Chinchilla!
:D aww i'm so sad it's going to end but i know it has to be done! :) I love this and i loved the shower sex xD can't wait for tuesday!
Author's Response: I'm sad too, love. But it does indeed have to be done! And I'm just so happy that you like it enough to miss it :D Thank you sooo much! I'm happy you liked the shower sex..I enjoyed writing it hehe ;) I really hope you like Tuesday's chapter!! xD
Date: 07/10/11 09:08 pm Title: Chinchilla!
Aww poor Bill! Hope he gets rid of Chinchilla soon! lmoa it's going to be sad when this story ends, but you've done an amazing job so far liebe!And one thing I'd so wanna see is what happens when Tom comes out to his parents lmao, that's gotta be funny. :D
Author's Response: I reallly really hope he gets rid of it soon as well!! I am currently trying to think of a cure for it because well..writing them having sex while he has the giant zit, just doesn't come across as appealing at ALL. Haha. I'm gonna be so sad when it ends..but thank you soo much for the sweet compliment!! You've been such a doll through this whole story. Fuh reaaaal. :D Always leaving me encouraging words. Oh!! He's gonna do that before the story ends, actually. So you'll totally get to read all about it! Yay! *hugs*
Date: 07/10/11 09:02 pm Title: Chinchilla!
YES! I would love to see random bill pop up in your stories! lol I get the joke.... kinda :P
Author's Response: Yay you definitely will!! Annnnd I know the joke was pretty lame *hangs head in shame* Haha sorry about that. Thank you SO much for reading though! Even when my jokes are dummbb lol.
Date: 07/10/11 08:56 pm Title: Chinchilla!
I need to start reading this during the day when nobody is at home and not late at night XD
I laughed so hard @ chinchilla. And my mom and others didn't laugh when I told them >.< Some people have no sense of humour :/
Author's Response: Haha they must not be as cool as you then ;) Honestly though, I have friends that I can joke with about the most random things for hours and hours, and then friends who just look at me like I'm stupid when I'm cracking up at something random. Everyone has their own flavors of humor..I'm just really happy that mine makes you laugh! xD Thank you so much for this review and for reading :D
Date: 07/10/11 08:38 pm Title: Chinchilla!
Oh my god this was so cute!!! and sexy ;)
Haha I love how you did the shower sex scene but the end... um.. chinchilla? hehe
haha no but this was really good and i can't believe it's ending so soon and it's great that you found an end and you told us when it is or else i would be lost xD can't wait for the next chapter :3
Author's Response: *smiles big* Thank youuu so much, love!! I'm glad you loved the shower sex and haha I know the end was random, but I'm happy you liked the chapter anyway!! ;) I would never just let the end sneak up on you :D I'll always let you guys know when something is up with this story, and any future stories I post! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it!! Thank you xD
Date: 07/10/11 08:24 pm Title: Chinchilla!
“You're my 'more',” Bill smiled and squeezed Tom's arms, playfully.
too fucking cute!
i love how you go from sexy to hilarious at the drop of a hat. quite a talent.
as for future glimpses of bill and tom...maybe moving in together after they graduate? i forget how old they are in this. then they can just fuck like bunnies in every room of "their" place.
Author's Response: *squeals* Thank you so much!! That is such a compliment and I appreciate it so very much. They are currently 15 and 17 but I think that is a fabulous idea!! And of course they will fuck like bunnies. I'm pretty sure they might be fucking like bunnies in the last 5 chapters of this story, as well haha. Hope you don't mind ;)
Date: 07/10/11 08:15 pm Title: Chinchilla!
OH NO! poor Bill. No bouncy ball time. Oh well... he can bounce on Tom then. hehe.
Gah! The vision of Bill bent over, pressed against the shower wall.... *drools all over herself*
I found this manip a while back and now it will always make me think of this fic.
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af79/lillithvalo/bc13f892f2_71076194_o2.jpg
I know how the not washing off the makeup and zits thing goes. I'm really bad at washing mine off before bed.
Awesome update. LOVING the smutt!
Author's Response: Now that's what I'm talkin' about! Haha he should just bounce way on Tom, instead. Okay you're totally killing me (in the best way possible) with the awesome manips. xD And I always wash my face at night because I have had bad experiences in the past with that haha. That and, I have white pillow cases so the make up rubs off if I don't wash my face lol. Thank you so much!! So happy you loved the sexy times ;D
Date: 07/10/11 08:08 pm Title: Chinchilla!
Well, first of the shower sex was great as always. And Tom was so sweet making sure Bill was okay. Then Bill having a zit on his face and calling it a chinchilla LMAO to funny... It was once again another great chapter. Can't wait for more and will be waiting till Tuesday for the next chapter :D as always much love sent your way :D
Author's Response: Eeek I'm glad you liked the shower sex xD And I'm happy it made you laugh as well! Thank you so so much, love :D I really hope you enjoy the next chapter as well! Much love to you!!
Date: 07/10/11 08:07 pm Title: Chinchilla!
Yayy :D I'm sorry... I was in Wyoming with my family so I didn't post any replies to your story for a while but WOW this has been awesome! I love this story!!
Author's Response: Oh don't even worry about it!! I'm just happy that you're back :D I'm glad you've been loving it!! Yay. I hope you like the next chapter as well :D Thank you so much *hugs*
Date: 07/10/11 08:07 pm Title: Chinchilla!
*uses a fan* you really know how to write good smut!!!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you for saying so :D I always feel all nervous about posting it! So your review makes me feel gooood.