Date: 07/13/11 01:16 am Title: Underwater Kissing
*is confused* Whats wrong with wikipedia?
I knew there was going to be a BFGW reference as soon as he started looking acne cures up online. It was priceless.
I'm glad Bill at least realizes that he types...differently...than everyone else. But you know, if he were 'normal' we wouldn't love him so much.
I am alomst ashamed of Tom, being a bad influence on Bill like that, getting him to sneak out of te house. Shame o him. Nah, not really. Can't blame a guy for being than in love can we? The pool scene was great.
She really does suck at being the eyes and ears of the placed if she missed not only the Bill and Tom thing, but also the whole Monkey Incident.
I missed you monday too. I am really looking forward to the next update. Keep up the lovely work! *huggles*
Author's Response: Girl, I was poking fun at myself because I go to wikipedia for everything and I always get made fun of for it. As far as I can tell, the site is pretty golden and reliable. But I guess it's just because anyone who has the internet can add any sort of facts to it, if they want. *shrugs* Normal is quite overrated and Bill is just exhibiting wisdom beyond his years, by realizing this. Alas, we cannot blame Tom for being an absolute fool in love. It causes wrong decisions to happen. I'm glad you liked the pool scene ;D Okay. Seriously! She totally let the monkey incident go right by her. I didn't even think of that. Good catch! You would make a very good detective, I have decided. Thank you so very much and I hope you like the next chapter! *squeezes you*
Date: 07/13/11 12:53 am Title: Chinchilla!
LOL My God! XD When I was reading your end notes about your explaintion*sp?* about the "Chinchillia" and just when I read the *hears crickets chiriping* A cricket just started chiriping!!! My bro has a cricket in his room (I am sitting in his room :'D) So yeah that was funny lol
Author's Response: Hahaha. What a perfect coincidence!! And I gotta say, I hate it when crickets hide in places and then just chirp away. *cringes* That's hilarious though. Thank you for sharing! haha.
Date: 07/13/11 12:34 am Title: Underwater Kissing
That was sweet. But it was also funny that Bill had those goggles on....LMAO It made me laugh so hard...Also it was sweet that Tom is making Bill's day by taking him to Disney world. It was sweet great job on the story once again...it was funny and sweet ! SO AGAIN I SAY GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Haha I'm sooo happy that it made you laugh!! But also that you found it sweet at the same time :D But you are the sweet one to leave me this review. Thank you soooooo very much!! I'm so glad that you are enjoying it xD
Date: 07/13/11 12:21 am Title: Underwater Kissing
Do they really go to Disney Land? Who will be footing the bill?
Thank You
Author's Response: They're totally going to go to Disney!! And Tom will for sure be paying since he invited Bill and all. Although, I think Bill will come up with a few ways to show his gratitude *wink wink* Haha. Thank YOU!!! :D
Date: 07/13/11 12:04 am Title: Underwater Kissing
"Put some Windex on it!" Haha!!
And I too rely almost entirely on Wikipedia.
Author's Response: Windex. It's the cure-all. Haha. And yes, I go to wikipedia whenever I want info on anything, and I get made fun of endlessly for it. Wikipedia is just such a wealth of information that is greatly discredited!
Date: 07/13/11 12:01 am Title: Underwater Kissing
LOVE IT, hahaha, btw I love wikipedia, idc what people say. I rely on that site for a loooot of things xD
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!! Okay and I must confess, I was totally making fun of myself in this chapter because I refer to wikipedia for everything!! I learn so much on that site! xD I'm so pleased that you are the same way hahaha.
Date: 07/12/11 11:59 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
XD -dies- YOU USED THE WINDEX SHIT XDD I love you XD This was sucha sweet and cute chapter though :D I can't wait for tom to come out to everyone! Gunna be aweshome!
Author's Response: Haha I fucking used the windex shiittt! You know I warned you that it might happen lol. I love youuu!! :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! And girl, I cannot wait to write that part, and I really hope you like it. Thank you so very much :D *hugs and windex* hahaa
Date: 07/12/11 11:59 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Wifeeeeeey, what is with you? Even without lesbian banana's or blue hair dye I love this story so much. Honestly, it's the perfect mix of humour and fluff and it's just too adorable for words :3 And it had pool head. So. Yeah. That might be a bonus.
Author's Response: You always know just what to say to make me smile sooo big :D I couldn't be happier that you love it. I'm glad I could get a few bonus points for the pool head, too. Ahem. *loves on you*
Date: 07/12/11 11:48 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
OMG 1000! Happy Birthday! This is the best, funniest story I've read on this site and you are awesomesauce! &hearts^&infin Congratulations!
Author's Response: !!!!! I am sooo thrilled that you are my 1000th reviewer!! You flatter me soooo much for saying that. Thank you so much :D It was an absolute delight talking to you, tonight! I hope to do it again, soon. *huuuugggsss*
Date: 07/12/11 11:47 pm Title: Shower Time
Comparing Bill to recycled paper makes a lot of sense! Weak, but gorgeous and unique. I liked his impassioned lecture about physical and emotional strength! Whoo hoo! Put asshole Tom in his place!
Ugh, I don't like gym showers. The thought of using some shampoo someone left in there makes my stomach turn. It's just shampoo, I know, but it's someone else's shampoo.
Yay! The gift of a krispy kreme hat. I don't think I've ever seen those hats. Are they like the steak n shake hats?
Author's Response: Bill needs to put Tom in his place more often, I think. And once again, I totally forgot about those tidbits in the story lol. Perhaps I should reread as well. I looooathe gym showers. Gross and germy. Agreed. Nobody likes using mystery shampoo. They are much like the steak n shake hats, actually!! Ok wait though..have you never had Krispy Kreme? This needs to change. Now. I insist!
Date: 07/12/11 11:41 pm Title: Skittle Confessions
Because Bill would know what alien blood looked like. The image of a flustered Bill messing with the clock was hilarious to me. And I love how he left half a banana on the bench.
One time, I was at a train station at around midnight and the family behind me boarded their train. They left their open package of twizzlers, which I consumed after waiting a while. They didn't come back. Wouldn't wanna waste twizzlers, even though they're not that good.
Awww, Tom thinks Bill is pretty. ^^ First, under Tom's skin. Second, under Tom! What an awesome plan.
Author's Response: Listen, he might know what it looks like, okay? There's no telling. I had totally forgotten about both of those things, so I am delighted that you brought them up haha. You might kind of be my hero for having the balls to eat an abandoned package of twizzlers. It was very wasteful for them to leave them behind, and you were just doing your part for the environment in consuming them. Yaaaay the plan worked, too! xD
Date: 07/12/11 11:34 pm Title: Fuck Parkinson Street
Man, rereading this, I forgot how young Bill was. Only 14 at this point! And the first time we hear mention of the monster in his pants.
Did you have any reason behind the name Parkinson street? Since it's something bad, and you're a psychology major, and Parkinson's Disease is something bad... is that what you were going for? *way overthinking things* I can't help where my brain goes sometimes.
Author's Response: He was really quite young, but the monster was far beyond his young years. Umm..honestly at the time, no lol. But your assumption makes me sound way cooler, so maybe I'll just go with that. I am going to bring it up again in one of the next chapters, though. I'm trying to come full circle with a lot of things, to give the randomness some symmetry.
Date: 07/12/11 11:21 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Bill with internet access makes me nervous. The internet is a wild jungle with information Bill might go nuts with. The internet has encouraged me to do crazy things, like cut my own hair (successful) and make a shopping cart bike hybrid (unsuccessful).
Windex, lol. I also love how Bill behaves in the pool! Not only is he excited twitterpated, but apparently his libido isn't impaired by the environment in the least! Pool sex . . . ugh water and microorganisms and stuff. :X
Aww, Tom! I understand that his relationship with Bill is like nothing (nothing) he's ever had before (never ever), and it's easy to stay with the habitual behavior. But buddy, that's gotta change if you wanna keep Bill! I foresee that part of the ending will be Tom becoming comfortable with going public with Bill. :D Yay! Bill's definitely worth it.
Author's Response: Bill probably just needs to stay off of the internet. And I cannot say how pleased I am that the hair cutting was successful. And do you by any chance have a picture of this failed hybrid creation? I would very much like to see it. Bill can get a hard on in any situation or environment, I believe haha. He is immune to the idea of germs and growing things. Yes!! You know precisely how Tom is feeling and how he needs to behave to keep Bill for his own. And that is quuuuite possibly, the result of that part ;) He's so worth it. Thank you!!! I'm just gonna virtual hug on you for a while. *hugs with no shame*
Date: 07/12/11 11:20 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Goddd!!! I fucking love this story!! It is the best story on this entire website!
Author's Response: What!! There's nooo way that's true. But you just put the biggest fucking smile on my face for saying that. Thank you sooo much XD
Date: 07/12/11 11:19 pm Title: Sweating Balls
i do the lalala thing with my hands over my ears too! usually when my parents try to suggest that they still have sex life.
phone sex is way better than sexting.
always wanted to get naughty in a pool, but never had the chance.
and i think, as a way of announcing his "intentions," tom should plant a big wet kiss on bill in the middle of the gym. when it's crowded. just saying.
Author's Response: Hahah I do as well! My mom delights in torturing me with anecdotes about her and my father's relationship. *cringes* And yes, phone sex is waaaay better than sexting. Much more interaction and feedback. Getting down in a pool is kind of chilly and slippery, but fun. You should definitely try it at some point. Umm..that is actually an amazing idea. *files away* Thank you so much as always, for reading and reviewing xD
Date: 07/12/11 11:18 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
I missed you too. You're an essential part of my day. Gosh, I felt weird saying that but... whatever :)
As always, and I'm gonna search for a synonym, it was amazing. I'm still trying to get over the fact that it IS eventually ending but, you just rock.
Author's Response: Don't even feel weird saying that, because I looove it ;) And hey, I quite like and appreciate the word 'amazing' so don't feel the need to search for anything else. :D I know, I'm sad that it's gonna end. Mainly because I'm gonna miss amazing reviews, like this one. But I will post other things for sure. Thank you xD And you rock way more.
Date: 07/12/11 11:13 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
I loved this chapter! It was so sweet! :3
When the chapters end make another story when they go to Disney world together because that would be so cute! ^-^
I love your writing and I find it amazing how often you update and whenever I see that you update this I Automatically start reading and giggle like a school girl (even though i am a school girl X3) but i just love this soooo much!
Author's Response: Eeeek I'm so happy that you loved it!! Thank you :D Haha they're actually going to go to Disney World in the last chapter!! So I hope you will enjoy reading all about that ;) And I cannot even begin to tell you how happy it makes me that you love this story that much. Seriously, I am so very happy that you do and that it makes you giggle xD *loves*
Date: 07/12/11 11:06 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
LOVED this chapter :) i was all day thinking about the update and it is deffinitely worth waiting just a bit longer :D :3 i love this too much
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!! :D I'm sorry it showed up so late. That makes me smile so big that you were thinking about it all day. I absolutely love that you love this. Thank you xD
Date: 07/12/11 10:56 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
LMAO!!
You can use Windex for EVERYTHING!!! *pokes at a zit* Hmmmmm.....
God... Bill is too damn cute! Night vision goggles! I see him all in black, lion mane, The green glow from the goggles being the only thing visible as Bill slinks around in the dark, humming his own spy music. Waaay to cute!
You know how I feel about the smut. No need to go into detail about that.
Author's Response: You can, k? Though I have not tried it, and I won't be. But if the movies and the internet say it's true..it must be!! I'm so happy that you find Bill so cute. And you know that's how seriously he treated the sneaking out. And yes, I do know how you feel about it..and you know that I'm right there with you. *dies again, thinking about the pictures you shared* Thank you sooo much, loves :D
Date: 07/12/11 09:02 pm Title: Sweating Balls
So...I was skimming through my tracked story list, and it just kind of hit me...you know there is a problem with your banner right?...Hub rules say Tom can't wear a shirt inside, yet he is inside that hub with a shirt on. And it is clearly too elaborate a hub to be the one at Tom's house, plus it was, you know, up before Tom built a hub... I just, I dunno, had to point it out...
Author's Response: Perhaps...you are wanting a banner with a shirtless Tom? Okay but seriously, I did not even think about that..*sighs in embarrassment* He's just breaking a major rule, all day, every day, and I didn't even realize! Thanks for pointing that out..but I fear there is nothing I can do at this point Can you look past it, for me? Please? *sticks out lower lip and gives wide eyes* Also, I posted the new chapter about 3 hours ago and it hasn't shown up yet. Hopefully it will soooooon!! *crosses fingers*