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Reviewer: BillaKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/11 12:27 am Title: Feel Like Making Love

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*dies a little inside*
Amazing this kicks my smut's ass.
I loved it. I love you You are FUCKING AMAZING.

Author's Response: *squeals* Nuh uh. You're so fucking sweet. Thank YOU!! *loooves on you*

Reviewer: BillaKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/11 12:16 am Title: My Boyfriend

*giggles like a fucking girl*
You do these things to me, I'm sposed to me a manly-dyke and YEWW just make me all girly. (i feel like tom) XD sorry, I do adore this chapter though. :)

Author's Response: Listen, I am most certainly not going to jude your for giggling like a girl, even if it's not your natural tendency ;) And I'm so happy that you adored it, because I adore you xD

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 11:04 pm Title: Sweating Balls

aww well Danke *blushes* I will tke it under advisement

Author's Response: Splendid, darling. Splendid! :D

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 05:56 pm Title: Underwater Kissing

Hello K :)

I was away on holiday and you've updated like half a book :)
I enjoyed their romantic and very intimate night deflowering Bill. The boys were was so beautiful in their longing to have each other. It was a revelation to them both because it was first time for either of them to have penetrating sex with a boy.

I'm aware there are only a few chapters left, but I was hoping Bill is going to meet Tom's parents before the end. The confusion will be epic - or not :)

I'm not sure I can live without this story, but I respect you need to move on. That you've been able to write fic of this quality day after day is unbelievable and I hope you can fill that void afterwards *s* In short, I hope you have already planned a new plot for us.

Thanks for the dates of late.

*love and hugs*
Maria

Author's Response: Ahhh I have missed you! I was honestly just thinking about you last night, and was hoping that you were still enjoying the story :D I'm so happy you liked their first time together. Bill is definitely going to meet Tom's parents before the end! It's gonna be interesting to write, for sure ;) And I am so very flattered by the last part of your review. I'm sad that this is ending, but it is definitely time..because I wouldn't want to start producing anything less that good, for you guys. I'm going to fill the void, I promise :D There are ideas floating about in my head. Thank you so much for catching up and sharing your thoughts. I hope you had a really good holiday! *squeezes and loves*

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 03:21 pm Title: Underwater Kissing

Another amazing chapter =)

Author's Response: I'm delighted that you thought so. Thanks so much!! :D

Reviewer: emo-4-life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 02:19 pm Title: Underwater Kissing

awwww i loved this chapter most of all :3 the love in it was just so adorable!!! ^^ and o: yayyyyy!!! i gots a peach :3 *gives her a mango* :D also! if you went blue in the face youd be a smurf ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you sooo very much, doll. xD I'm glad you loved the love. Love is love! Oh!!! *accepts the mango with a huge smile* Why, thank you!! And hey...I think there are worse things I could become than a smurf ;) I could totally be a happy smurf. haha.

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 01:00 pm Title: Underwater Kissing

LoL Windex! O_O' Does it really work? Aw Tom dont worry, its understandable how you feel about others knowing about your relationship with Bill. Since he's never been with a guy before. Also I was wondering are they ( Bill and Tom) gonna go to Georgs party? It would be interesting if they did! ^^

Author's Response: Haha I have no clue if it actually works..and I would be hesitant to try it. Who knows though..maybe one day if I'm desperate enough to get rid of a zit lol. I'm glad you understand poor Tom's confusion. It's true though, he's never experienced anything like being with Bill. I'm definitely going to write about the party in the next chapter. But..I'm going to keep it a secret as to how it will go. Just until I post tomorrow :D *loves* Thank you!

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 12:31 pm Title: Underwater Kissing

I was sad when you didn't update yesterday but then you updated today which was another terrible day!
Its as if this story was sent to your mind by God to make my life so much happier.
:DDD
Also a brilliant chapter, of course ^_^

Author's Response: This review..was sooo very sweet. I'm sorry you missed the story yesterday..it went up at like 10pm, my time. But I posted it at like 6pm, and I know a lot of people were already asleep or just busy when it finally did show up. But I'm glad that this story could make your day better :D And as to this story being sent to my mind to make you happier...I love that idea! And I think that if making people happy is the outcome of this story, then I am so very pleased with that result xD Thank you so much, love!!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 10:48 am Title: Sweating Balls

I know, I love wiki. Its like my go to source for information when I am confused about stuff. I google something and then look scroll for the wikipedia page for it (because I honestly haven't figured out how to navigate wikipedia itself *is shamed*)Like when Andrej Pejic started popping up around here. First I googled images, then when I thought 'wtf thats a dude?' I had to verify it was. NOw for research papers and stuff, I do verify from other sources that wikipedia isn't spouting a bunch of garbage. But on stuff like the Civil War and crap, its pretty accurate, probably because that stuff gets a lot of foot traffic.

Detectiving might work, I know I'm pretty crap at james bond spying though...once back in Junior year my friend Katie and I decided to take a tape of Bond music to school, and go from our first classes of the day (they were right next ot eachother) to our Homeroom class (at my school you had the same homeroom all through HS) and acted very James Bondey all through the halls, finishing with a somersault through the HR doors and winding u at our desks. It was amazing. BUt incredibly NOZZT subtle and well hidden

Author's Response: Yes! I will honestly google "(insert name or thing) wiki" whenever I want to know anything about anyone or anything. It's just the fastest way to accumulate lots of knowledge about a certain subject. Haha I never search on the wikipedia sight itself, either. Yeah, Wikipedia is literally not allowed to be sited, when I write my papers. Which is laaaame. I mean, if the info is right..what right do the teachers have to judge? And I think the world might just be ready for a not so subtle, detective. One who brings their own soundtrack along with them. I think it's maybe something you should look into. Just saying. ;)

Reviewer: xxxkitty94katxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 08:58 am Title: Underwater Kissing

I was sooo confused yesterday when I kept coming on here to check for this story then last night I remembered that you had said it would be like ever second day and I was all like OH NOOOOOES Dx
but this chapter was sooo worth the wait xD

Author's Response: Ohhhh no!! I'm sorry I confused you :( But I'm sooo happy that you that you thought it was worth the wait :D *hugs you tight* I so appreciate you for reading this story xD

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 07:38 am Title: Underwater Kissing

Eeeek! I totally love this! Like... Disneyland?! Holy moley!

And giraffes? My mom loves giraffes so we have them all over the house on pics and statues and figures and what not... I'm starting to think we're going to move to Africa... which scares me cause there's lions... and mountains...

Oh and nightvision goggles are like... TOTALLY the coolest thing in the world! I wanna have a pair myself, but... I dunno where to find a spy store, so.. I'm not worthy! *pouts*

Pool sex is SO much better than shower sex *nodnod* but you still have to be careful that you don't slip on the edge of the pool though... Did you know that 37,5 % of all accidents happens at a pool? No? Well, it does...

And this ending was just... I'm melting! It's better than puppies on a pink sky drifting through happy land with rainbows and unicorns... and that says A LOT... It was even better than.. skittles EEEK! Who said that?! :O

Oh and I TOTALLY just made you something! I made my own version of oops I did it again and it's just... so awesome I just know you're gonna get naked and come to me in my hub... yup!

Buuuuuuut for now until I have it perfected and know where I can show you.... you will have to deal with the missing of it....

Ooooh, and my dream! I nearly forgot it! I have this book called "The most evil murderers" and I dreamt that Bill had been reading in it and Tom would come to the rescue cause Bill had called and been all like "I'M CALLING BLOODY MURDER!" so Tom ran over there and rescued Bill from his blanket that had accidently strangled him... and they had sex, cause Tom forgot to put on pants when he left...

Oh! And I'm blond now! Before I was black haired, like Bill, but... I decided it was too boring for me now, so I got it bleeched and you know what?! It's almost GINGER! Eeek! Cause... too many red thingies in black so... I'm almost ginger... blond with a tip of ginger, YUM!

And wikipedia? What's wrong with that?! I use it for everything... I google alot and the best answers come from wiki... did you know that wiki had a dictionary too, for all those imcompetent loosers who don't know cyber? Like me? *nodnod* it's called wiktionary! Clever thinking! Or maybe... it's just to confuse people... so they think it's wikipedia, but then it's not and when they try to look up "Bill's hub" they will find nothing... and then Bill will be sad! OH! But then he can have my hub instead and we can totally have a threesome! Maybe it's not such a bad idea after all...

Nananannaaaaaaananaananaaaaaaa! Tadaaa!

Author's Response: Just..damn. You have once again astounded me with your review. I mean seriously..you have a gift!! Haha. I could not be happier that you love this story and that it prompts you to leave me something like this. *looks at you in awe*. The fact that your mom loves giraffes, makes me really giddy. And I think that night vision goggles are probably a little overrated, so don't worry about not being able to find them. Unless, you have a lot of secret night things to do..in that case, I will help you look for some!! I've got your back girl! Hahaha did you find the info about how many accidents happen in a pool, on wikipedia? Because if you did..I would be so delighted! And I seriously use wikipedia allll of the time as well haha. I'm guilty of it. Okay hey...the fact that you thought the ending was better than skittles pretty much made ME melt, because skittles are sort of the best thing, ever. And I'm sure that your version of the song will just make my clothes fall off automatically. And then I will come to the hub and bring Bill with me ;) And he'll probably be naked already because Bill just likes to be naked. *shrugs* Once again...you have the coolest dreams. And ooooh your hair sounds pretttty, though!! I always get so bored with my hair lol. Ok seriously, this was amazing..yet again. Thank you so much. This was such an awesome thing to wake up to :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 06:25 am Title: Underwater Kissing

Awww aww aww i hope tom gets uhh.. un-confused [?] soon! XD Loved it! -love and hugs- I like the pool kiss ;D

Author's Response: *grins* Thank youuuu, darling! And he will figure his things out, soon. Just needs to grow some balls, I suppose haha. I'm glad you liked the pool part ;) *loves and squeezes*

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 05:59 am Title: Sweating Balls

Pshft, even just looking at my face has that affect on people. You struck gold with me. But I'm glad I ca make you smile ^^ I'm happy that you're happy that I love it. It's not very hard to do. Love your story, I mean. Dude, pool head makes everything better. *sits back and lets you love on me alllll night long*

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 05:57 am Title: Sweating Balls

Pshft, even just looking at my face has that affect on people. You struck gold with me. But I'm glad I ca make you smile ^^ I'm happy that you're happy that I love it. It's not very hard to do. Love your story, I mean. Dude, pool head makes everything better. *sits back and lets you love on me alllll night long*

Author's Response: More like I struck bedazzled jewels, with you. Way better than gold, in my opinion. So many smiles and so much happiness from me, because of you. :D Pool head does add a certain something, doesn't it? *accepts that challenge and begins the loving*

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 05:55 am Title: Sweating Balls

I am starting to realize this :') and I'll try to make that a two way street ^^ DUDE, they so should. Hmm, long distance relationships work with dogs, right? AND LOL OMG THERE WOULD BE phoDogs EVERYWHERE. HAHAHA. I ARE SO PUNNY! But yes, that would be adorable. Wiff der bedazzledness and shit. Dude, it was posted. I read it. You know my opinion.

Author's Response: Long distance relationships work with dogs because they don't need to talk on the phone or text message. It's actually an ideal situation! Hahha phoDogs. Dogs with little cameras strapped to their paws. You are incredibly punny, especially when referring to dogs. FUR real. <---I know you see what I did there. I do know your opinion, and I love you for it. K bai.

Reviewer: Charlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 05:31 am Title: Underwater Kissing

I'm on repeat too but I LOVE IT!!
They really are so so cute!! =)
I'm always saying the same thing but I really don't know what else to say because at the end of each chpater, I'm really like " aaawww so cute" ^^

Author's Response: I just appreciate the fact that my story makes you feel like that :D And you can tell me it as much as you want because it makes me smile soooo big. Thank you very much!! xD

Reviewer: marydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 02:23 am Title: Underwater Kissing

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!! They both love each other most XD

Author's Response: Hehe, why yes they do!! There's no need to compete :D Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, love!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 02:20 am Title: Underwater Kissing

*loves on*

You know I love this story.

Author's Response: *squeezes* And I so appreciate the fact that you do. Thank you :)

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 01:43 am Title: Underwater Kissing

Missed you as well. dont do that to me again!

Author's Response: *hugs you tight* Okay!! :D

Reviewer: LaLaLaLovers Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 01:35 am Title: Underwater Kissing

8th Review! Dun-na-na!
LOL. My typed sound effects rock. :D
Okay so down to the point!
I was kinda sad when I saw that you were only gonna post like every other day, or whatever, but then I read this chapter and HOLY BALLS IT WAS SO WORTH IT.
Bill and his text messages. xD And thinking about sexting with capital letters like that, awkward and hilarious! (x
And the pool part! Ah. Cute and hot.
I like how Tom has become quite the little Romeo. (;
*flutter claps.*

Author's Response: Your typed sound effect does rock because I read it exactly how it would have sounded if someone had spoken it! haha. YESSSS I am sooo glad that you thought it was worth it!! Like, unbelievably glad. Isn't that a funny situation to imagine? Sexting with all caps haha. It would be so awful. I'm glad you liked the pool part ;D He really has become quite the romancer, hasn't he? I'm so happy you liked it. xD *hugs on you and smiles very big at the 'flutter clapping'*

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