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Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:49 pm Title: In and Out

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo. why did there have to be closure with Larry?! Larry is my favourite part of the story!!!!!! Well, no not really, your amazing humour is my favourite part of the story, but Larry comes in a very close second. Bye bye monkey. Still laughing. Damn this was good.

Author's Response: Larry's still gonna be around! He just won't be crazy Larry who is trying to mate with Bill. Haha. But he'll hang with them, and stuff. Could not be more thrilled that this chapter made you laugh and that the story in general, makes you laugh. Thank you so very much!

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:34 pm Title: In and Out

You have to keep this story going. It's amazing. More than two more chapters please......

Author's Response: You are sooo sweet. I'm very happy that you like it that much :D I'm going to post other things when this story is over, I promise. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. *hugs*

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:33 pm Title: In and Out

My dog would like to file a complaint against you because every time I read your story I snort and laugh so hard it wakens her. She is very old and crotchety and upset. Can you please tone down the hilarity so I am no longer tempted to hoot with laughter? She says my outbursts would put Bill's to shame. Thank you.

Seriously, I almost screamed when the monkey was revealed. That creepy little monster! And Tom is trying to be all mature and brave while Bill is insisting it's *Tom* who is a trouble magnet. That was genius, along with the whole conversation about the front seat. And now, whenever I am startled, I am going to cry "Monkey on the windshield!" because that was just funny. I don't even want to know how the monkey tracked and found them. Thank goodness there was no humping. And the party scene was adorable -- love Georg like he loves ponies! Way to come out with a bang, Tom!

Thank you so much for keeping up with this story. It's so insane that I'll really miss it when it's finished. Thanks for the laughs!

Author's Response: On behalf of myself and this story, I would like to formally issue an apology to your dear, old dog. I never meant to cause her to lose any sleep. However, it was my intention to make you laugh and so...I'm afraid your dog might just have to start wearing ear muffs. Will this work? Haha. Seriously I am so happy that this makes you laugh this much. And I am delighted that you picked up on those little things in the chapter! It makes me smile when someone notices subtle and quick lines, like that. Please do shout that when you are startled! And who knows how that monkey tracked them down. Super monkey senses, I'm guessing. Georg loves ponies!! Yaaay. You are so very welcome, but thank YOU for reading and leaving me this smile-inducing and laugh-causing, review. I'm happy that you like it enough to miss it. Thank you xD

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:23 pm Title: In and Out

ASDFGHJKL;' Geezz I was a bit consurned when you brought BOTH animals in I thought something was going down! No but I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one I am pretty sad it's coming to an end because I love waiting and reading this so much! And I want to see the new Harry Potter and I can't wait to see it! Hope you had fun ^-^ can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Haha I know it was pretty intense there for a while. I'm sooo happy that you loved it!!! And I could not be more delighted that you've loved reading this story. Truly :D I will definitely post other things! I had sooo much fun at the movie. I loved it. I can't wait for you to see it and read the next chapter xD Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:14 pm Title: In and Out

I'm sotarting to feel sad too. I am going to miss this so much. I thought you gave them all justice with their closure. I just still feel bad for Stanley. Maybe he can get his job back now that Mr. Mcgee (old balls) and his monkey will no longer be there?

So, at the party after Tom told Bill he loved him, and Bill was all "I love you too, I do I do, I doooo" All could think about the rest of the chapter was Kenan an Kel. So I thought I would share a clip you tube clip with you. It isn't my favorite,but it was one of the only ones I could find.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jcdPcqls-u8

So, my mom actually surprised me an took me to see DHp2 Friday morning around noon. I should have had some clue when she woke me up at 8 in the morning to watch DHp1,b but well I can be oblivious sometimes. It wasn't too crowded, I figure because of the time we went. Between the two this was the best screen adaptation ofall the books, bu with nearly five hours between them it should have been, you know? I was a bit diappointed they didn't go into Dumbledore's backstory, or Helena Ravenclaw's, and they didn't meation that Harry's was the cloak, but other than that it was great. I didn't really dress up but I did wear my Bellatrx Letrange Wanted T-shirt. And I saw a guy dressed up like Dumbledore as we were leaving.

Well, with as late as it is, I would expect Tom's parents to call Tom's name in relatively quiet manner to see if he was still awake, thus alreting the boys to their presence. In this case Bill could quickly hide in their hub, and quietly throw something on while he is in there, Tom can run out and explain hes got a friend over, who fell asleep already, and he was just going to bed himself, and then they could just leave the coming out thing for another day...ut thats probably not whats going to happen knowing Bill. Plus what would Tom do with all the cum he is wearing?

Can't wait to see whats going to happen now.

Author's Response: I'm happy you like this enough to miss it :D And I'm gonna miss your amazing reviews. I hope you like the other things I write, just so I can read what you have to say haha. And Stanley will get his time in the sun, before the story is over. Hahhaa. That is quite reminiscent of the clip lol. I loooved Kenan and Kel back in the day. That is so sweet that your mom surprised you! And I'm really happy that you liked the movies! And YES. All of your points really disappointed me as well. And also..there was Helga Hufflepuff stuff (it rhymes!) that was left out. Hey, you were reppin Harry Potter in a subtle way. I like that. I believe that you have made very valid guesses as to what will happen next. Please stay tuned to find out *says in radio voice* Really though, stay tuned? I love your reviews. K bye!! Thank you! *squeezes*

Reviewer: TomKRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 10:09 pm Title: In and Out

On a first note don't feel sad. Its a good story thats coming to end. And with Tom having to come out to his parents would be hard but once it gets done then he can live his life the way he wants to and not hide from anyone anymore. The monkey and Larry were amazing too.. Great job as always with everything you do and can't wait for more :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet words :D I really mostly feel happy that people have enjoyed it so much. And yes, Tom's life will be much easier once he isn't hiding anymore. Thank you sooo much! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter xD

Reviewer: Iliana Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 09:54 pm Title: In and Out

._. The story is going to end.... *tear* I just wanted to say that this story is one of the few things that have been making me smile lately.... Thanks

Author's Response: Honestly, I am so happy that this has made you smile. And I'm not going to stop writing. I'll post other things, I promise :D You are so sweet, and I want to continue to make you smile. Thank you!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 09:49 pm Title: In and Out

Omg! I should have realized it was the damn monkey lol. At least Bill is rid of him & the "old balls" guy. I'm glad that Bill & Larry came to a truce lmao. I'm so relieved that Tom came out. I wasn't expecting the way he done it but I loved it! Now i'm curious about how the parents will handle it. Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: It was totally the damn monkey haha. But he is gone, now. As is old balls. And amends have been made with Larry :D I'm glad you liked the way that Tom came out!! And I'm excited for you to read the next chapter to find out xD Thank you sooo much!!

Reviewer: Janerainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 09:15 pm Title: In and Out

I just really, really hope they'll love Bill as much as I love him. And your story. And you. And even though I'm also sad, I really, really hope you'll keep writing amazing stuff. As always. Amazing.

Author's Response: *smiles so big* I promise I will not disappoint you with the next chapter. I will definitely write more stuff because I love you all that much. Whether or not it's amazing though...that's up to you to decide haha. Thank you so soooo much! YOU are amazing, love :D

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 09:11 pm Title: In and Out

Ha ha! I didn't dress up either, I just rocked a Voldemort T-shirt that was cleverly altered, and we watched that thing in 3D. Was amazin. *nods*

Author's Response: You know I think you're amazing, right? Because I do. xD *loves on you*

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 09:09 pm Title: In and Out

Bill's eyes widened. “You think the monkey covered in my jizz, is sexy?”

it's not often you come across a line like that in a story. just saying.
i loved tom's public pda...and i can't believe bill came all over the monkey!!! too funny. good that he made up with both primate and amphibian...a lizard is an amphibian right? whatever, glad that shit's over.
now let's see what happens with tom's parents...

Author's Response: What can I say...I like to keep things surprising, lol. I'm happy you loved the pda, and yeahhh Bill came all over the monkey. I am also glad that he made up with the creatures. I think that lizards might be reptiles? Damned if I know, though. But, moving on from that. I'm excited for you to see what happens with them! Thank so much for reading :D *hugs*

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 06:17 pm Title: Sweating Balls

lmao I think we're going to go on Wednesday :D! And heck yeah I can't wait to see the prom! -throws Windex in the trash- You're safe :D

Author's Response: I am so very pleased that you're going to see it! :D Thank you for throwing away the Windex. I really appreciate it. lmao. xD

Reviewer: BillaKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 03:52 pm Title: Realizations and Reappearances

WTF MAN!!???!
I'm sooo confused!!!!!!!!!!!!
((on a positive note, I LOVED this fucking chapter))

Author's Response: Haha all shall be revealed very soon! I'm really, really happy that you loved it. Thank you so much! xD

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 02:13 pm Title: Sweating Balls

Gonna comment on the movie before it gets outta my head to answer your question. The movie for me was a hate love thing. I hated the fact they left out and changed SO MUCH, but the battle was bloody brilliant! and yes that would be fun to write and fun for us to read o.o lol and you wouldn't miss all of us that way when this baby goes ;D

Author's Response: They did leave out sooo much. :( And they totally made shit up, too. But, the battle was amazing and I really loved Snape's memories. Overall, I think they did a good job compacting everything together without making it sooo long. Haha I might have to write that at some point ;D I can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter of this one. I'm going to post it soooon.

Reviewer: marydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 12:20 am Title: Realizations and Reappearances

1. Ahhhhhh it's the monkey isn't it!?!?!?!?
2. Harry Potter was amazing! Did you dress up? I was Ginny myself (my bf was Harry naturally).
3. Yay Tom for being brave!!!!!!!
4. I still love this story way too much (it's getting highly addicting)

Author's Response: 1. Maaaaaybe. :D rn2. It was SOOO good. Omg. I have to see it again. I didn't dress up, but my friend did as Fleur Delacour and she was a little celebrity. People kept stopping to get their picture taken with her haha. It was amusing until it seriously interfered with us finding good seats lol. I bet you and your bf looked sooo cute!rn3. Yep!! He's getting brave and learning to not care what people think :Drn4. I couldn't be happier that you love it and I fully support this addiction xD Thank you!!!

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 11:58 pm Title: Chinchilla!

omg the Chinchilla comment. I just...hahahaha omg you're so clever!

Author's Response: Oh how you flatter me haha. Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 11:47 pm Title: Feel Like Making Love

Hope you had frun at the peach festival lol that's so adorable *_*.

And as I'm sure you can anticipate by now :P, I really enjoyed the chapter! It's just too cute! And I literally felt their nervousness/ glee as they felt it.

Author's Response: I really had so much fun at the peach festival haha. Thank youu!!! There were so many good things to eat and random objects to purchase. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. And I am also loooving reading your reviews. You are so sweet to comment on these as you read them. xD

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 11:34 pm Title: My Boyfriend

The growing fluffball that was Bill's hair in this chapter sounds pretty darn adorable.

Author's Response: I wish you could see how I picture it in my head. All I have to do is think about it for a second and it makes me laugh :D xD

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 11:20 pm Title: Love in This Hub

It fascinates me how well you manage to keep up with their mannerisms. Like the whole Bill calling Nat whenever he wants to take a shit thing is so subtle and yet you are attentive enough to tie it into the whole story. That's so cool :3. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: That is so sweet of you to say. I think I keep up with them so well because I've written this story in such a close-together amount of time. And plus, I have a very strange (and typically pretty useless) ability to recall tiny and obscure details haha. I'm really happy you like that, though. Thank you!!

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 10:20 pm Title: Realizations and Reappearances

oh nooo not larry the lizard

Author's Response: Maaaaybe it is ;) But you will have to read and seeee! xD

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