Date: 07/18/11 09:46 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
This is truly one of the most original stories I've read on this site. Your characterization of Bill is perfection. Thanks for giving us a glimpse inside of your literary mind, and I hope to read more from you in the future. Sidebar: I physically shuddered when you mentioned the Urban Decay 'Naked' pallet, because every time I go to the Sephora website to order it, its always sold out. :(
Date: 07/18/11 09:45 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
bitch you made me cry! here i am, laughing my ass off about closet monsters and toots and tom's parents basically knowing all along their son was gay, and then tom has to go and talk to bill's parents like that! damn you! *shakes fist*
as for disney world...since bill is going to be watching disney movies to brush up on his knowledge, i can totally picture him getting into some sort of debate with...i don't know...cinderella or something. something about how cinderella should've just reported her stepmother for keeping a slave when slavery is just so illegal. good idea, don't you think?
Author's Response: *holds hands up in innocence* I didn't realize that part was gonna be saaaad. I'm sorries. But! I am glad that I had you laughing before that! ;D Hahah that is a fantastic idea!! Bill would totally take the Disney movies, too seriously. *files this away* Thank you for sharing that idea with me and I'm sorrrry I made you cryyy. *loves on you*
Date: 07/18/11 09:34 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
LOLOLOLOL!!!! Omg Tom’s parents are the best ever! First, they are so accepting and all which is totally awesome and then this awkward conversation with Tom’s father being gay years ago and his mother asking who tops! That was hilarious, loved it! Oh and I really liked the instant connection between Bill and Tom’s mother, bonding over makeup and eyebrows!
“I guess I just figured she would believe in ghosts, since her son; Mrs. Buttercup, believes in closet monsters,” Bill shot back. HAHAHA Loved that line, Bill you are brilliant!
Omg you made me cry.... this was THE sweetest most adorable line ever. My god, Tom, how can you be so perfect! “Thank you...for bringing Bill into this world,” he whispered. “I promise I'll take care of him and always keep him safe, for you,” he nodded. “I wish I could have met you, Mr. and Mrs. Trumper, but I am so grateful that I have your son in my life,” he licked his lips. “Until next time,” he finished with a small smile, and then went after his Bill.``
I will stop quoting my favourite parts now! Haha AWESOME chapter, seriously, I can’t believe this fic is almost over =O I’m gonna miss it, a lot. I can’t wait to read about them at Disney tho! *hugs you and the story in a group hug!*
Author's Response: Haha I'm really glad you liked the interaction between Bill, and Tom's parents!! And I always think that if I met Bill, I would ask him about his make up lol. I wouldn't be able to resist. Yaaay I'm happy you loved Bill's line. It was quite a zinger! And I didn't even realize when I wrote that part, that it would affect anyone. But that makes me sigh and smile that you loved that part, and thank you so much for saying that it was sweet. :D And I am delighted that you quoted your favorite parts!! Thank you sooooo very much! I'm really excited for you to read about Disney ;) *welcomes you into the hug and snuggles up*
Date: 07/18/11 09:33 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
You can bite me all you want to, Mrs. Buttercup.
Author's Response: I'll totally do it. *wiggles eyebrows* xD
Date: 07/18/11 09:31 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
hiiiiii long long time since i commented. finally back..and wow...almost over already??? *cries*...this is the first story i EVER read that has no drama...like...someone cheating or anything...it was a LONG story of a love that kept building...it's the kind of story that makes my heart soar. :)
it will be sad to see this story done. i wish it was an "never ending story" xD
this is DEF. going to be put in my favorites and i will continue to re-read for years to come :D
by the way congrats on the top 50 most reviewed stories!...out of thousands out there...and for ur first story?? amazing!!!
i teared up when Tom spoke to Bills parents...that was beyond sweet. It honestly touched my heart, and just all of it makes me smile. i wish there was a movie about this lol xD
love you!!! *hugs you super duper tight*
-your biggest fan.
Author's Response: *waves and bounces* Hi!! So happy you're here! First of all...I smiled the entire way through reading this review. If your goal was to make me smile so hard that my cheeks hurt, you accomplished it. Thank you so much for making me feel like that. And I am so happy that I could write you a drama-free story. I always dread that point in a book, or a movie, where something has to go wrong...and I just didn't want to instill any dread in you guys. Because sometimes stories really should just be happy. :D And I'm so pleased that you're putting this in your favorites! Thank you sooo much for the congrats. I am totally blown away that my story has gotten this much positive feedback, and just so thankful for it. That touches MY heart, that Tom's words spoke to you like that. Ohhh if there was a movie...I can only imagine what people would have to say about Bill's monster in his pants. lol. But seriously, thank you so much for reading and sharing this wonderful review with me. I appreciate it so much. So much love for you :D *hugs back so tight*
Date: 07/18/11 09:28 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
This is truly one of the most original stories I've read on this site. Your characterization of Bill is perfection. Thanks for giving us a glimpse inside of your literary mind, and I hope to read more from you in the future. Sidebar: I physically shuttered when you mentioned the Urban Decay 'Naked' pallet, because everytime I go to the Sephora website to order it, its always sold out. :(
Author's Response: You have flattered me sooo much with this review. I am so pleased to hear that this was original to you and that you enjoyed my characterization of Bill. I would be honored if you read the other things that I post. Thank you so much. Ohhh goodness. I got the LAST one, at Sephora the other day! I just lucked out. It's amaaaazing. I really hope you can find one, soon. Btw, I am so happy that you knew what I was talking about. :D I like you immediately, for your good taste in make up. Well, and also this sweet review. Thank you :D
Date: 07/18/11 09:18 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
If I could favorite a single chapter it would be this one. I laughed so much at the start of this I got a headache. XD
Author's Response: This review was sweet and perfectly sized, like my favorite candy. Seriously this made me smile so much. Thank you. I'm so happy you loved the chapter and it made you laugh so much. :D
Date: 07/18/11 09:16 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
*squeal*
Bill hiding under the sink and tooting was fantastic! I love how Bill and Tom's mom went crazy over makeup with each other and dad was gay! LOL!
They totally should have had tree fort sex and the ghost be real. That would have been funny.
Tom's ring tone... epic!
Can't want for the Disney trip.
O.o I want Bill to top!!!
Author's Response: *bounces* Yay! I'm happy you found the toots funny! I laughed quite hard at that, myself. lol. And yup. Bill totally clicked with the parents. haha. Only he could pull that off, I think. I know...you know how I feel about this. I should have put in the tree house sex. Yay for ring tone and Disney!!! And girl, I know you dooo. We'll see what I can do. :D Thank youuu!!!
Date: 07/18/11 09:14 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
OMG FIRST AND FOR MOST BILL FARTED! Not only once but twice :D Also I loved how Tom's parents actually loved him no matter what sex is was in love with. And I also wanted to say that when Tom's mom calls them toots is too funny..I couldn't stop laughing my stomach hurt....LOL Also I was please with Tom finally going to the grave site for Bill and being there like the good boyfriend that he is. And when Tom chased the meannie kids was great. Gotta love that. Also I am glad that everything is working out for them like I wanted it for you and this wonderful story. I am sad for Wednesday because its coming to an end. But hopefully this won't be the end for you to be writing if not then I can not wait to see what other stories you will have next :D as always don't be biting to hard ;). And as I said lots of love sent your way for this amazing and great chater and awesome story in all its interty :D Great going hun.
Author's Response: Hahahah!! He totally did! At the most inopportune of times, too! I am sooo glad that this made you laugh so much. The word "toot" just makes me giggle. I am delighted that you enjoyed this chapter so much, and that you like the way that everything has ended up for them. You are so sweet for saying that. This is definitely not the last thing I'm going to post! I would miss you all too much to stop writing. And I will only bite, gently ;) Thank you sooo very much for the love and the compliments. Loves you back and I hope you like the next chapter!! :D
Date: 07/18/11 09:11 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
LoL you have no idea how much I laughed when Bill farted in the bathroom XD Aww thats so sad that there is only one chapter left :'( But I know that the last chapter will be epic :3
Author's Response: Haha I am so glad that it made you laugh. I felt like an idiot, but I was totally laughing when I typed that. I'm going to make the last chapter soooo good for you. I swear it. Thank you so much for reading my story and sharing your thoughts with me!! xD
Date: 07/18/11 08:55 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
Ok this story has been weird, with Bill and his strange conversations and personality but Oh My God!!! I love this story it has the right amount of weirdness and... It's Almost OVER?!!! D:
Author's Response: This story has been so very weird, indeed...but I am SO glad that you enjoyed the weirdness that's in it. I'm just sooo happy that you love this :D And yes...there is only one chapter left...but I'll post one-shots and other things with these boys. I promise! I really hope you enjoy the next chapter! And thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. :D
Date: 07/18/11 03:27 pm Title: In and Out
HOLY CRAP!!!! I think this is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I almost choked laughing so many times. The monkey is one of my favorite things about this story. That...and the mentioning of Harry Potter. Love you for writing this. :D
Author's Response: Noooo way! Thank you soooo much! I'm seriously smiling so big right now, because of your review. I'm glad you liked the monkey times haha. And I already love you, for talking about Harry Potter. :D I'm so glad that this has made you laugh so much. Nothing delights me more, than that. Thank you tons for reading and enjoying this! xD
Date: 07/18/11 11:09 am Title: In and Out
oh dear tom's in a bit of shit XDi can't wait for the next chapter :D i really reallly love this :')
Author's Response: Hello, love!! He certainly is in a bit of a bind, lol. But, I just posted the next chapter and I can't wait for you to see what happens. I'm so so happy that you love this. Thank you so much!! :D
Date: 07/18/11 09:35 am Title: Sweating Balls
The gift to leave a room and have everyone smiling behind me. Hell yes I have it. I'm fucking amazing like that. being a creepy old man with a monkey is creepy. And yessss, Harry was AMAZING, and I'm going to see it again today :D And haha naaah, in a small town like this not very many people did. In fact, it was only those two little girls who did.. I WANTED to wear my dragon costume but my friend was like "Nuh, Kidd, you be kidd and not dragon." Wanted to smack her across the face with my awesome. Aaaannndddd, Surprises are surprising so so so I be excited. kloveyoumorebye.
Author's Response: It's just a really good gift to have. I mean, everyone likes someone that makes them smile. I'm just lucky to have such a gifted person like you, around :D<---- Cuz it makes me do that. A lot. And I like to do that. You lucky girl, you. Seeing Harry again, already. YOU HAVE A DRAGON COSTUME? I think that sounds really fucking amazing. But being you is deffff even more amazing than being a dragon. I hopes you likes the surprises that I have for youuu in the new chap. I have just posted it. #loveyoutopieces
Date: 07/18/11 04:27 am Title: In and Out
Nice to come back and find i have a lot to catch up on and i kno i ain't the only one. So alot of crap has gone on and i can totally just mulch it up and absorb the love of it all. I give high props to my main man Tom for coming out and nothing says coming out like car sex and a good snog in front of a crowd. The monkey actually did scare me as imaging it with bedroom eyes sorta makes me not want to look at a monkey for some time lol. Larry the lizard should have his own facebook page with the epic like button that can be repressed whenever. I also would love to put Bill in a snowglobe so that when i shake it he dances as he is too cute to let go. Toms parents finding out may not be a shock at...as if they love his son they may accept it, or not. As for the Harry Potter i was bawling my eyes out and the tears didn't stop when i got home either. Its like my childhood has finally ended, but i now shall watch out for the dvd....WEEEEEEEEE!!! Even if this is coming to an end, it is also a good thing as to see this complete =] till the next update my love!
Author's Response: Yaaaay! I was missing you! :D I'm so happy that you're back. Indeed, a lot did happen in the last several chapters and I'm glad you got all caught up! And it's true, there's nothing quite like coming out by having car sex and making out in front of a bunch of people. Haha. The monkey scares me, too. lol. I believe that Larry would really appreciate his own facebook page! He would post many pictures of himself, with his wings in various colors. We should definitely put Bill in a snow globe. I think that I would probably shake that up and watch it for hours, easily. haha. I just posted the next chapter so you can see how Tom's parents reacted :D And ohhhhh goodness, I looooved Harry Potter and I cried, too! We will just have to reread the books and watch the movies, over and over, to keep our childhoods alive! Thank you soooo much, love. I'm really happy that I could finish this for you guys, and that you are enjoying it! xD
Date: 07/17/11 10:05 pm Title: In and Out
OMG ! LOL at Bill coming all over the poor monkey!
Great closure on both the crazy animals in this chapter! Especially liked the Larry one! Bill is just so awesome!
YAY for Tom coming out to his friends! I'm so proud of him! He really loves his Bill, awwww!
I must say that the ending with Bill riding Tom was really fucking hot!
Oh oh, the parents! Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: That pooor monkey, lol. I'm glad you liked the closure though!! He totally came right out to his friends. He just can't help the love that's flowing out of him. :D Happy to hear that you found the ending hot. I quite enjoyed picturing it, myself. ;) I cannot wait for you to read the next chapter! It's a looong one and I hope you enjoy it. And hey, thank you so much for getting caught up and reviewing as you went along. I truly appreciate that. :D *hugs you again cuz I want to*
Date: 07/17/11 10:02 pm Title: Realizations and Reappearances
Omg, the conversation in the beginning with Bill and the hat man was SO funny and weird, LOVED it!
LoL at the HArry Potter reference! I went to the midnight showing and it was amazing! Can't believe this series is over, it makes me really sad... My sister was dressed up as Dobby and it was hilarious, seems like a Bill thing to do!
Congratz on the 1000 + reviews! You totally deserve all the love this story is getting and more!
Author's Response: I am pleased that you found that funny haha. Thank you! And ohhhhh my gosh, I am soo sad that Harry Potter is over. But I'll just have to reread the books and fall in love all over again. And that is SOOO hilarious that your sister dressed up as Dobby. It totally does seem like something Bill would do haha. I love that. And thank you sooo much for the congrats. I am so excited and happy about it. You are so sweet to say that. Thank you!! =) *huuuugs*
Date: 07/17/11 09:59 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Hahaha! Bill overreacting about his zit was so funny! And the Windex thing too! Bill and Tom text or phone conversation are always entertaining.
Pool sex! Another hot hot hot chapter ! LOVED the last paragraph, it's beautiful how much Tom loves his Bill!
Author's Response: Haha yes. Overreacting Bill, strikes again! I'm glad the Windex made you laugh ;p And I have so much fun writing phone scenes with the two of them. Especially with the all caps that Bill insists on using lol. Yay pool sex!! Eeeek. Glad you liked it, and that you loved the last paragraph! Thank you so very much, darling. :D
Date: 07/17/11 09:56 pm Title: Chinchilla!
I'm back I'm back! I missed reviewing this fic! I had a crazy week plus my Wi-Fi decided to stop working for no reason but now I'm here =D
This chapter was so adorable and sexy! Shower sex really is awesome and you write it so well! Especially loved the part where Tom was washing Bill, so sensual =P
I like how comfortable they are together and how Bill is still is hilarious self. I think that Tom accepting all of Bill weirdness and loving him the way he is, is the most beautiful proof of is love. Anyways, love this chapter and I'm glad to be backkkk !
Author's Response: *squeals* Yaaaay! I'm so delighted that you're back. I was missing you, girl! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and found the shower sex, sexy :D I'm happy that you can feel how comfortable they are with each other and that you like how Tom and Bill are with each other. That makes me very happy. And I'm really sorry you had a crazy week, but I'm just really pleased to have you here, now! Thanks so much! *hugs*
Date: 07/17/11 08:00 pm Title: In and Out
Thats riiight, they did forget to meantion the significance of the cup didnt they? They pretty much left everything out about why the items used for Horcruxes were used... I kind of overlooked it because I know, but I would imagine anyone who didn't actually read the books would be confused about why Harry would think it was an item of Ravenclaws...
Yea, I was hoping you had more fics up your sleeve for us to read soon. I will most definately check your stuff out.
Author's Response: Indeed, they did! I was really hoping they would have gone into Dumbldore's past as well. That part of the book was really intriguing and it left Harry in doubt about who Dumbledore really was, and it really didn't express that in the movie. *sighs* But I'll probably see it again soon, anyway lol. I just love me some Harry Potter. And yeaaaah girl. You know I can't just leave you guys hanging. I like you all, too much. Especially you ;D