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Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 02:05 pm Title: Sweating Balls

reading the last chapter makes me too upset about it being over, but thanks for writing this it was amazing, kbye (my attempt at one of bill's abrupt goodbyes you see!)

Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked it enough to miss it :D Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it so much. That makes me smile sooo big xD And your attempt was perfect ;) K bye!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 01:40 pm Title: The Lizard Whisperer

I hope Bill tells Tom soon about his parents. Great chapter!

Author's Response: He definitely will...very soon :D Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 05:38 am Title: Sweating Balls

Aww Yay :D I really can't wait to see what else you post :D But hey as long as you post I don't care :D And I'm not gunna respond to anything else because now I'm going to go spam you over twitter >D!

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 02:19 am Title: Sweating Balls

Oh wifeyyy, my reviews always outshine the last; I always have more time to think over the amazingness of your stories and and and so I can make the review that much more amazing. My silly reviews mean the world to you?! xD that makes me soo happy!! AND TOTALL RANDOM BUT I FINISHED THAT DRAWING I TOLD YOU I WOULD MAKE. MY SCANNER BROKE THOUGH. SO. ONCE IT IS FIXED. I WILL SHOW YOU. Mkay. back to the subject. I love your nonsense, coz it's the most sensical and amazing nonsense I have ever been told. it makes me happy (: I like the lovin'. lots. Yessss, get all up in mah pocket baby, extra cozyyy~ Awww, I'm glad I can make you feel special, and I'm so so so thrilled that you're tickled PINK (hehe, Tom's bathroom) Dude. I won a poetry contest in grade 2 as well. It was about War. I was fucking deep, even as a seven year old. My only gift is that I have you to make me the happiest person ever :) *insert cheesy crowd "awwwww"ing here* and hon, you DO make me smile a helluva lot more than I make you smile, I bet. No problem, love! and and and yesssss, I saw. Ima respond ASAP.
ILOVEYOUMOREKTHXBYE!

Author's Response: You're just always outshining. You're just a very shiny individual, I think. I love shiny things!! OHHHH!!! I cannot wait to see that drawing. I shall be hoping that your scanner is fixed very soon. You are just so good to me :D I am SO tickled pink like Tom's bathroom :D Haha. It really is cozy here in your pocket. I liiiikkes it a lot. Dude...we should probably write poetry together. It would be beautifully perverted and epic. I love our gifts. Being happy is the best thing ever. ILOVEYOUTOPIECESLOLKBAI! <----I hope you can decipher that...lol

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 11:12 pm Title: My Boyfriend

Peach festival? What the actual fuck? Hahaha sorry but yea, this is my exact expression! o.O

What Kiran said was the immediate thought in my head lol! I love that Tom took the trouble to find out how to prep a guy esp since Bill is a virgin though really, I'm sure Bill would have been more than happy to errr show him the way ;D

Can't wait for the deep dicking! *shifty* I DID NOT SAY THAT OUT LOUD.

Author's Response: Look...it was really fun, k? And I mean, I like peaches! haha. In all seriousness though, it was pretty fucking stupid. But the people I went with, made it fun. But yeah, peach festivals are pretty pointless. And Kiran speaks the thoughts that I believe I would say in a lot of situations lol. You know that Bill would have been SO happy to instruct dear Tom. And he would have done it in the most awkward and uncomfortable way, possible. lol. YOU CERTAINLY DID! And I could not be more pleased that you said that! haha. I hopes you likes iiiit :D

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 11:02 pm Title: Sweating Balls

Yes! I'm Lov'n it :3

Author's Response: Yay!! I am so very glad :D

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 10:17 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

This was such a random story and I loved it!! I don't think a story has ever made me laugh so hard! With all the hiliarity in it, the story in itself was wonderful. I loved the relationship between Bill and Tom and how things turned out between them. Awkward, weird, Bill is definitely one of my favourite characters.

I honestly wasn't sure if I was going to like this story but I really, really did. You are a wonderful writer and I cannot wait to read more of your stories!

Author's Response: First of all, YOU are such a beautiful writer. I love the way you write, and I am so flattered that you feel that way about me! I am so pleased that you took a chance on this story and read it. I know that it isn't what it seems to be, at all. It's just so...weird and random lol. I am so happy you loved it but most of all; I'm thrilled that it made you laugh so much and that you were able to enjoy the story line and characters, even amidst all of the insanity. Thank you so much for reading this and sharing your thoughts :D I truly hope you like what I have next!

Reviewer: FFlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 01:26 pm Title: Tom's Secret Fear

This is really a detailed story, been loveing it from the start and cant stop reading XD

Author's Response: I am sooo happy to hear that you've been loving it! I truly hope that you enjoy the rest of the chapters. Just, thank you so much for giving this a chance :D That makes me smile so big.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 01:25 pm Title: Sweating Balls

Thank you sweety! And if you have twitter, look me up. I am pimping workout all the time.

Twatter: SouthernAngelth

Author's Response: You are so very welcome! And you really do that?? *blushes and sighs* You are so sweet. And! I do have a twitter but my family and friends(who don't care about Tokio Hotel....*scoffs*) follow me on it. SO! I have just made another one, specifically to talk to all of you amazing people :D And I have two tweets so far and am not following anyone, and no one is following me, yet! haha. I literally just made it and it's looking soooo bare and lonely. I'mma follow you! Oh and mine is: twitter.com/mohanrocks89 xD

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 10:11 am Title: Love in This Hub

So much love like bunny snuggles!!! *coos and pets fic*

I have no problem with body functions lol. Scarred OH for life when I walked in on him on the toilet 3 days after we met and nonchalantly brushed my teeth while he gaped at me. I do remember some yelling and I told him not to be silly. Several weeks later he was used enough to it that I could stand next to him, cuddle his head and chat hahaha!!!

Author's Response: I just looove bunny snuggles! *smiles and awws while you pet fic* Okay...this whole you making me laugh out loud with your anecdotes, thing? I'm loving it. You are hilarious. You cuddled his head and had a chat while he was on the toilet!! Haha. I could hug you, right now. I'm gonna. *hugs* There. I did it. I regret nothing.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 09:58 am Title: The Hat

Aww, poor fat man at the gym, lol. Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: Haha! He and Bill are going to make amends in a later chapter, so do not worry! Thank you sooo much, love!

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 09:45 am Title: Trading Secrets

Ok.. I'm emotionally drained so I'm gonna do what I normally do and ignore it...

Secret..... Not so much a secret since most people who know me IRL know this and even some of my friends in fandom since I don't hide it ;-) I am bisexual. Yes, married to a man but still absolutely and totally bi.

What's your favourite ToHo song from the Humanoid album and why? ;D

The eyes sweating caused me to find something in my own eyes :( It's an excuse someone I know gives and i'm really missing him right now.

Great chapter. Emotional yet the playfulness isn't out of place either. Simply wonderful ♥

Author's Response: I know that this chapter was pretty heavy..and a stark contrast from the others. But I'm really glad that you enjoyed it even with all of the sad talk. And I feel you on the whole ignoring it thing...although if you ever want to talk my ear off (or I guess type my eyes out), I'm a realllly good listener/....reader? haha. Just sayinnn. And I think that's amazing that you are so open about that! I'm one of those people that always has a foot in the closet because I only date guys, but I think women are soooo beautiful. Everything about them. And if an amazing girl came along and I fell in love...I wouldn't say no, you know? Thanks for sharing that with meee :D And that's fanfuckingtastic that your husband is cool with it, too. Ummm I like Phantomrider because it's really pretty and full of emotion, and I like Down on You...because it is dirty. And I like dirty things. Aww...I hope that you get to talk to your eye-sweating friend, soon. He sounds like good people. Just like you. :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! I really am.

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 08:32 am Title: Our Hub

Ugh.. I actually did think to myself maybe Bill isn't like me after all because if i'd been confronted by Larry at the front door I would have hauled ass out of there so fast you wouldn't have time to finish saying Tokio Hotel.

They love each other! Looooooooooove each other. Despite the puke and the damn lizard. They looooooooooove each other! Ok apologies, feeling a little high from pain meds. You did a real number on my ribs lol. Not complaining because you sorta helped me poke a toe out of the funk i'm in.

Someone called me "baby girl" earlier this week. Well, i'm sure he said "baby gurl" lol. The feelings that come about from hearing for the first time someone calling you an endearment and the sincerity behind the affection. You made me recall that in this chapter and it made my heart smile.

And btw, if I haven't said this before, I love Kiran! She is awesome!

Author's Response: He wanted to haul ass...he really did. But his love for Tom gave him the power to fight off the little bastard. But honestly, I woulda been outta there in a hot second. No matter who was waiting for me inside lol. Because, screw lizards. SO MUCH LOOOOOOVE in this chapter!! Yaaaay. And you should never apologize for talking to me about love. I LOVE, LOVE!! But again, sorry about the ribs ; / *gives some ice* Nothing like a good high from pain meds, though. And I'm just so happy that I could bring you out of your funk, a little bit. Truly. That really is suuuuch a great feeling. When someone calls you a sweet nickname for the first time...except for the time I had an ex boyfriend call me Kir Bear....like Care Bear...and my name is Kirsten. I wasn't having that. I'm not a damn bear! But yes, pet names are the sweetest...usually. I am sooo pleased that you love Kiran! I've always wanted a family member like her...and so I guess I was just fulfilling my wish by writing a character like her. ;)

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 08:07 am Title: Small Word, Big Deal

My heart is not functional at the moment. It's just a pile of lumpy goo. That's actually quite a gross visual *frowns* but you know what I mean!

I don't understand how this is happening lol. The same thing happened to me! The farts! Geezes.. we'd been together just over 2 weeks and was about to get married in a few days and I was napping in his bed while he did homework. According to him, I farted in my sleep, TWICE! And he said it took extreme effort not to laugh out loud cos he didn't want to wake me and then he spent the rest of the hour before I woke up staring at me, willing me to wake up cos he wanted to kiss me senseless for being so adorable. MY HUSBAND IS CRAZY. I was absolutely mortified when he told me about it when I woke up. But yeah... I completely forgot about that till this!

You are sooooooo crazy and I love it! ♥

Author's Response: Not gross. In fact, hearts that have turned into a pile of lumpy goo, are actually quite endearing to me. They are! You are Bill!! Hahah. The fact that he found your sleep farts adorable, just means that he is absolutely the one for you. That is sooo fucking funny and cute. If him accepting your farts is crazy...then crazy is the best thing ever, haha. And yes, I am crazy/weird/random/perverted/and quite happy about all of the aforementioned things. Lol. I'm reallly happy that you love it!

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 07:00 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

AWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO SWEET AND WONDERFUL!!! haha I felt the need to type like Bill for a minute.

You're story was so much fun and awesome to read. It made me feel better after a long day of work, kind of like my mini rehab.

I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future! You're an awesome writer with insanely good ideas.

Thanks for an amazing story!

Author's Response: I LOVE THAT YOU TYPED LIKE BILL!!!! Seriously though, thank you soooo much for this incredible review. I can't express how happy that makes me that my story made you feel better after long days. That truly makes me all warm and fuzzy inside :D And I love to be warm and fuzzy!! Thank you for the compliments on my writing, and I would be thrilled if you read more of my stuff :D Writing this was such a pleasure and thank YOU for reading it and enjoying it!! xD

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 05:24 am Title: The Lizard Whisperer

Awwwww poor Tom :-(

Author's Response: *nods sadly* I know it. He needs a lot of cyber hugs, I think. Care to share some of yours with him?

Reviewer: chaoticminds Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 04:27 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

oh my god im crying to hard atm!!!
its over!!! nooooooo!!!
i love the story, i love u for writing it! oh god i cant wait to hear more about the boys...maybe a little about Tom's bottom experience if he has 1???? *hopeful look*
anyway, cant wait for more of ur amazing work...talk soon xxx

Author's Response: Oh nooo! You must not cry. I am so happy that you've been a reader and that you offered to make me such a kick ass banner :D You are absolutely delightful. Thank you for loving this story and telling me that you do And yes!! I am 100% going to write a chapter about that...hehe. I'm excited to write it, too! Thank you so much! I hope you like what I post next, love. xD

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 04:11 am Title: Sweating Balls

*snuggles in to your arms like the good little wifey I am and gets ready to reply to this amazing response*
I honestly don't think my review expressed my love for you and this story as much as it should have, just saying. And I'm happy that you think that! It really makes me so happy that my silly reviews mean so much to you! I'm smiling right now, but I really just kinda wanna cry. You're too amazing. This story was too amazing and I cannot express my love enough. For both you and the story. It's overwhelming. HELL YES YOU'RE MAH FAVOURITE. Gurl, I had dat space in mah pocket since I started reading this beast. GET ON IN THERE, YA HEAR?! (how are we both going to be in each others pockets at the same time?) Mohan better love me, I'm the mother of his future puppy-wife thing. To be frank, I don't think I did a good enough job telling you about how amazing your writing is. I blame tiredness. ANYPOODLE, what I TRULY think about you writing about love.. I just think you use all the right words in the right ways. You don't over-dramaticise it, and you don't downplay it. You describe it just right. You write down what everyone else feels, and do it amazingly so. I know this is a story, but with your words and such I can't help but think it's more poetic than anything I've ever read; including poetry. I'M SORRY I MELTED YOUR HEART! Want me to put it in my freezer of love (sounds dirty) and solidify it again? And of COURSE I'll enjoy the other things you write, because even if it's not my favourite genre or whatever, it will still be amazingly written and filled with wit, love, and all that other good shit. You're very very very welcome for everything you have thanked me for, although you deserve it all, so I'm just being a good person by telling the truth :D I like my gift. my gift makes me happy, coz it's making you happy. That's an amazing gift. Actually, I'm pretty sure you have the same gift, coz no matter what you always make me so happy ^^

Author's Response: Ohhhhh baby girl. This review was even more amazing than the last, and I don't even know how you did that. I didn't think it was possible. And your silly reviews mean the world to me! Honestly. And don't cryyyyy! *wipes your tears* You are so amazing, and I'm not going anywhere! I'm gonna stick around and respond to your reviews with my nonsense, as always. And I'm just gonna keep on lovin' you. All day and night long! *winks* OH! I have my very own space in your pocket? I'mma hop in it. I'm gonna!! *snuggles into pocket with a sigh* Mohan DOES love you. How could he not? Welp, there's no point in putting my haeart in your freezer of love...because it just melted even more when I read what you said about my writing. You make me feel sooo special. Those were such beautiful things to say to me. Thank you. It was so important to me in this story, that even with all of the chaos and absurdity around the characters, that the relationships and the feelings...seemed genuine. So thank you so much for saying that. I am tickled PINK that you think it is poetic. I actually won a poetry contest when I was in the 2nd grade. I got to read that shit on a public broadcasting TV station...LOL. It was a poem about the sunset btw..because I just know you were wondering...(not). Your gift is the best of all gifts. It really is. Anything that makes me feel this good, has to be a gift sent from above. And if I have the gift...it must just be a fraction of yours. No way could I make you smile more than you make me smile. :D Thank you sooo much, love. Btw, I just responded to your email that I was so very happy and pleased to get! Yay! ILOVEYOUKBYE

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 02:29 am Title: The Hat

I could discern innuendo in the most innocuous of statements! Man I love your Bill. That seems kinda narcissistic though but meh! I don't care ;-) And totes agree about the snack bar. Packaged food over 'fresh' anyday. Poor bb Tom :-(

Author's Response: That right there, is a very special talent. You should be very proud of yourself!! And I am sooo pleased that you love my Bill. And the fact that he reminds you of yourself, just makes me think that you have to be entirely awesome. Definitely. Snack bars are just so very risky, k? Too many bad experiences with those things. And yeaahhh...poor little sicky Tom.

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 02:17 am Title: Exclusive Pass

This whole chapter is like a nice little memory that's been brought to the fore in my head ;-) Butt massages rock.....and so does come lol.

I always wondered, would it be called komm? Maybe that's what Bill was secretly singing about XD

Author's Response: I'm happy to do whatever you need, to bring nice images and memories to your mind :D And I concur with your thoughts on butt massages and come. Fully agree. And HMMM....possibly, yes!! That certainly changes the meaning of Bill's words...haha...I need to find a German person and ask them that. I don't care how awkward of a question it is; I'm gonna ask it. *nods*

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