Date: 07/26/11 02:27 am Title: Sweating Balls
Heehee this story makes me giggle! I love it!
Author's Response: I LOVE that it makes you giggle! Thank you sooo much!! :D
Date: 07/26/11 02:20 am Title: Love in This Hub
Aww this chapter was just about as sweet as the last XD And Im so happy that Bill is planning on going to visit his parents. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm sooo happy you found it sweet! Have I mention how awesome you are? I love getting your reviews!! I really hope you like the next chapter!! :D Can't wait to hear what you think.
Date: 07/25/11 10:19 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Well, it's a little sad to see this go, but it sure as hell went out with a BANG :D And that's awesome.
The Disney World trip was frickin ridiculous, though I mean that in a nice way XD But geez, those employees sure were heinously unprofessional D: I can scarcely believe ppl would act like that in real life.
I'll be looking forward to reading your next!
Author's Response: Hey you! I'm was really happy to see this review :D I'm glad you thought it went out with a bang! It was such a loooong chapter, huh? The Disney trip was pretty crazy, indeed. And oh hell, if employees actually acted like that in real life...I doubt it would be the happiest place on earth haha. But you know, when Bill's around, the unthinkable seems to become reality. I really hope you like me next story!!! Thank you soo much for reading this one!
Date: 07/25/11 03:27 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
*HUGS* Awe, that was a fucking perfect ass ending. I'm so happy. Haha, I love what they said to the characters. My favorite was, "Mommy, what does Mickey do under Minnie's skirt??" I was dyingggg. Hah, plane sex. Then they run into the same fucker. God, long ass chapter. I am definitely bound to leave shit out! Fuck))): Haha I love Tom at then end where he sums up the whole summer. Pssssh, Bill is the awkward animal attractor, not Tom. haha what a fucking goof ball!!! I'm so sad this is over because it was a great story. Add story to favorites, here I come:DDDD
Author's Response: *squeezes you tiiiigggghhhht* I'm sooo happy that you loved it!! And...CONGRATS ON REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER!! *throws confetti and gives you peaches* I love you. It was such a long chapter lol. I'm proud of you for making it through. Bill is still so oblivious about what the hell is up lol. I'm just so happy that you decided to read this story, even though you're not a slash girl ;) And I'm also so happy that you're back!! Thank you so much, girl. For every single sweet review, and for just being you. LOVE YOU!
Date: 07/25/11 02:10 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Oh Tom! Despite my frustration, it's realistic. It's sad that if a girl comes out as bi, it's hot but if a guy does, he gets crap for it. Double standards prevail and really pisses me off. I guess that's why I do what I do. I try and fix what I can in my own little sphere of influence.
And Bill! Hahahaha in light of what I told you last night, are you convinced now that your Bill is really me? Lol! XD Well, I wouldn't believe everything on wikipedia though I do have a chinchilla of my own sometimes haha! ;D
Author's Response: That double standard in particular; sucks. I wish it weren't so, either. And I'm glad you do what you do. Every person can make a little bit of a difference, and that equals out to a greater whole when you add everyone up, together. I am quite convinced that my Bill and you are two peas in a pod!! But I mean...if you'd let me sometimes, i'd be happy to be in that pod. Pea pods can hold three peas!! Haha I had a chinchilla last week. It was an asshole. And wikipedia is full of a lot of accurate, but also a lot of false, info. It's hard to tell what's right and wrong on that sight...*shifty*
Date: 07/25/11 08:13 am Title: Chinchilla!
My tummy hurts! It hurts! Lol. Well, my tummy and my ribs. Bill's internal dialogue is so fucking hilarious and so inappropriate and potentially such a mood killer I can't even... Horse shit? Really? Lol! And likening it to constipation. Omg I died. Mainly because it's a pretty accurate description hahaha. But I don't think I've ever seen someone voice it like that before XD
Author's Response: Oh noes!! Sorry for making your tummy and ribs hurt. I can...kiss them better? *wiggles eyebrows* His internal dialogue is the worst mood killer...EVER. Haha. And you know it's an accurate description. But one that people totally shy away from lol. xD But I go there. Oh yes, I go there.
Date: 07/25/11 02:26 am Title: Sweating Balls
Oh my god. This story is absolutly incredible. I loved everthing that I read. This story had me bursting into giggle fits many times. I also loved the serrious part of their relationship. The romance made my heart flutter like the little hopeless romantic that I am. I cant get over how much i loved this story and i dont think i could express it. It really is one of the best stories I've read on here. :)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for leaving me this incredibly sweet review. I can't even express how happy it makes me to hear how much you enjoyed all of the different parts of the story. You have complimented me greatly. Thank you so much for making me smile :D I'm so glad to hear from you!
Date: 07/25/11 12:53 am Title: Trading Secrets
*grabs tissue* You got me tearing up here! I'm happy Bill opened up to Tom and vice versa. This was a very sweet chapter.
Author's Response: You made it to the big reveal!! I'm sorry it made you cry, but I am glad that you liked how they opened up to each other. Thank you sooo much :D
Date: 07/25/11 12:01 am Title: Our Hub
Is there really a type of lizard like Larry? lol, that be pretty terrifying. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. XD
Author's Response: Hahah oh goodnes, I hope not!! I really hope not. *shudders* Yay I just saw that you commented on the next chapter. I shall go and reply!!
Date: 07/24/11 11:36 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
Girllll, you had me going to the bathroom constantly. I'd read some and almost piss myself. I'd go to the bathroom, come back, read more, almost pee myself, go to the bathroom, come back and so on so forth. Lmfao when my brother was younger he put on a dress, sandals, and a little tiara. Lmfao toots. That was random. haha I picture poor little Bill(Awe, I remember that show)! being stuck in the cabinet with his toots. Anyways, back to my brother. I'm not afraid he's gay because this girl asked him out. He goes, "I don't care. Just don't tell anyone." lmfao so he's on the bus ready to come home from school and this other girl sits next to him on the bus. His girlfriend punches the girl in the stomach. My brother goes, "Oh my God. I can't date you. You're a psycho!" Hahah she didn't get that he broke up with her. So my sis and me went down to her house and explained to her they weren't dating anymore. haha I love this story so fucking much. And I wasn't supposed to read this chapter just yet, but I couldn't help myself! Don't shoot me!
Author's Response: I would NEVER shoot you for reading my story!! Or for anything for that matter. Never!! Hahaha I'm thrilled that this made you laugh so much. I have to pee right now, actually. Hmmm. Toots. Yes, toots. Ohhhh yeah Little Bill Cosby lol. I forgot about that! Hahahha you tell the best stories. I love you. I DO. And ooohhhh my gosh thank you for loving this story. One chapter left for you to read!!
Date: 07/24/11 10:42 pm Title: In and Out
Oh my God. You had me laughing the whole fucking time. Larry and virgin blood how fucking funny!!!!! Then fucking Lester being cum covered. Holy shit too much happened! Tom is finally out of the closet. Fuuuuuck. I reallyyy want to go onto the next chapter now. But I have to go write more. Dammit. Lmfao oh well. I am fucking cute. Shiiit. Haha maybe I'll get my sis to use the windex xD Oh, when I first heard this song, I died of laughter. Plus, it made me think of you. And now it's stuck in my head. Stupidest. Funniest. Song. Ever.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Cs8G_mY8jE
Author's Response: I am positively delighted that you were laughing the whole time!! That was a crazy ass chapter, lol. HE CAME OUT!! Yaaay. And Lester and Larry are no longer an issue haha. You only have two chapters left! But they are pretty damn long lol. Dude, totally get your sister to try it out for us haha. And you'd better believe that I thought about that song the ENTIRE time I was at the peach festival hahaha. Seriously stupid and funny. Yay! You're so close to the end!! I can't wait for you to reaaaad it. :D
Date: 07/24/11 08:34 pm Title: Realizations and Reappearances
“Yeah, maybe sometime,” Tom nodded quickly, looking strained.
“Do you have to poop right now or something?” Bill questioned. "Because it's totally cool if you do. Believe me, I understand,"
Lmfaooo that up there ^^^ is fucking hilarious. I laughed. And laughed. And fucking laughed. Lmfaoooo them arguing who is the girl then Bill wanting Tom to do the scary thing. Hi-fucking-larious. Let's seeeee. So much went down and I know I'm leaving stuff out. I'm glad Stacey isn't being a bitch about Tom and Bill..OMG IS THE LIZARD BACKKKK?!?!?!?!? haha I guess I'll see then. Try the windex and let me know how that goes(;
Btw, every time Tom tells Bill to put his hands against something it reminds me of when my dad gave us baths as kids. He would go, "Put your hands on the wall!" So we would stand there with our back to him so he could wash our backs as he asks "Where were you.." then he would finish with the day you were born. Like for me he would go, "Put your hands ont he wall. Where were you the day of August 22, 1994?!" And I would go, "Being born." lmfao
Author's Response: Hahaha I'm glad that part made you laugh. I feel like it was a totally valid question for Bill to ask lol. And it's kind of hard to figure out who really is the girl in this situation. Tom is pretty girly, actually. haha. A lot really did go down in this chapter. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And I shall not be trying the Windex...I am too afraid. YOU SHALL SEE WHO IS BACK! Okay...that is an absolutely adooorrrrable story. I love that. You're so damn cute.
Date: 07/24/11 07:14 pm Title: Underwater Kissing
Awe, poor Tom. He's in a tough position=( I awed out loud at their "I love you" fight. Yes, I call that a fight. It was so fucking cute. This whole damn story is. I love these two together. OOOOH! Bill snuck out! I'm telling. haha jayy kayy. God, Tom is always gettin' some from Bill. Shit. Haha I wanna get some. And windex..Thanks for tempting me to use it! lmfao
Author's Response: He is indeed in a tough position..but! It shall be resolved in the upcoming chapters :D And that was totally a fight haha. I'm glad you thought it was cute and you love the two of them, together. That makes me happppy! But I'm also just really happy that you're back. Bill just loves Tom's junk. What can I say? I'm always down for getting some lol. Dude, you don't even know how tempted I've been to try that shit lol.
Date: 07/24/11 06:29 pm Title: Small Word, Big Deal
Awww! Farting aside, such a sweet chapter XD
Author's Response: Hahaha the farts. Yes, let us ignore those and just coo and aww at the chapter, hehe. Thank you!!
Date: 07/24/11 06:02 pm Title: Chinchilla!
I'M FUCKING BACK, BABE!!!! Anyways, I love it as always. Haha chinchilla. When I heard it I thought of Godzilla chillin' on a chin. Haha I guess I kind of got what you were going for. Man, I be getting chinchilla's too. Haha omg we had some of those in my animal science class! They were so fucking cute and soft and fluffy!!!!! Those two boys are progressing nicely and Tom is becoming such a fucking softy, but it's okay. I will go onto the next chapter after I trype up some of my next chapter. Haha I didn't know which to do first, so I decided to alternate. I shall be back in a half hour or whenever I'm tired of typing!
Author's Response: YOU'RE BACK!!! *attack hugs* YAAAAAAY! Chinchillas are so fucking cute. They are just the cuddliest of things. I wish I had one...the animal, not the zit lol. Though I have had the zit form, before. Blech. I'm sooooo happy you're back and reading!! I can't wait for you to get to the end :D :D I'm gonna be posting something new tomorrow, I think!! Good luck on your writing, love!
Date: 07/24/11 05:14 pm Title: Sweating Balls
ugh, I love you. Just. you deserve a new pocket protecter. I shall buy one soon, to keep you cozy in my pocket.
Author's Response: You already keep me so safe and sound in there, though! But...I cannot deny the excitement I feel at the prospect of a new pocket protector. I just can't. I love youuu.
Date: 07/24/11 04:42 pm Title: Sweating Balls
WHY ARE MY REVIEWS NOT BEING SENT AS COMPLETE?! FUCKING HELL. I had an ENTIRE spiel there. It was amazing. and funny. and just fantastic. BUT NO. WASN'T SENT. FUCK.
Author's Response: lmao. But it keeps selecting the most awesome little snippets of your reviews, to post. It's okay though, because I think YOU are amazing, funny, and just fantastic. Full review, or not. ;D
Date: 07/24/11 04:28 am Title: Sweating Balls
(in bed)
Author's Response: (with you)
Date: 07/24/11 02:19 am Title: Feel Like Making Love
Ahhhhhhhh omg. Totally worth the wait. Not quite the deep dicking I was gagging for haha but it is his first time and that would be a bit much methinks. But fuuuuuuuuck that was hot. The potential awkward talk made me crack up! I remember my first time.. "Out, out you're too fucking big wtf! Why can't I top???" And well, the rest is history. Though I have to say the orgasms from DP is so fucking intense that a sex coma would not be far off, really.
Lol and thanks re your comments about my relationship. We do have a rather interesting marriage. We've been together over 7yrs now ;-) He totally reaps the benefits of twincest which is why he has no problem with me being on THF. He'd also like me to pass on his thanks for last night hahahaha ;D
Author's Response: It wasn't the intense dicking that I think a lot of people were expecting. But! That does come later in the story, hehe. I'm glad you liked the awkward talk during the sexing. I can't not include the awkward. Haha. First times are always laced with awkwardness. And yes...DP is the ultimate relaxation tool. Haha I love that he's cool with you being on here. But I can't really blame him if it causes you to mount him on the regular. Haha. Tell him that he is so very welcome. I'm happy to help get you all riled up for him. Hahahha. ;) Thanks, love!
Date: 07/23/11 09:33 pm Title: Sweating Balls
very good idea for a story, and I like it a lot, just one thing - 14 years old and 130lbs? that's not skinny at all!! how tall he would have to be to be skinny with this weight, at least 6'? 99lbs would be much more realistic for a boy at this age...
and Tom 185lbs? he must be REALLY buff then...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story so far!! And I was 112 when I was 14 and I was skinnnny. I can show you pictures lol. But Bill is really tall and is very nearly 15 in the story so he keeps growing. And Tom is 17 and verrrry buff because he's a personal trainer and like 6ft. So the height and muscle add a lot. But the weights might be a little off, I'll admit. Sorry that it bugged ya, though! I hope you continue to enjoy it anyway! Thanks so much!