Date: 08/10/11 08:09 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Aww this was such a sweet ending! You're a genius at mixing sweet and hot with downright hilarious. I've loved following this story this summer and I look forward to seeing what you come out with next!
Author's Response: Hi!! *waves happily* I'm just really glad that you liked the ending :D I hoped that I could do it well for all of you. And that is probably one of the best compliments I've received...so thank you SO much for saying that! I actually just posted a one shot for Work Out!! Hope you check it out and seriously, thank you so much for reading and leaving me this sweet review :D
Date: 08/01/11 02:18 am Title: In and Out
I had a feeling it was the monkey! lol. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens with Tom's parents in the next one XD
Author's Response: That sneaky monkey haha. XD Thank you!!! Only two more left for you! :( But I'm also excited for you to get to the end! I hope you like what happens with Tom's parents lol. :)
Date: 07/31/11 02:09 am Title: Realizations and Reappearances
Great chapter! I am proud of Tom for wanting to take Bill into the party as his boyfriend. And what the hell is at the window?! A monkey? Larry? Can't wait to find out XD lol
Author's Response: Tom's growing and learning!! I'm happy you liked the chapter. Hahaha! I can't wait for you to read what's outside the window. The next chapter is craaaazy lol. But! One of your guesses is correct :D Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, once again. I'm gonna be sad when I don't get to read your reviews anymore :(
Date: 07/31/11 01:39 am Title: Underwater Kissing
You're right! I am getting very close to the end. This is both an exciting and saddening thought.
Great chapter! I hope Tom is able to get over his fear of telling people about Bill. Can't wait to read more XD
Author's Response: I agree with your sentiments, wholeheartedly. I'm just really happy that you've been reading and enjoying. I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!! I hope you enjoyed the next :D
Date: 07/30/11 07:22 pm Title: Sweating Balls
I'm Happy Too :3
Author's Response: :D xD :D
Date: 07/30/11 03:04 am Title: Chinchilla!
Another great chapter! XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! You're SO close to the end!! You have made a long and great journey. I commend you :D
Date: 07/29/11 03:53 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
XD YOU ARE AWESOME! I LOVE THIS STORY! AND GUMMY SNACKS!...AND LARRY THE LIZARD IS BOSS!...
Author's Response: YOU MADE IT TO THE END!!! CONGRATS!! *hands you gummy snacks* I'm soooo happy that you love this. SO HAPPY. And Larry appreciates your compliment. He has spread his wings in thanks ;) I hope that I'll get to talk to you, again! I just posted a new story called "Precarious Serendipity", if you want to check it out? You don't have to if it's not your cup of tea, though. But there are bound to be crazy creatures like Larry in it hehe. And no...YOU ARE AWESOME. Thank you SO much for reading this and sharing your thoughts with me, love! You've made me smile :D
Date: 07/29/11 01:24 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Aw, it's finally over. :')
It really has been a great summer!
I WAS gonna review for the last few chapters, (the encounters with Larry and old balls made me cry laughing) but I reallllly wanted to read the last chapter. This last chapter couldn't get any more romantic and cute if you tried, but every chapter's been like that so far. I've came back to read this story whenever I wanted to laugh a lot and feel really happy after every chapter. (:
I'm so glad you posted this silly story, thank you for making lots of my days. (-: I'll definitely be reading everything else you post later. Have a great end-of-summer too!
Author's Response: Umm...I don't even know how to begin to express how much this review made me smile. Seriously, I'm grinning like an idiot right now. ;D I am so glad that I could write a story that makes you laugh and feel happy when you read it. Thank you soooo much for getting through this story (it's soooo long lol) and then telling me such sweet things about it. I'm happy you enjoyed the last chapter and the whole story in general. You are MORE than welcome, btw. I'm glad that I could make lots of your days happy :D So glad. I actually just started up another story if you want to check it out? It's called "Precarious Serendipity" and it's gonna be a funnn one. But even if you don't, I hope I get to talk to you again, sometime! Thank you so much for everything and I hope you have an amazing end of summer!!
Date: 07/27/11 04:19 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Hey sweetie :)
The last chapter summed up everything these two turtle doves know and love about each other.
Bill gave Tom a clear example of how inexplicably fast he can be asked to leave an establishment :) It was sad but thank god Stanley was there to save the day :)
I chuckled by how accepting the flight personnel was of Tom and Bill's introduction to Mile High Club and likewise, I was laughing when it turned out the offended passenger was Mickey Mouse LOL. That was epic.-
Oh, it's so sad the story is over, but I look forward to the next which I will start to read in a moment.
Thanks for writing this dear. It was magnificent
*BIG HUGS*
Maria
Author's Response: Hi!!! *hugs* I'm glad you felt it summed everything up for them! I tried to bring some things around, full circle. Haha Bill seems to either get kicked out, or ALMOST get kicked out of everywhere, doesn't he? But YAY for Stanley! Coming in like a superhero. Haha the whole flight experience and the mean little guy, were quite ridiculous. I'm glad it made you laugh. I'm so excited that you're going to read my next story! I'm excited about that one. And thank you soooo much for reading this one. Your reviews are always a delight. Thank you, Maria!!! :D
Date: 07/27/11 08:27 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Komm baby, strip für mich...
Sorry couldn't resist when I saw " Come baby" nnnnggghhh ;D
I'm having flashbacks again hahahaha. I also shared an intimate plane moment in one of fyredancer's object fics lol. I think it may still be under my old name "zkmmm" if you want to look for it ;-)
And so we've reached the end of our hilarious tale. I kinda hope you'd write some outtakes or one shots of them in school. I kinda like high school fics though I have no talent for them at all.
Mmmmm... You're asleep now. I'll be your blanket.. *drapes naked self on you and snuggles in to sleep*
Author's Response: Hnnnngggh. You don't have to resist anything, with me ;) I think I'm probably gonna have to look for that, now haha. Your flashbacks are always sinfully entertaining. IT IS THE END! YOU MADE IT! I applaud you. I'm definitely gonna write some outtakes, guuurrrrl. I'm not gonna leave these boys, forever. I like high school fics too. They're adorably adorable. I was indeed asleep when you left this. I'm awake now but...can you be my blanket, anyway?? Please? *tugs on you*
Date: 07/27/11 07:51 am Title: Ghosts of the Past
OMG I shrieked with laughter. The toots were just too much. And all that reminded me of the boobs, bewbies, tatas, cleavage and butt crack conversations on Twitter earlier. It's too much. My ribs can't take it!
Tom's parents are too hilarious. Though I really don't think Tom is gonna be able to handle being a botTom lol... I keep having this mental picture of Bill coming and spunk spurting out of Tom's mouth! Yes it's a little sick hah.
One more chappie! I'm almost there! Will you reward me? *bats eyelashes coyly*
Author's Response: TOOTS. That word in itself just cracks me up. I can't help it. And yep, bewbs bewbies, tatas. BUTT CLEAVAGE> Haha twitter convos are quite lovely, aren't they? *kisses your ribs better* Dude, Bill would tear Tom in HALF. I swear. But who knows, maybe I'll write a one-shot where they awkwardly attempt it haha. One more!! Although, I already know you've finished it, and you already know that I'm gonna reward you. *winks*
Date: 07/27/11 05:46 am Title: Sweating Balls
http://coldworldkid.tumblr.com/post/8123417101 OMG GO ON THIS LINK!! It's the picture that is the hub lol without the edit X3 I was so happy when I found it I was all like KIDHAKLFJKLDS I FOUND IT! Now I shall start building my hub!then someday 'our' hub... going to miss this story D':
Author's Response: Haha you totally found it!! You MUST build your own hub! I insist. I'm gonna miss this story, too. But I'll post a one-shot, soonish! I hope you like my next story, though :D
Date: 07/27/11 04:01 am Title: Sweating Balls
*cough* Yea.. Hope you're not planning on sleeping soon.
Author's Response: I'm so fucking tired, but I don't want to go to go to sleep *licks lips*
Date: 07/27/11 03:59 am Title: In and Out
GIRL. GIRL, GIRL, GIRL.
Holy fuck you just totally made me come out to everyone in the office that I read slash. And thoroughly enjoy it..
Plus you now practically have your tongue down my throat so I best get back to you... Though you really should sleep *wink*
Um yea.. Bill riding.. probably my favourite position......... *smirk*
Author's Response: The response I just gave your last review was kind of grammatically fucked up but...you're the one who has me all flustered. Naughty ;) haha I LOVE that your office knows you read slash now! Ain't no shame girl. And I really should sleep, but I've got something much more interesting going on atm. Bill riding Tom is always a lovely image to picture ;) unf.
Date: 07/27/11 02:54 am Title: Realizations and Reappearances
LOL lemme guess? The monkey is back? XD I dunno actually. I totally suck at guessing. We have a Chrysler so backseat loving is well.. FAB. And we also cart around teenagers on the weekend and seeing them in the seats makes me giggle to myself hahaha.. If only they knew what went down... OH YES, ME.
Anyways, hotness abounds as usual as usual. Though the visual of Bill hosing out the window was just a little O_O UM.. HOLY FUCKING BALLS..
"How do you want me?" I love that! I love that sooooooooooo much you have no idea.
Anyway, I read this last night but OH came along as I was reviewing and well, yea lol. So here I am! You can be my naked blanket.
*pulls your naked self over me and purrs happily*
Author's Response: You totally guessed right! The monkey strikes again! You're a good guesser. Haha car loving can be quite enjoyable if you have the space! **nods* and yeahhhh he came out that window. A lot. It just kept coming! I love that toooo *swoons* Such a sexy thing to say. I don't blame you for not reviewing last night ;) I'm just happy you found the time, now! So ready to be your naked blanket. Gonna snuggle and be naked and it's gonna be good XD
Date: 07/27/11 01:55 am Title: Feel Like Making Love
This definetly did not disappoint. Grade 'A' smut if I do say so myself XD
Author's Response: That is quiiiiite a compliment :D Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed ;) Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next chapter!
Date: 07/26/11 06:41 am Title: When You're Fifteen
It's so fucking rediculous! I love it ahahhaha XD
Author's Response: That really WAS a crazy ass chapter lol. I'm so happy that you love it and that you're reaaaading! Thank you! :D
Date: 07/26/11 06:13 am Title: Jizz Masterpiece
hnnnnnng waaaaaaaant
Author's Response: Mmmm you and me both, girl. You and me both. hehe. xD
Date: 07/26/11 03:57 am Title: Sweating Balls
You "ARE REALLY" a bad ass chick with a mind in turmoil.... LOL. Damn you infected me with what you so called toots everytime, from the first chappy to the last with Bill's reverse psychology antics and hilarious experiences and Tom's always patient and adorable mind really rocks. I love the horny monkey and the perverted old man, Larry most especially, the closet monster, the treehouse perverted ghost,Mrs. Buttercup,Nats ( only called by Bill when he's taking a shit, it's damn hilarious),the monkey throwing poop and most especially the TOOT conversation it's really gives me the cracks and accumulate lots of gasses. Well I give you my biggest high five and a five star. You really caught my attention and I'm having fun and lots of gas and toot till the end.....;D You rock girl till next time...goodluck!
Author's Response: THIS was suuuuuch an awesome review!!! I do have quite the crazy mind haha. LOL That's awesome that the toots made you laugh so much. And I am AMAZED that you were able to recall so many details in this review. I'm so happy you read this and enjoyed it!! You have no idea how big I'm smiling right now. THANK YOU!! TOOTS. Hahahah. Toots crack me up, too. High five and stars??? THANK YOU AGAIN! I just posted another story yesterday if you want to check it out. I would LOVE to talk to you more, love! Thanks so much :D
Date: 07/26/11 03:09 am Title: My Boyfriend
Aww, they are offically boyfriends XD Great chapter. And I am definetly looking forward to reading the next one *is a perv* :D
Author's Response: I love pervs!! *welcomes you with open arms* Thank you so much! I can't wait to hear what you think of the next one...though I will tell you that the chapter AFTER their first time, has better sex lol. And hey! Your review just made my story the 20th most reviewed on the site! THANK YOU!!! *hugs on you*