Date: 08/28/11 02:24 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain
I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO KNOW TOO, THAT AFTER HAVING BEEN INSPIRED BY YOUR STORY...I HAVE BEGUN DOING ALL OF MY TEXTING AND FACEBOOKING IN CAPS.
MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY THANK YOU! :D
Author's Response: I COULD NOT BE MORE PLEASED BY THIS NEWS. I KNOW THAT BILL WILL ALSO BE QUITE EXCITED TO HEAR THIS. I FEEL LIKE A ROBOT WHEN I TYPE LIKE THIS. I AM NOT A ROBOT. WAIT, THAT IS SOMETHING THAT A ROBOT WHO IS PRETENDING TO BE A HUMAN WOULD SAY....AWKWARD.... Haha. I thoroughly enjoyed this yelling via typing conversation with you. :D
Date: 08/28/11 01:11 pm Title: The Lizard Whisperer
First of all, I gotta say, you have some brow-raising titles for your chapters! (though sweating balls is my ultimate fav)
LOL "how are you gonna find where i live?" "what is your address?" DO NOT BE AFRAID! NURSE BILL IS COMING TO SAVE YOU!
That's kinda... disturbing thought.. and so is the thought of Bill tickling a lizard. Larry the lizard.
You said you want to keep the reader guessing, but you definitely didn't say anything about keeping the reader sane.
I was sure he was going to peek on Tom showering. :(
Oh btw, I saw your story on the front page, you definitely deserve it!!
p.s. Bill is still a hat-thief.
Author's Response: Haha yes, the titles are quite befuddling! Sweating Balls will forever be dedicated to you for your love of it. :D Larry the Lizard...he is just something else. Hahah I hope you can stay sane through the rest of this. Because I really, really like getting your reviews. The next chapter is a crazy one so I hope you're prepared! :D Thank you so so much!!! Oh and yes, Bill will remain a hat-thief until one of the very last chapters. I hope you can handle his thefty ways until then...:D xD
Date: 08/28/11 09:45 am Title: Invite Only
"Are you coming?”
“Trying not to,” Tom sighed as he looked down at his crotch in frustration.
Hahaha, this is so good xD
Tom is crushing on Bill!! wohooo
Author's Response: Haha hi! I'm so happy that you're reading! Like I totally have a huge smile on my face right now. :D Thank you so much for giving my story a chance and I really hope that you enjoy the rest! xD
Date: 08/27/11 09:07 pm Title: Sweating Balls
my friend sent me a link to this story like a month ago and told me to read it. she said it was good and funny. but I read like the first sentence and said peace, didn't feel like reading it but then I show it on the home page of TH FANFIC today and I thought it must be good if it's on the front page xD and I'm glad I wasn't lazy to read this. seems like a good story. whoa have 41 chapter to go xD excited :p
Author's Response: I am soooo excited that you're giving my story a chance! You have a lot of reading ahead of you but I promise that it will make you laugh a least a little bit :D I cannot wait to hear what you think of it!! Thank you so much for giving this a go and leaving this lovely review for me :D Yay! I'm happy.
Date: 08/27/11 06:46 pm Title: Sweating Balls
ROFL! Don't be. Dallas/Ft. Worth is the only place in the world I've ever been that has more doughnut shops than gas stations and they all spell it "Donut". I was told once by the one of the Asians that own JC Donuts(which incidentally DOES stand for Jesus Christ Donuts)and she told me in no uncertain terms that the U, G, and H would have cost extra. I love Texas. Except in the summer.
Author's Response: Hahah. You know, I'm sure the U, G, and H were really quite expensive. Jesus Christ Donuts? What a holy experience! By the way, I enjoy puns. :) There really are soooo many donut shops here. Ahem...doughnut...I just don't know how to spell it anymore! My life has been a lie, it seems. : / I still find it hilarious that you could tell where I was from by the way I spelled that word. You're like the do(ugh)nut whisperer!
Date: 08/27/11 06:22 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
amazing story love itttt
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 08/27/11 02:56 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Okay, the first thing I need to do is apologize for not commenting on every chapter. I started to read this story and I just couldn't stop long enough to review. You write so beautifully that I could hardly wait to get to the next chapter.
I want to tell you that your characterizations of Bill and Tom were just the best I've ever read. I fell in love with them long before they fell in love with each other. :)
Your comedic talents are phenomenal and you had me rolling on the floor over and over again. I just can't wipe the smile off my face.
Thank you so much for writing this story and for creating characters that I would love to hang around with in real life.
Please don't ever stop writing because I will never stop reading. :D
Author's Response: You have absolutely no need to apologize for not commenting until now! I'm just so happy that you read my story. :D That delights me so much that you got drawn in so much that you couldn't stop reading. Ahhh you flatter me so! I am so glad that you loved my Bill and Tom. That surprises me to no end when people like them because I know that they can be pretty silly ;) Oh my gosh, seriously. I just have to take a moment to say thank you for this review. I've been sick today and your words have significantly brightened my mood. You are so incredibly sweet. I'm thrilled that i could make you laugh and smile! That makes me incredibly happy. You are so welcome for this story but thank YOU for giving it a chance and reading it. You are so lovely. :D I will keep writing, I promise! Thank you so much, again!
Date: 08/27/11 08:03 am Title: Invite Only
I find myself liking you more and more...even though your Texas was showing a little in the last chapter. "Donuts"? Lol! You must live in the DFW Metroplex.
Author's Response: I am so delighted to hear that! I actually am kind of hoping that as the story goes on, and actual plot is revealed (lol), that you will like it more and more. And yeaaahhh, the Texas in me is sometimes hard to hide. Haha. I actually DO live in the DFW area. How could you tell that from Donuts? Did I spell it strangely? I am quite impressed by you, right now. :D
Date: 08/27/11 06:57 am Title: The Hat
Why do writers like to turtore their characters so much? You turned Bill into a hat-thief!!! Oh well, apparantly hat thieves and sneaky murderers are awesome.
That was a great chapter, a great thing to read first thing in the morning.. :D
I was wondering what it'd be like to go with Bill in public, and apparently "meatballs" answers the question.
If i were Kiran, I'd always carry a "I don't know this guy" sign with me. Problem solved! I think...
Damn hat-thief is lucky. I'd LOVE to see Tom doing push-ups too! I want to see what Tom is going to do for his B-day!!!
Oh dude, I'm proud. every comment beats the last one in length, and well, in stupidity.. :)
Author's Response: Haha! I promise that he makes things right with the hat man, later in the story! I couldn't just leave him as a hat thief ;) I'm so glad that you could start your day off great! You are so sweet, you know? Hahaha. I would totally do the same thing if I were Kiran. Or just wear a shirt that said that, always. Problem definitely solved! Haha I love that you're calling Bill "hat-thief". That makes me laugh. I would thoroughly enjoy seeing Tom doing push ups! You shall see what he has in store for his birthday ;) And yay! You SHOULD be proud! But personally, I think that every comment beats the last one in awesomeness. Thank you so very much!! :D
Date: 08/27/11 05:49 am Title: Whip My Hair
I'm working my way through this slowly, but surely. I like your writing. You have good storytelling skills and your dialogue is natural and witty.
There is just a juvenile feel to it that I'm having a hard time with. I know Bill is fourteen in this one and though I haven't actually started it yet, he's in high school in your other work, too right? I'm attributing it to a perspective that's almost 1st person in both cases.
I think you have something here sister, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't at all interested in seeing something more adult contemporary from you. Something not necessarily serious, if that isn't your forte, but... more mature maybe.
Author's Response: I really appreciate you giving my story a chance, and want to thank you for the compliments on my storytelling and dialogue. :) I do realize that there is an immature aura sort of surrounding the story line. Although, I will tell you that it gets a bit more serious as it progresses and secrets are revealed. But, I just meant for this to be a goofy little story (which it is) that could make people laugh. I truly didn't know that people would read it as much as they did. Especially people such as yourself, whom I look up to as a writer. I really do! He is in high school in my other story as well, but that story has a much different plot than this and probably will never mention his schooling. I guess...I wanted to write a new story that sort of eased the readers of this one into something new. Ultimately, I have a lot of mature and more angst driven concepts that I want to write about. It has just been a fluffy kind of summer though, I suppose. I guess I should write past high school...given that I'm a senior in college, lol. I would actually really like to talk to you about all of this and hear your suggestions. If you ever want to email me, I would very much appreciate it. Thank you so much for your honesty, and for reading this story even though there are some things that irk you about it. It really does mean a lot to me! :)
Date: 08/26/11 03:48 pm Title: Tom's Secret Fear
this has always been my favourite chapter :p tom is just so cute. i was waiting all through it for him to pee his pants like he said lol
Author's Response: Ohhhh my goodness! Are you reading this again? You are so my favorite. I'm smiling so big right now :D :D
Date: 08/26/11 02:37 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
I want to read about elephants in Tom's lap! Or read about elephants with Bill sat in my lap...Either way I would be happy!
Author's Response: I would LOVE to read about just about anything, in either position. Haha. No, mainly elephants. Because I love elephants!! Hehe. Again, I'm so happy you're reading again! You are just so lovely and delightful :D
Date: 08/26/11 02:24 pm Title: Exclusive Pass
You know, at first I was a little skeptical about reading your story. "work out" didn't really associate
with anything good in my mind 'cause i hate sports (or at least PE lessons. they suck) but when I saw the title of the first chapter was "sweating balls" I knew I would love it.
I think the title "sweating balls" would fit the whole story way better than "Work out". oh well anyway,
I wonder if i should watch 16 and pregnant. it seems creepy by the way Bill reacted..
Oh god, this monkey should have his on fic. I'm oficially the monkey's fan now!
I was sure someone was going to enter, because usually when you say "I'm sure no one is going to enter" that's exactly what happens, and I would pay to see their faces!
p.s. you asked for long-ass comments.
p.s.2. i found out it's a part of a series and there is another story. but it has only one chapter :(
I would LOVE to see another story by you. Maybe you should write a love story between Bill and the monkey.
or maybe not.. I want the monkey to live.
p.s.3. yeah, i'm done now.
Author's Response: I KNOW! The title totally isn't really what the story is about. But! I like the fact that it keeps you confused and guessing, lol. I'm so grateful for this feature because I think a lot of people read the story that would not have read it before. Because it really isn't something that you would expect it to be. Sweating Balls would have been an epic title, lol. 16 and pregnant is actually a very addicting show, lol. I get sucked into watching hours of it. But, it is also quite disturbing! Hahaaa. The monkey SHOULD have its own story! P.S. I am so pleased by your long-ass comment!! Haha yeah there is a one shot that I've posted. I hope you'll read it when you're through with this! I will write a lot of one shots about these boys. And I'm totally open to suggestions so...maybe there will be monkey love, hahah. Yay thank you so much for this fantastic review!! :D xD YOU are quite fantastic actually.
Date: 08/26/11 01:48 pm Title: Sweating Balls
Holy crap! Unprofessional to the max, Tom. Who's an athletic trainer at age 17, anyway? Really? Ha! I am so happy I started reading this. I'm going to enjoy every minute of this hilariously awkward experience for Bill.
Author's Response: I am SO delighted that you've started to read this! There is so much awkward Bill in store for you :D :D I can't wait to hear what you think! And I also explain Tom's age and job later on so, hopefully that will answer your questions, lol. Yay! Thank you so much and I really hope that you enjoy the story!!
Date: 08/26/11 02:56 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
I LOVE YOUR WRITNNG AMAZING ENDING AMAIZING START AMAIZING STORY LOVE IT KEEP DOING MORE I JUST LOVE THE WIRD AND FUNNY CUTE BIL I LOVE ALL PPL WITH THT KIND OF CHRACTER THT U PUT TO BILL IT IS AMAIZING I LOVE IT DO MORE ALOT MORE AND YA I WANT MORES SERIOUSES PLEASE :)
Author's Response: You made it to the end!!! Congratulationssss!!! :D Thank you soooo very much for reading! I am so happy that you loved the characters and especially Bill's :D You should totally go check out my new story because there is more serious for sure! But I will keep writing and writing! Thank you so much for making it through this entire story and telling me your thoughts along the way. I so appreciate you!!! :D xD
Date: 08/25/11 11:18 pm Title: In and Out
HEY CAN U MAKE ANOTHER SERIOUS ABT TOM ND BILL BUT COURSE A DIFFERENT STORY I FUCKING LOVE YOUR WRITING IT IS REALLY FUNNT I WANT TO READ MOREW PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE DO MORE
Author's Response: I've already started another story, actually! If you go look under my stories, you will find it :D I would be so delighted if you read it! Thank you so much for loving my writing! You make me smile so much. I will keep writing as long as people keep wanting to read it. I promise!! Thank you so much for continuing to read, love :D
Date: 08/25/11 08:38 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
I absolutely loved this fanfiction, it's probably the best I've ever read! It never stopped making me smile and laugh and smirk at the smut. You wrote the characters beautifully; Bill was such an interesting character and Tom had such great character development! And I seriously cried when I finished it, I thought it was so sweet when they went to Disney World. This fanfiction took me three days to read, but it was totally worth it, and I've become attached to it. I will most definitely be re-reading it! It also inspired me to create my own hub! It won't be very much like Bill's, but it will be good enough... it will be my hub. And it will be special, just like Bill's and Bill and Tom's! So anyway, great job. I loved this so much and it kept me very interested. Oh, and before I forget, Nat was hilarious! Keep up the great job! ^w^
Author's Response: You should just know that you must have some kind of special review-leaving superpower. Because OMG. This was such an amazing thing for me to read. I am sooooo flattered and pleased by your words. I am delighted that his made you laugh and smile so much. That is my favorite thing to make people do! And what you said about my characters? Soooo sweet. I can't begin to tell you how grateful I am that you took the time to read my story. That makes me so very happy and warm and fuzzy on the inside. OH! You're making your own hub?? I am so jealous. I haven't even made one for myself. But perhaps now I will. You will be my hub inspiration ;) Thank you SO much for reading! And for leaving this amazing review. You have made me smile endlessly. I'm glad you liked Nat, haha. Thank you and I will definitely keep writing! I posted a oneshot about these boys already, if you want to read it :D Thank you, again!! :D xD :)rn
Date: 08/25/11 07:43 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back
Noooo, it's over. Well, I'm going to leave what is hopefully a mega review which will do my love for this story justice, even though it's hard to tell how long it is 'cause I'm on my iPod. But whatever. Let's go! :D
The aeroplane sex was just wonderfully hot and hilarious, at the same time. All I could think of was Alan from the Hangover; "Its not illegal, it's frowned upon, like masturbating on an aeroplane." xD And the nasal man amused me greatly.
Bill attacking all the characers at Disney Land was freakin' hilarious, particularly Mickey Mouse. Ahh, the little kids questions amused me far far too much. Plus, I'm not afraid to say that I had a little squee when Stanley returned! :D
Overall, this story has been nothing short of fantastic. It's has me laughing out loud on more occassions than I care to count, as well as having me on the verge of tears. It's got just enough seriousness to provide it with some depth and plenty of laughs to overcome the sadder elements. What is most amazing though is how Bill's grown. He's come so far from the little kid who was bottling up all of his feelings, and that makes me happy on a deeper level which I can't even begin to explain. Really, what I'm trying to say is that you, and this story, are amazing. You deserved to have this featured more than anyone and if I could get it featured a thousand times over then I most certainly would. It's simply wonderful.
So a massive thank you for writing it, as well as responding to all of my reviews. Your responses really are so very kind and it brings a massive smile to my face to read them.
Although I'm sad that I've now completed this story, I can guarantee that I will read it again at some point.
Oh and I'm going to follow you on Twitter - I'm HaiZoe. Convenient, right? ;) Thank you once again, for writing such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: This. Was such a wonderfully perfect review. I mean really, you have me smiling and curling up into a tiny ball of happiness! I'm glad that you enjoyed the sex on the plane, haha. It reminds me of the Hangover, too!! And the little nasal man that ended up being a dwarf at Disney world...haha. Only Bill would stumble upon a situation like that. :D And, I totally had to have Bill get into a fight with Mickey. It just felt right! I have to say, when I found an opportunity for Stanley to return...I squeed as well! I enjoy that man. :D I cannot even begin to tell you (although I know I already have before) how grateful I am that you decided to give my story a chance. Not only that but the fact that it made you laugh and feel all sorts of things; makes me remarkably happy. I am so glad that you were able to see the growth in the characters and the progression of their relationship once BIll started opening up. You are a very attentive reader and reviewer and I so appreciate that about you. You are sooo sweet to say that this story deserved to be featured. I'm just thankful that it was so that people like you gave it a chance :D Thank YOU for reading this and I was so happy to respond to your reviews. I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this story so much and I hope I get to talk to you on twitter!! You are so lovely. Thank you, love :D
Date: 08/25/11 02:34 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past
The part where Tom was talking to Bill's parents. Oh woah, that was too perfect, as was the story reference at the end. :')
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I didn't even intend for that part to be a big thing but a lot of people commented about it. I'm so glad you liked it! And hehe, the cheesy story reference. I'm gonna go ahead and hug you for loving that. *squeezes you tight* OMG you only have one chapter left!! I am so happy that you decided to read my story, and thank you so much for telling me what you thought along the way. You are so lovely and sweet. Thank you!! I hope you like the last chapter!
Date: 08/25/11 01:59 pm Title: In and Out
So many crazy creatures! I loved it! I thought that Bill had came over a cat or something, but then I realised that cats don't have hands. And the thing about Larry and virgin blood cracked me up! My brother actually turned around and asked me what was so funny.
I really hope that Tom's parents are alright with it all. I'm sure they will be once they've met Bill - he's so freakin' lovable! :3
Author's Response: I should have probably entitled the chapter "Crazy Creatures", actually. haha. So many animal things and yes! The virgin blood! I love that this made you laugh enough to have your brother turn around, haha. That makes me so happy. Your prediction is quite accurate, I would say. :D Thank you so much for reading! You're almost done!! :o