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Reviewer: PropaneHazards Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 05:31 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Dammmmn... you didn't say whose dick was bigger... -_- But it was still an amazing chapter with Tom's pretty dick :3 Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Maybe there will have to be a scene at some point where they measure their dicks hahaa. It's bound to be terribly awkward and enjoyable. Thank you so much!!! I'll give you more as soon as I can ;)

Reviewer: marthehn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 05:18 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Haha, that was hot. I like it! And seriously, Tom should be afraid when Bill break someones ribs in pillow fight! Haha, and Tom's dick is pretty? Wtaf?! xD Totally loved the chappie, can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you kindly!! And yes, Tom needs to back up off of Bill when it comes to pillow fights ;) Yup. Pretty as a picture hahaha. So glad you liked it. Thank youuu!!

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 05:17 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Bill and his fucking fire hose!!!
LOL!
Loved it!!

Author's Response: Yep that shit was spraying everywhere hahaaa. Thank you sooooo very much!!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 05:10 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Ummm how much of a pillow-fight champion do you have to be to break someone's ribs in a pillow fight >.>
So scary >.

Author's Response: Bill doesn't fuck around when it comes to pillow fights. He treats it as serious as the tickle championship haha.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 04:57 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Yay. Now they just have to kiss as well:)

Author's Response: There will be kisses, I promise ;)

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 04:56 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

You... Can't... You just can't write that Bill's dick is huge and Tom's is PRETTY when I CAN'T SEE THEM! *huff*

God, that was incredible looooool :3 *______*

Author's Response: I apologize. You're just gonna have to imagine them :) Which isn't a bad thing to imagine hehe. Thank you sooooo much!!

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 04:51 pm Title: Jizz Masterpiece

Hot. I love it. :D

Jane

Author's Response: Why, thank you!! :)

Reviewer: PropaneHazards Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 03:22 pm Title: Inside the Hub

As much as i want the smut, i think it would be good if you wrote awkward Bill as well... Then again i REALLY want to know who's dick is bigger... hmm...

Author's Response: Perhaps all of your wishes will be granted. You'll have to be the judge of that. I'm about to post the chapter, now!!

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 02:38 pm Title: Inside the Hub

Bring on the SMUT!!!!

Author's Response: Ohhhhh I'll bring it!!!

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 02:10 pm Title: Inside the Hub

Tom's completely caved at this point. He should just get on with it and do the dirty deed with Bill already. I think it's far beyond friendship, what they're doing.

Author's Response: Yes but when it comes to Bill, who knows what normal friendship is for him? He's such a weirdy haha. But, I promise there will be dirty stufff in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 12:35 pm Title: Sweating Balls

I may have ;) Oh, I can only imagine! I mean really, how romantic am I? Proposing through review. Man, I am such a catch. And yes pleeeaassseeee, smutty chapters are smutty... and amazing :3

Author's Response: You truly are a catch! And yes, that is quite accurate of you to say that smutty chapters are smutty. And! They are also amazing! Right again! haha

Reviewer: kassandra_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 10:36 am Title: Inside the Hub

I say bring on the smut ;)

Author's Response: I quite agree :)

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 07:04 am Title: Inside the Hub

no! dont make him ruin the moment lol so far this is like my favorite funny story! your an awesome writer!

Author's Response: I promise to give you good stuff in the next chapter ;) Thank you so so much! You're so sweeeeet!

Reviewer: TokioMoonlight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 06:09 am Title: Inside the Hub

Bring on the smut :)

I love their characters in your story xD

Author's Response: It shall be brought! Thank you sooo much :)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 01:39 am Title: Inside the Hub

I think brining on the smut would be great! also the other option would be pretty cool too I guess cause the way you writ it always cracks me up :) So either way it'll be great! x) amazing chapter!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! It'll definitely be a combination of awkward and smut I believe. Only the best of combinations :)

Reviewer: judith182 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 01:04 am Title: Inside the Hub

Masturbation!.....is always good ;). BRING ON THE SMUT!!!! *crowd-screaming-along* BRING ON THE SMUT!!!! YAY! can't wait for the next chapter. =)

Author's Response: I quite agree!! Masturbation is always great! :) Haha thank you for the cheering and encouragement!!!

Reviewer: boypants8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 11:06 pm Title: Inside the Hub

wooooooooot!!!!! yay sexy billa!!!! bring on the good stuff!

Author's Response: I shall bring it!! :)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 10:56 pm Title: Inside the Hub

*chants* bring on the smut, bring on the smut!

OK so strange rule, but seriously what is wrong with Tom bringing up the unmentionable S word in the hub after being explicitly told not to?!?!? I am really curious about hat rule now.

I am so glad Bill let Tom enter his inner sanctum. Well you know not that "inner sanctum". It is definately progress on Bill's prt I would imagine.

I am cuious about whether Bill is in therapy, and if he is if we will ever see a session.

This was great chapter. I am glad to see that Tom knows Bill wasn't lying about his nethers. Keep p the wonderful work! I look forward to the next udate! But you know, don't rush, go ahead and relx, let us go a day without an update. We'll understand

Author's Response: We'll definitely get into the more serious side of Bill in later chapters as he becomes more comfortable with Tom. Thank you sooo much for reading and reviewing! You're so sweet for understanding. I may or may not get a chapter up tomorrow. It's like 3/4 of the way written. But there definitely will be smut ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 10:25 pm Title: Inside the Hub

This story, I think, was exactly what I needed. Much love from the TSOA.

Author's Response: I think your review was exactly what I needed. I love your stories. Thank you so much for reading mine :)

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 09:43 pm Title: Inside the Hub

BRING ON THE SMUT!
BRING ON THE SMUT!
BRING ON THE SMUT!
BRING ON THE SMUT!
BRING ON THE SMUT!

okay, so this chapter was that innocent kind of erotic that makes everything soooo much hotter. KUDOS!

awesome chapter

Author's Response: That is PRECISELY what I was aiming for!!! Thank you sooooo much! And the smut, I shall bring ;)

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