*laughs hysterically* Oh god, *gasps for air* Bill is just so, I don't even know, Randomly Delightful might do it. I love him.

The smuttyness was a little over the top, but not in a bad way. If that makes any sense. It fits well with the rest of the story.

This was great chapter. I really love that the whole cinnamon roll thing worked out for Bill, as did him having both tissue and paper towel in his hub.

Can't wait for the next update *wiggle around in anticipation* Keep up the lovely work! *hugs*

Author's Response: Randomly delightful is a perfect way to describe Bill! Thank you!! rnrnYeahhh over the top for sure but I do agree that most of the story is like that haha so it hopefully does fit in.rnrnI'm glad you liked the chapter! That makes me very happyyyy! Things seem to always work out for Bill in the end, somehow ;)rnrnI can't wait to give you the next chapter!! Thank you so so much! XD

The "sorry I have so much semen" line and the craving for cinnamon rolls was so hilarious! Where do you get this stuff, this comedy gold???

Author's Response: I'll be damned if I even know where it comes from lol. Outta my head and straight to a word document. I honestly usually don't even know what the next chapter is going to be about. I just write and hope it's funny haha. So I'm glad it is ending up that way!! Thank youuuu!!!

that was so erotic and hot! nicely done, the smut was awesome.

I love how comfortable Bill can make Tom, it's cute. This wasn't even awkward as I thought it would be.

haha Tom has a pretty dick, that's sexy and amusing at the same time. Bill is too funny.

I hope that this means more hot moments in the showers at the gym or in the hub again.

I also wanted to say I admire your fast updates. I wish I could update as fast as this. Kudos.

awesome chapter

Author's Response: It definitely means more hot moments :) In fact, there's gonna be one in the next chapter!! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm pretty sure I can only update as fast as this because of how awesome you all are. It totally encourages me to write. I can't promise I'll always be able to update this quickly but when I can I most definitely will :) I'm soooo glad you liked it and thank youuu!!

Satisfied. :3
I felt like they should have kissed or something. But whatta I know?
Bye! Can't wait for the next chapter~~

Author's Response: Ah but kissing first might be far too ordinary for their situation. Because you know they've got a strange sort of relationship. But, there will be kisses in the future, I promise!! Thank you sooo much! Can't wait to give you the next chapter :D

way more than satisfactory... wow that was hot xD

Author's Response: Gossssh thank you so much!! You made me smile XD

LOL LOVE IT! especially the random Oprah part bahahha :D

Author's Response: Haha thank youuuuu! You know Oprah is the shit ;)

Now I want cinnamon rolls. -_- Damnit.......

Author's Response: Look, I'm sorry about that. But you can have some cinnamon rolls. I'm not going to judge you, in fact, I encourage it. They are very delicious. XD

More smut hehe

Author's Response: Perhaps I shall give you some ;) Thanks for reading!!

I'll review when i get out of their post-orgasm basking.

Author's Response: You just go ahead and bask away. Bask away.

Phew! :D

This was incredibly hot. I think I read with my jaw hanging in suspense. I did remember to close it afterwards, or I'd look pretty silly :)

Tom is totally in Bill's web. He's being reeled in slow and steadily and it appears he doesn't mind. He's realising he's so attracted to Bill he wants to spend his free time in the boy's company. Bill might still not try and seduce Tom... but he doesn't really have a choice because it comes so natural even if it's conscious or not. Everything about him is appealing to Tom now, so there's only one way for the hot trainer and that's more of Bill :)

Not really making sense here, but I loved the chapter. love Maria

Author's Response: Eeek I'm glad you thought it was hot! I was a bit nervous about that. Glad you remembered to close your jaw! That could get uncomfortable after a while hehe. I think you have a really good grasp on the characters, actually! You're making perfect sense ;) Thank you soo very much!