Date: 06/14/11 07:39 am Title: When You're Fifteen
Ohh, so no more we-shouldn't-kiss-until-you're-15 *eyebrow wiggle*
And I have to say... Bill definitely is from another planet LOL XD
Author's Response: He must be from a different planet for sure. But, I'd like to think it's a pretty awesome one hehe. And yes I do believe there will be more kisses before Bill's 15! :D
Date: 06/14/11 07:21 am Title: Massage Miracle
your story got me laughing several times already.I can´t wait to read the next chapters. Great work;) I feel sorry for poor Tom being so confused but who can blame him?? Thannks for a great story and please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I'm super flattered that it had you laughing XD I'll be posting a new chapter today! Yes Tom is quite confused but I think things will be clearing up for him soon :) you are so welcome but thank YOU for reading and reviewing! :D And I will definitely keep writing!
Date: 06/14/11 12:26 am Title: When You're Fifteen
LOL xD
Author's Response: Thankssss :D :D
Date: 06/14/11 12:22 am Title: When You're Fifteen
You are hilarious. Love it! :D
Author's Response: You are awesome! Thank you sooo much! :D
Date: 06/14/11 12:04 am Title: Sweating Balls
...Dammit ¬¬ We'll get our own Stanley in armour, minus the tranqs.
Author's Response: Yep. Sounds like a solid plan!
Date: 06/13/11 11:07 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
Silly Tom, napping at a time like that. *shakes head sadly*
*gigglesnort* I can honestly say No, I did not see that coming. I think you get a ten out of five possible points for shock and awe.
Such wonderful work. I guess Tom is just going to have to talk with Bill's aunt about that "surprise party" for Bill isn't he? He has a lot of work a head of him, planning a surprise party in less than a week.
I never have had Pho before. What is in it? I am glad to hear you are going to try egg drop next time. Its just nice and warm and soothing
Author's Response: I'm so glad I got to shock you! hehe. That's what I want this story to be. Hilariously shocking. Thank you for the points! And yes, I'm still planning out how Tom is going to deal with the surprise party thing. sigh. Pho has egg noodles, onions, chicken, cilantro, and other veggies and it's in a really light chicken broth. It's super good! You should try it. I always get it when I'm sick. But I'll def try egg drop next time. Maybe tomorrow even because my throat still kills : / I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!! And thank you so much for the review :) :)
Date: 06/13/11 10:10 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
OMG you brought back the monkey! I don't blame Tom freaking out. I'd go nuts if one of those little creepy things got on me!
It was all hilarious, as usual, but the scenes with Stanley were great (and I totally agree with everything he said). And then Tom trying to be all mature and sweet and that little monster got wrapped up in his dreads and then all hell broke loose. Love the way you described Stanley and Bill running away from him and Tom chasing them for help and them running away. Pure comedy gold! And the payoff -- poor Tom getting hit with the tranquilizer dart. I can only imagine what this Bill might do to a defenseless Tom.
I love how you've given each character such quirks (like Bill texting in caps) and then stuck with it. It's all so cracky and crazy and hilarious! (And thanks to you I'm sleeping with the light on tonight to make sure the creepy runaway monkey doesn't sneak into my hair! ^__^)
Author's Response: Hahah yes I felt that the monkey needed more story time. I'd definitely freak out if a monkey was in my hair or on my back. I'd run like hell! I'm so glad you found it hilarious and that you liked Stanley! He was literally a last minute decision character. And I'm really glad you could picture the running back and forth because I hoped I wrote it in a visual enough way. I think one of the best things about writing a chapter every day is the fact that I remember the quirks and am able to put them in later chapters. I know that if I had like a week between updates, that would be hard. Thank you so so much for reading and enjoying!! And don't worry about monkeys! I think they only like dreads. Or so I've heard :P Haha thank you!
Date: 06/13/11 09:58 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
haha oooh wow, never though that could ever happen.
Author's Response: Nor did I. Nor did I. But! I have learned while writing this story, that just about anything is possible as long as it makes people laugh. And I hope the craziness made you laugh! Thank you for readingggg :D
Date: 06/13/11 09:53 pm Title: Messenger Monkeys
This story is so very cracked and so very hilarious! Bill is really adorably neurotic and actually very sincere in his own neurotic way. But the monkey, oh my heavens, when Tom saw a real live monkey, I lost it. In a crazy way it proves Bill has some valid ideas even in his special little mind. (I loved Highlights as a kid!!) And poor Tom trying to cover up the monkey and always keep his cool.
This story really is insane but that's all part of its charm! Thanks so much for all the laughs!
Author's Response: I do realize that this story is quite insane, but I am so glad you find it charming and funny!! Thank you soo much for reviewing! You have a very good grasp on our little Bill, I think. He is neurotic but it is so damn endearing. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts! :D
Date: 06/13/11 09:02 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
This story is FUCKING HILARIOUS! Keep updating please :)))))
Author's Response: Thank you so so SO much!! I will keep updating I promise promise :) XD
Date: 06/13/11 07:43 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
im wearing my best wtf face xD
monkeys are baaaaaaaad xD
Author's Response: I am interested in how good your wtf face is ;) For real though, monkeys are reallly baaaaad. My brother was legitimately bit by one, once. I'll be damned if it ever happens to me. Thanks for readin'! :D
Date: 06/13/11 07:35 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
I adore how the monkey inspires such terror. Was the monkey looking for bugs in Tom's dreads? I hope there's gonna be a dramatic scene in which Bill removes the dart from Tom's ass.
Author's Response: I mean, I personally love monkeys. But not everyone does...not everyone does.. I suppose he might have thought Tom's dreads were his brothers and sisters? Haha I may just have to do that scene. We shall see. I have not yet begun the next chapter but I will shortly! :D
Date: 06/13/11 06:18 pm Title: Sweating Balls
Dude, my reviews are the fucking Bees needs. The Cats pyjama's The jizz in your fucking pants.
Author's Response: Perhaps also the bomb dot com? Just thought I'd throw that one in there! Though are you sure about the bee one? Bees are assholes.
Date: 06/13/11 06:13 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
That. is amazing. Like, legit. I love it :L FUCKING MESSENGER MONKEYS D: (we need one at our wedding)
Author's Response: That is amazing that you find this amazing. Thank you sooooo fucking much! :D We'll definitely need a messenger monkey to be the ring bearer I think. Although, we'll have to make sure that it is a trustworthy one that doesn't take off with shiny things. This may be hard to find... -_-
Date: 06/13/11 05:57 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
I'm always surprised of the equipment Bill finds out of nowhere....I love it. i wish my life was like that just random stuff popping out. Love it! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yes it seems that whatever Bill needs, Bill gets. So Tom better watch out haha. Thank you so much! I wish my life was like that, too. Like if I could have one of those Mary Poppins' bags that holds every freaking thing in the world. And I could just reach in and grab out a snack, or a book, or a cat, whenever I wanted, it would be amaaazing lol. Thank you!! I shall keep on keeping on :)
Date: 06/13/11 05:48 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
Shit, this fic is fucking hilarious and hot at the same time. Every time I read a new chapter I piss my pants in excitement. xD
Author's Response: Gah thank you so freaking much!! Hilarious and hot is precisely the combo that I'm going for. And as strange as it sounds, I'm glad it makes you piss your pants hhahaha. :D
Date: 06/13/11 05:27 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
Hahahaha totally didnt see that coming but when it came to this fic, i never do and that's what i find so entertaining! Hilarious chapter as usual ! This fic really should not be read while in a public place.
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad I can keep the story from being predictable. So happy you found it hilarious! Not only should it not be read in public, but it should not be written in public. I have learned this the hard way haha. I had to take one of the kids I nanny to the doctor today and when I was in the waiting room I was writing on my phone and was giggling and receiving strange looks lol. Thank you for reading and keeping with this!!
Date: 06/13/11 05:25 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
Poooorrrrrrr Tomiiiiiiii. Laughed so hard. Your Bill is so hyper with his dick thoughts. He doesn't give it a rest. You had me in stitches again.
Author's Response: Bill just can't stop thinking and talking about dicks haha. He loves them. And yes poor Tom! But I'm so happy this made you laugh hard. That's what I want most of all from this story, is to make people laugh!! :D
Date: 06/13/11 05:03 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
This is a terrible time to take a nap!
XDD this chapter made me lol so hard!! XDD
Author's Response: So sorry it interfered with your napping but I'm so glad it made you laugh that hard!!! XD
Date: 06/13/11 04:59 pm Title: When You're Fifteen
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ...That's all I have to say for this one... :) :) :)
Author's Response: That was just the response I was looking for, for this chapter :) so thank you soooo much!!! Haha