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Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 11:16 pm Title: Sharing is Caring

How could this not be amusing! I'm enjoying this still of course!

Author's Response: Eeeeek I'm so so glad. Thank you!! :D I just don't want it to be quantity over quality you know? So if by chance I start producing utter crap, let me know, k?? ;) Thank youuuu!

Reviewer: Whitley009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 11:02 pm Title: Sharing is Caring

Best story EVER!!!!!!

Author's Response: Noooo way but thank you so so much for saying so! You made me smile really really big :D

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 10:58 pm Title: Sharing is Caring

Don't worry it's stll very funny. Keep up the writing. Love it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. Thank you so much! I'm definitely going to keep it up, I promise :) I just don't want it to get dull. So you gotta tell me if it's getting dull, k? Thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 10:55 pm Title: Sharing is Caring

Don't worry, it's definitely still funny! Every new chapter I find new favorite lines. Bill was hilarious with his British accent cause of his glasses thing. I wish I had a friend like him, he seems so fun to be around! Thank you so much for this update, you saved me from my very very boring study time!

Author's Response: Okay thank you so much! Dude, I'm totally studying right now, too. I have a test in the morning. Siiggggh. But then it's the weekend!! Wheeee! Seriously though, thank you so much! I've had such a long day and your review made me smile :D Good luck with your studying!

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 09:58 am Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Disney World xD this was a more serious chapter and i kinda like it better (my opinion) lol great epp!!

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! There is going to be more serious stuff intermingled with the funny from now on. So I hope you continue to like it! And yes, Disney World XD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 12:56 am Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

God Tom's screwed xD Oooh He's surpise part should just be them two! But I dunno XDD

Author's Response: I think I want you to be as surprised as Bill is. So I'm not letting out any secrets ;) hehe. But that is actually a great idea! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 12:47 am Title: Dart in the Ass

Awww :D Serious progress here :D

Author's Response: Mhmmm and there will only be more to come!! :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 11:07 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Tom missed a prime opprotunity to interrogate Bill on things he would like for his party during that phone call.He wouldn't've even had to be all that sneaky really. All he would've had to do was be all "so if hypothetically someone were going to throw you a surprise party what..." And if on the off chance that Bill caught on that they weren't such hypothetical questions, he would underdtand, nd in order to make himself forget flash himself with that memory eraser stick from Men In Black, cuz you KNOW he must have one. He is just that awesome.

I loved the shower curtain thing. It was positively hilarious. Keep up the wonderful work. I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: He really did. Poor Tom has got a lot of shit to figure out in a short amount of time haha. And I'm pretty sure he definitely has a memory eraser flashing thing from Men in Black. Most certainly. He has all equipment that is awesome, including a monster dick. hahaha. Thank you sooo much! I'm glad you found it hilarious. I shall keep on keeping on. I hope you like the next chapter!!

Reviewer: kassandra_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 10:30 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

I like the idea of him training tom in that field

Author's Response: Mmmm I do, too XD

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 05:58 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Hahaha, he really got that mad because of disney world? because andi left with his parents instead? Oh Boy, Bill! you little drama queen, you! ^^ But he's still adorable, especially when he's bragging about that monster cock of his! Haha, and Tom... the tom you're portraying here.. I don't really know why, but he turns me the fuck on :D All the time.. hehe MY dick is always rock hard when i finish your chapters ;) Hehe! Yup, still my herooo :D

Author's Response: Bill is suuuuuch a drama queen. But yah, he's kind of adorably dirty with his monster cock talk haha. I'm glad that you're liking Tom :) :) And yes!!! It is totally my goal to get your dick hard by the end of the chapters! Mission completed. Haha thank you so so much!!! :D

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:42 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Can't wait to see what's going to happen with the surprise party. Bill is such a hardcore little teenager! I wish Tom all the luck with him!

You cracked me up with just your first paragraph. The serious tone of Bill pondering Tom and then realizing that feeling meant he was falling, no really falling! I just lost it. That was beautifully written comedy! Thanks for all the laughs!

Author's Response: I wish Tom all the luck as well! He's got a lot to live up to haha. I'm so glad I made you laugh. I didn't know if everyone would catch what I was trying to do there, but you certainly did ;) Thank you sooo much! Your review made me smile. I hope you like the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:32 pm Title: Dart in the Ass

Another hilarious update! Unlike Tom, I choose to believe Bill's explanation of what happened to the monkey. Anything to keep away the creepy nightmares...

It was also funny how tough Stanley could be with little Bill since he had to make up for losing face with the monkey. Bill continues to be adorable with the hockey gear, and poor, poor Tom. It seems like he keeps getting the short end of the stick! Hope things look up soon for him!

Author's Response: Yes let's go with Bill's explanation for sure. At least with his, the monkey is happy and drumming away with his tribe! Ohhhh Stanley. Having to act like a hard ass when we all know that he's secretly a wimp hehe. And don't worry, things will def look up for Tom :D Thank you soo much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:16 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Ha ha! Silly Billy and the evil shower curtain from hell... I love it when they talk. :) Thanks for the update once again!

Author's Response: I love it when they talk, too :) And thank YOU for reading and reviewing!! :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:08 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Bill is damn random it's hilarious. I can't get enuff of this story =)

Author's Response: Haha thank you soo so so much! I'll keep giving you guys more as long as you want it :)

Reviewer: cuddlepoopz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 04:05 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Lmao I feel bad for Bill for getting stuck in the curtain. Haha Tom better get that party done or Bill may never forgive him. Haha I should have seen Bill being upset with Andi for such a...weird reason. Haha

Author's Response: Poor Bill and the awkward and uncomfortable things that happen to him lol. Seriously, the pressure is on Tom. And me haha. Disney World is just very important to Bil hahaha. But! He would have kept dating Andi I believe if he had not moved to Bermuda..but he still would have been bitter about Disney World for the duration of their relationship lol :P

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 03:59 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

k bye...lmao. Presious, I'm tellin' ya.

Author's Response: D'aww thanksss :D :D

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 03:54 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

There are alot of amazing stories here, but this has to be my favorite. Bill is so adorably funny. Keep writing and we will all keep reading.

Author's Response: You have literally just made my day. Thank you so much! I will absolutely keep writing :D Thank you!

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 03:26 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Awww it was shorter and sorta a cliffhanger, well not to be disappointed with that! i can see great things forthcoming over the next chapter! :) Once again, i repeat myself, awesome job! :) -hugs-

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! :D *hugs back*

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 03:25 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Shower curtains disgust me. I knew they were our enemy, what with them constricting young'uns and being all germy and moist.

Tom better deliver with that party. Bill might go mobster on his ass.

Author's Response: Oh dead Lord, moist is one of the grossest words on this planet, and yet it so accurately describes shower curtains. And therefore, shower curtains really are disgusting. Blech. Tom seriously does need to deliver. I feel the pressure hahaha. Thanksss for reading and reviewing :D

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 03:23 pm Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain

Cute : D I hate shower curtains! OH OH OH Tom should take Bill to Disneyworld for his birthday : DDDD

Author's Response: Thank youuu! Yeah shower curtains are pretty disgusting. That's actually a really good idea! Maaaaybe he will. We'd better hope Tom gives Bill something good. We don't want a sad little Bill on our hands ;)

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