Date: 06/17/11 10:11 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
it was really good by far the best chapter yet
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you sooo much! :D
Date: 06/17/11 09:58 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
I get such a big stupid grin every time i see that banner pop up for an update. I liked that this chap had some seriousness along with the silliness. It's beginning to show the depth of the main characters, beyond lust. Are we going to find out anything about Tom too, or just Bill? It's all good either way.
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I got a huge, stupid grin when I read this review. I'm glad you liked the silly/serious mixture because I think that it is necessary for this point in the story and for the next several chapters at least. You'll definitely find out more about both Tom AND Bill. Mysteries and secrets shall be revealed. So stay tuned. Please? I like it when you read and reviewww :D
Date: 06/17/11 09:18 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
I love that then end was more serious. I really would like Bill to tell Tom more about himself. I feel like they could be so good together. Bill's awkwardness is just great! (:
Author's Response: I'm really really glad you liked that the end was a bit more serious. I know that it's not really typical for this story. I'm definitely going to have Bill tell Tom about himself. I'm excited to write that chapter! I'm glad you like the awkwardness because it's definitely not going anywhere ;) Thank youuu!!
Date: 06/17/11 09:13 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
Don't worry -- you haven't lost your comic touch! ~__^ Bill's different little personalities are strangely endearing. I still can't wait to see what Tom comes up with for the birthday party.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying so! I'm glad you find Bill endearing. I'm pretty sure people could either find him endearing or annoying haha. I can't wait to write that chapter in which the surprise happens. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/17/11 09:03 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
i think tom should know,it will show him a new side of bill and i loved this chapter even thought the end was serious there was still a hint of humor
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I agree that Tom should know and I'm definitely going to write a chapter in which Bill spills his secrets. At least some of them ;) I'm glad you liked the chapter and thank you so much for reading!
Date: 06/17/11 08:44 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
HA HA HA!!! I love Bill so much...
Author's Response: I love you for loving Bill :D Thank youuuuu!! And I'm pretty sure he loves you, too ;)
Date: 06/17/11 08:39 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
XD Freaking Bill talking all that time during the BJ. But poor Bill D: I actually can't wait till he and Tom talk about what happened
Author's Response: He cannot shut up I swear haha. I'm glad you can't wait. I actually can't wait to write that part because it's gonna bring them sooo much closer. Thank you for reading and reviewing :D :D
Date: 06/17/11 08:19 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations
The serious from time to time is a nice balance from the randomness and humor. Me gusta! The stuff Bill was talking about during the blowjob were hysterical! And the part about the cherries was the best!
I would like to learn about Bill, and some about Tom too. Why is Bill as unique as he is?
Author's Response: I'm glad you find it to be a nice balance! Me gusta that you gusta haha. Bill just can't seem to shut up. Even during sexy times. Haha I'm glad the cherry part made you laugh :D I would looove to tell you more about Bill and Tom. And I believe I shall in the coming chapters! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing darling ;)
Date: 06/17/11 06:04 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
I've been reading this story since the very beginning, I'm soooo sorry for not commenting earlier but I really love it. It is the perfect combination of. Humour and sexy hotness that totally brightens my day.
I love how close their getting :)
Author's Response: Please don't apologize for not commenting earlier, I'm just so happy that you are commenting now! Thank you so so much! This is such a sweet review and it's made my day even better :) I'm glad you like the closeness because they're going to be getting much closer very soon! Thank you!
Date: 06/17/11 04:51 pm Title: Sweating Balls
I will do that :D But for now its not utter crap so don't worry :D
Author's Response: Okay :D Thank you so much!
Date: 06/17/11 03:25 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
I cannot believe i´m so late in finding this story.
And not even speaking about how slow i´ve been at reading my way through-
I literally cover my mouth as soon as Bill does or says anything. I don´t wanna risk him jumping out of the story and whacking me in the head with a newspaper.I can´t stop squealing at the thought of how lovesick Tom is. He´s so far gone he has no idea.The poor guy.Now he just needs to make every one of Bills dreams when it comes to his party come true. And he also need to have some more sexytimes with Bill. Keep going the same way you have been writing the entire time. You my dear friend are a true master when it comes to mixing funny with hot and sexy.
Author's Response: I don't even mind if you think you're finding this story late. I'm just glad you found it and are reading it! Thank you so much for your sweet words and I love that you're afraid Bill's gonna pop outta your screen hahahaha. You never know what that kid is gonna do. I promise Tom is going to make Bill's birthday very special ;) and there will def be more sexytimes. In fact, in the chapter today there will be!! Thanks again :D
Date: 06/17/11 01:30 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
I WANT moooore ^^
Author's Response: There shall be more!!! :D As long A's you want it!
Date: 06/17/11 12:28 pm Title: Sweating Balls
Of course I will, I'm amazing :) On no, fank choo ;)Fucking ugly little kid ¬¬ I know this ugly troll kid. He's horrid. Absolutely despicable. Wouldn't share his skittles with me >< Whyyy my baby is friends with him, I'll never know... ANYPOODLE! Only pretties :)
Author's Response: Why don't the troll kids ever share?! If they just shared then maybe people could see past their trolliness. Sigh. But yes, only the pretty prettiest ;)
Date: 06/17/11 12:25 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
Haha, you're writing is sooooo amazing, and funny! Bill is a great character, I love him, he's childish and a bit mad, but I do really like him, he cracks me up so much! And everything you write, that part about disneyworld for instant, and that part where Bill told Tom about that hot dog eating contest he won xD I mean, seriously, it's so fucking funny and original. No one writes the way you do,and you should be proud. I mean, i start laughing at least 6 times when I read just ONE of your chapters :D Haha, this story is so hilarious but also one of the sexiest stories I've read in a while! :P
Author's Response: Oh. My. God. This is seriously one of the best reviews I have ever received. Thank you sooooo much for everything you said! Like, I want to get working on the next chapter right now because of this review. But I've gotta go to work. So I'll have to do that a bit later but I might just read your review again before I start writing lol. Seriously, thank you so much! You made my day :D For real.
Date: 06/17/11 12:13 pm Title: Sharing is Caring
noooooo thats so not fair, you always end the chapters like this....... i am offically boycotting cliff-hangers lol
Author's Response: Yeahhhh but you know I'm gonna come through for you today :) If I only posted once a month then I would give you full permission to call me an asshole for ending it like that haha. But later today, I promise you'll get what you want! :D
Date: 06/17/11 11:59 am Title: Sharing is Caring
You can't be funny all the time. Bill is about to teach Tomi, he has to be serious. Bwahahahahahah. As serious as that crazy kid can be!
I keep having this one thing pop in my head and it makes me laugh. Tom on top of Bill with his dreads down and Bills freaking out about the dreads getting him, laying on him like snakes and fights them. LOL! You gotta use it sometime!
*waiting for more*
Author's Response: You are very right. When it comes to that kind of teaching, you've gotta get down to business and be super serious. Or just..sort of serious in Bill's case lol. Ahahah that's a hilarious image. I may just have to use that! *is excited to give you more* Thank you! :D
Date: 06/17/11 11:47 am Title: Bill vs Shower Curtain
Tom totally needs to take Bill to Disney world now!
Author's Response: I think that is a fantastic idea! But the surprise is top secret for now. I want you all to be just as surprised as Bill! :D
Date: 06/17/11 11:40 am Title: Sharing is Caring
Don't worry, you're doing good. It's the story that is great, and of course it can be hard forcing the way Bill is, but I suppose even he can have periods of extreme funny behaviour as well as periods of almost seeming normal *G*
Still loving it. Bill is super cute and Tom is reduced to a lovesick fool, trying to keep his pants and sanity together :). They're both adorable :)
love Maria
Author's Response: Okay, thank you so much. You've made me so great about the story :) I'm glad you're still loving it and I'm so glad you're still reading and reviewing. That makes me so happy! Thank you :D
Date: 06/17/11 11:34 am Title: Dart in the Ass
HAHHAHHAHHAH!
Author's Response: hahahaha :D XD
Date: 06/17/11 11:10 am Title: Sharing is Caring
I still think you add hilarity to it while stayin with the whole storyline.
Author's Response: That's an amazing compliment because sometimes it's hard to not let it get too random, ya know? So thank you so so much! :D