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Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 11:06 pm Title: In and Out

soooo...i'm totoally lurking the shit outta this, and i admit that i did skim a bit here and there, but this cracky goodness has successfully ruined my study weekend xD oh, and i had to finally show my face in this place cuz i TOTALLY WENT TO SEE HP AT MIDNIGHT, TOO! only i dressed up as rose weasley-tho nobody knew that. i just looked like a redheaded stepchild in a hogwartz uniform har har

Author's Response: Firstly, I wanna apologize for screwing up your study weekend! This story is sooo damn long and I don't blame you for skimming, lol. But hell yeah I'm so excited you've been enjoying it!

And listen, I'm really happy that Harry could prompt you to show your face because I was delighted when I saw this review! I love that you dressed up as someone more obscure though. You know there are worse things you could look like than a redheaded stepchild hogwart's student. I bet you were adorbz x10 :D

Thank you so much for reading! I really am so happy that you took the time to get through this thing. But go study now, kay? <3 I need to study, too. Booo school.

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 05:59 pm Title: Garlic Pancakes

This was a nice long chapter! Haha, sleeping Bill is still weird. But I’m glad we know a little more about him now. It was his parents he was talking about right? About the whole Saturday tradition. Well, at least he is opening up to Tom, even if he may not be telling a lot. Who the hell would want to sprinkle garlic on pancakes? Poor Tomi is even allergic garlic! Bill is so superstitious, thinking that Tom is a vampire just because he’s allergic to garlic.

The shower part was HOT! Even thought Bill is a bit too serious about the sleeping over part. Like with the whole swimming suit and all. But Tom made sure those came off! Tom finally got to touch Bill’s ass, which I’m sure he will be doing a lot from now on. I have to agree with Tom, the prize for the worst dirty talk in the world should be Bill’s. Yay, Bill want Tom to be his first! I love Virgin!Bill for some reason, probably because he is so innocent and cute. I really want to know what Tom has planned for Bill’s birthday!

Have you already posted the new story? I would love to read it after this one! I’m pretty sure that all your stories are going to be good! We took the pictures yesterday, and I was dressed up as a lab girl. I wanted to try the 80’s one you suggested, but that idea was already taken. And about the dressing up as Bill, I could probably not pull it off. Nobody can dress up as Bill, and actually do it right xD So anything exiting happening? Because my life right now is rather boring :( Bye! ^^

Author's Response: I posted that right before I left on vacation for a week! So I wanted it to be long :D Bill is so weird in many ways, sleeping is no exception it seems. They miiiight have been who he was talking about... You're going to find out sooo soon! You really are almost to that chapter, I think! Haha, I hope that no one would ever actually do that! Bill is just so paranoid and silly. Lucky he has Tom who sticks by his side ;)

I'm realllly glad you liked the shower part! Tom is definitely going to be partaking on that ass more often, hehe. I love Bill as a virgin too! I'm excited for you to read on and find out what happens with the birthday ;)

Yep! I am four chapters into my new story. But I only update once a week or so, so it shouldn't get too far without you. You're so sweet to want to read it! Aww I bet you looked adorable!! And girl, it really would be hard to dress as Bill. But hilarious and fun to try! Nothing too exciting going on here! I'm just really happy about seeing the boys the other night when they won the OMA :D I was so excited, that I wrote a little one-shot about it lol. Thank you sooo much for reading and for this review!! You're never boring to meeee <3 <3 Kbye!

Reviewer: Siljukka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 02:15 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

Oh... Where should i start?
I haven't read fanfiction in a long time (ok, in 2 months but it's long time for me... :D) but last Monday I just got a feeling that I just have to read twincest. I read a few oneshots and one longer fic, which sucked, so I was still hungry for good twincest. Then I found Work Out! :D
First when I read the summary I thought that this will be just another mediocre fic in here, but I was wrong.
This was something über fucking great! :D
I've never laughed so much while reading a fic. I've never read a story where Bill's dick is bigger than Tom's... I've never read a story where Bill farts or takes a shit. It's always Georg who is farting. :(
Hmmh... OH, I thought first that 42 chapters are too much and I would be bored but I was wrong... again. :D I could read über 42 chapters more of these adorable boys and be not bored. :D
The most laughable thing was Bill's way to text. And there were lots of other laughable things and im too lazy to remember them (Larry the Lizard, monkey... and their trip to Disney World.
Hmmh... I've got lot to say but im too excited about reading the oneshots. But hey, I just need to tell you that the first time scene was the best first time scene I've ever read!
And the names of the chapters, I LOVED THEM. :D
And the airplane sex.
And Bill's monster cock and his jizz... Ok, I stop now.
Oh, and the hub.

I'll definitely read this again.
Thank you so much for writing this. :D

Author's Response: Everything about this review was so amazing. Seriously! Thank you so so much. For taking the time to read this LONG story and for leaving me such lovely thoughts. I can't even begin to tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed it so much. And the fact that you didn't get bored through all 42 chapters is sooo great! I know the summary doesn't even begin to warn you about how random this story is, lol. I'm just...so pleased! I tried to write something that I've never seen before and I'm glad that it was that way for you too! Also, thank you for the compliment about their first time together. I was super nervous about that chapter! Thank you again so so so much for reading. This review was so attentive and I love that you pointed out your favorite parts. I really hope you enjoy the oneshots! I am so smiley right now. Thank YOU! I would be so flattered if you read it again. :D <3

Reviewer: foreversacred13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/11 09:34 pm Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

CUTE. Soooooo fuckin' cute! :D I loved it! And, oh man, I laughed so much! That was just such a supercalifragalisticexpialidocious story! (; It was so original and awesome! :D Thank you for writing it! You most deff deserve a private dance from Tom to "Whip My Hair!" ;D

Author's Response: Seeing this review seriously made me so happy! First of all, congratulations for getting through this suuuper long story! Hehe. Second of all, thank you sooo much for reading. I am positively delighted that it made you laugh so much. And oh!! I loooove that adjective. And I'm so flattered that you think that about my story. I'm so happy I could entertain you. Thank YOU for reading! Really. :D Awww, okay I'll write a letter to Tom and demand a dance from him. haha, thank you again! <3

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/11 02:16 pm Title: Grab My Ass?

Aww, we didn’t get details about that amazing blow job! If it was so intense, then you should have written it all! My god, I’m perverted! XD Speaking of perverted, I just find out today that it apparently isn’t illegal to have sex with animals here in Denmark. I can’t understand why there is no law against that! That is so fucked up! Those who does that, must be the most disgusting and perverted people! Ugh…

Now back to the story, Tom as the double rainbow guy? Just try to imagine! I’m glad that he isn’t THAT gay! Because seriously that guy was just retarded! I don’t blame Bill for losing his boner. Ha, Tom trying to deny that fact that he wants to grab Bill’s ass. Oh please, he is so obvious. Who wouldn’t want to grab Bill’s ass? Especially now! xD Indeed, anything that has to do with Bill’s dick must be amazing *nods.* Really, how can he fall asleep peeing? *shakes head*
I would never have imagined Bill as the big spoon, but it’s nice seeing him as one!

Sorry for not reviewing for a while, but I’ve been really busy lately. I’m glad that I don’t live near any owls, because that must have been creepy! Psychology seems nice to study. I’m glad you love it, cause it’s the worst to begin studying something and then finding out that you don’t like it that much anyway. Btw, I’m back from the Netherlands, and to my steady internet! We drove there, so we had to drive through Germany. I would have loved to spend time there, but we couldn’t. Damn it!

I actually want to ask if you have any good ideas for costumes? Not for Halloween, but just costumes in general. We have to take class pics next week, and since it’s my last year (in what i guess would be called public school?) so we take an extra picture where we are dressed up and well, just doing whatever we want. And I don’t know what to dress up as! Btw, do you know how sweet you are? Love to you as well!

Author's Response: Haha, I wrote some of it! I actually had to go back and read because I totally forgot what I put in this chapter. But if you want something more detailed, I'm sure there's that later in the story :D OH! That is seriously disgusting! It should be illegal everywhere. We can pretend like it is, kay? Hahaa no I don't think he could ever be THAAAT gay. Tom totally wants to grab Bill's ass though. And he definitely will at some point. :D I don't know how Bill does most of the things that he does. He is a mystery! Awww, I'm glad you like seeing him as the big spoon. It's a cute thing to imagine. It's okay that you've been busy! I completely understand that. I too am glad that there are no longer owls in my life, lol. Psychology is realllly interesting! There's actually a lot of it in my new story. I hope that once you get through this beast of a story, you might want to check that out. :) I'm glad you got back safely and you're with your lovely internet! I would love to go to Germany someday. Hopefully both of us will get our chances at some point in our lives. Hmmm costumes. I'm terrible at this. You could dress up as BILL hahaha. No but seriously that would be adorable. Or you could just wear lots of make up and tacky clothes and say you're from the 80s. :D And hey, there's no way that I'm as sweet as you! Seriously. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me another lovely review! Love you! :)

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/27/11 01:45 pm Title: Tom's Secret Fear

Well I was bored so I wandered my way over here and though 'Hey which chapter should I read tonight?' and of course, I thought, this one!! It's definitely amazing, and the only way it could be improved is if Tom DID pee his pants, because that would be cute but totally not sexy so maybe it would ruin the mood a little.

Anyway, a scared Tomi is the cutest type of Tomi, I think I wouldn't mind just gobbling him up or keeping him in my pocket or under my bed so I could pull him out and cuddle him all the time!

Anyway it's nearly time for the next ONE SHOOOT! I don't know if I already said this but I completely forgot what my long review was because I didn't think I would actually have to wait this long, to read it. HEY LOOK I'M PUNCUATING LIKE YOU AGAIN. Sorry I am under the influence of the tiniest bit of alcohol, and when that happens I tend to ramble, but luckily for you it is only a TIIINY bit of alcohol so it is still somewhat coherent and well spelt.

Anyway love you bye! Wait that was abrupt enough. kbye.

Author's Response: I love it when you wander your way over heeeeeeere! And I adore that you go through the chapters and pick one to read. Just like Bill does with the animal books! :D It would have been hilarious and sad if Tom had peed, lol. But yes, adorable. Because he would have been so embarrassed. You can go ahead and gobble him a little. He also likes to be placed in pockets and cuddled. So you're in luck! YES IT'S ALMOST TIME! I'm gonna post it on Sundaaaaay :D I'm so excited for you to read it. HAHA YOU ARE. I've been trying to cool it on the commas lately though. But it's hard! I feel you on the tiny bit of alcohol. I'm glad that you're still coherent so that I can read your lovely words! I love you tooooo! hehehe, k bye. You make me smiiiiile.

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 01:44 pm Title: Tom's Secret Fear

I’m always happy to read! Both the story and your response! I leaned something new today too! All those facts about owls. But I have to agree with Tom, they are some freaky sons of bitches! Poor Tomi!! I like scared!Bill but scared!Tomi is just as adorable! Who would have thought that a real “guy” as Tom is scared of scary movies? That kind of reminds me of scary movie. Seen them? Though I’m pretty sure everybody has. I’ve actually never seen the exorcist, but I would love too. I’ve never seen saw either, but I don’t dare see it alone, and nobody I ask wants to see it with me. ):

Bad Bill, bad! He can’t laugh at Tom’s fear! But he was sweet to him in the end. Offering oral sex and all! Tom took the right decision. He would have been an idiot if he said no to that! The toilet experience that Bill was remembering must have been embarrassing. God, I’m glad that has never happened to me before! But he is kinda dense, not that that is surprising. :D

Ohh, you’re in university? What do you study? Now I feel really small, considering I’m still in school XD but 5 weeks for winter break is nice. I think we’ve only get 2 weeks at most. I’m not much of a world traveler. I’ve never been to all those exotic or otherworldly kind of places. Now that I know about machu picchu, I would kill to go there! I love reading you stories because they are good! I love you sense of humor! I’m lucky to have met you! I glad I got to read another chapter, and right now I’m waiting for the net to come back so I can post this review! Indeed. It’s sad, but true. We use n the internet way too much! Okay bye hon! ^^

Author's Response: I'm glad you could learn something new! I had to look up those facts about the owls, lol. Well, about ALL of the animals mentioned in this story pretty much. They really are freaky! A family of them used to live in a tree outside my parents' house and they would just stare at us every time we walked out of the door. Eeeek. Poor Tom, I know! I really wanted to have the tough guy be afraid of something like that. There are other things later in the story that Tom is afaid of, hehe. I HAVE seen the Scary Movies. They're funny! And the Exorcist...just don't ever watch it alone, k? Unless it's daylight out and you're not in a scared kind of mood, lol. That movie is realllly freaky. Haha Bill is so mean to tease! But Tom teases him about things too, so I suppose it's even. Sorta. Haha. That really was considerate of him, lmao. I can't ever envision Tom saying no to an offer like that! Bill is rather dense, isn't he? The strangest things happen to him! :D I am indeed in University! I study Psychology and I really love it. Don't feel really small! You'll get there eventually, I just happened to be born before you. :) You've still been to a lot of cool places, though! You really should go to Machu Picchu someday if you have the chance. It was amazing. Awww you're making me smile so big! Thank you so much for reading my stories. It delights me that you love them and that you like my sense of humor. I know it's pretty out there sometimes! Seriously though, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review while you're on break and with testy internet. You're the best! Love to you! <3

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 05:23 pm Title: Worst Phone Etiquette

Okay, I finally came around to read some! Now to reviewing! Indeed, Bill and phones is a terrible combination! And I’m still of the opinion that drunk Bill is hilarious. The phone etiquette class didn’t do him much good. He still rambles on about nothing! It was good that Nat came to save Tom from hearing more of that weird voicemail. Thought with the course that conversation was taking, I’m not so sure he would have minded! XD I loved Tom’s reaction to the voicemail as well! Bill is still not opening up, but I hope he will soon. I’m really excited to know what Tom has planned for Bill’s birthday. Hehe, I like where this is going! ;)

How come you don’t get an autumn holiday? But you kind of already got one! Just before everybody else. I’m actually in the Netherlands right now. I have family here (my aunt and her family) and we decided to come stay here for the holidays. Their internet here just doesn’t work at the moment, it comes and goes, and I haven’t been able to be on the net for long. And I can’t survive without internet! Btw, the locked cat thing with my friend was scary! The more realistic side of us though that it might have been a mouse, but that is just as scary as a ghost XD

I just saw that you have updated PS, so I’m gonna go and read that. I just hope the internet doesn’t disappear before i can get to it. Bye! ^_^

Author's Response: Yay! Always so happy to see you here, love. :D Bill really is quite terrible and awkward with phones, isn't he? With talking on them AND texting, lol. Nat is a good friend for him to have, handling his crazy and keeping him from screwing things up with Tom. But you're right, I don't think Tom would have minded so much, hehe. Bill takes time to open up, but he definitely will eventually! I can't wait for you to get further into the story. The plot actually starts to develop more haha. I'm so happy you like where this is going! Realllly. My university doesn't have an autumn holiday because we get 5 weeks off for winter break! So it kind of makes up for it :D You're in the Netherlands? You're such a world traveler! I love it. Ohhh my gosh I am hopeless without the internet. It's sad, but true! I'm really so glad that you got it to work long enough to read and review. Thank you so much! Things are ALWAYS scarier when it seems like there's a ghost involved! Very true. Eeeee, I just responded to your review on PS. I'm just really happy that you like reading my stories so much. I'm a lucky girl. :D <3

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/11 04:23 pm Title: Drunk Bill

Bill really does believe in ghosts! I don’t believe in them, but sometimes one just wonders. Like, have you ever tried being in a room, and then suddenly the lights turn off in the room you are in, but not in the rest of the house? It’s scary! But sometimes it can be funny as well. Like one time we (me and my friend) were watching tv at her place, and we hear scratching sounds and everything. In the end we find out that it’s her cat that has somehow been locked up in a drawer. Poor cat!

Drunk Bill is hilarious! Though not that different from the sober one. I’m just wondering why he gets the urge to call Nat when he’s taking a shit. If I was her, then I would find that offending, but I’m not Nat, so it’s amusing! I see that Bill is obsessed with animals. Well, real Bill does say he loves animals. And really, Bill sang a song about Tom’s pretty dick? ohh Bill. *shakes head* And he never listens does he? Bad boy! He is sooo gonna say something to Tom that he will regret later. I’m sure of it!

Off topic, but wow, I haven’t been in here in a while! Sorry for that. But I just found this series, Queer as folk, and I’ve been watching it non-stop! I love it! Have you ever seen it? Btw, fortunately I have never had a fight with my shower curtain… yet. I will make sure to read more next week (and this weekend) because I have autumn holidays. I had a shitty day today though, even if it was the last. Test in the morning, and exercise day for the rest. I’m so glad I have free time for a while now! Byee!

Author's Response: Bill does indeed believe in them, lol. I don't know for sure if they exist, and so I don't say if I believe in them one way or another. But I've definitely had some experiences that could be construed as ghostly! But yes, sometimes when I turn out the lights and I'm all alone, I get chills up my back. But i'm almost positive that it's all in my head, haha. Aww that poor cat! But poor you and your friend too, because that must've been scaaaaary. xD Drunk Bill really isn't that different from regular Bill! Haha. Dude, there's no telling why he gets the urge to call Nat. But yeahhhh, I'm glad I'm not her! This way we can just laugh at her situation. :D Bill realllly loves animals in this. And it's funny because they seem to attack him a lot. :D Bill will more than likely always say and do the most awkward thing in any situation, even if he's been told better. That boy... *sighs and shakes head with you* Thank you soooo much for reading and for this review!! It's totally cool that you haven't been here for a bit, I'm just so happy that you're still reading! I HAVE seen it! Not that many episodes but I'm sure if I got into it, I would watch it nonstop too. :D Ooooh I wish I had autumn holidays! Most people do right now, but not me. D: I'm so sorry you had a shitty day. I hope that your weekend and break are great! And if you have time to read more, that would be amazing. But if you want to just chill out, I totally understand that! Thank you so much for reading and leaving this lovely review! k bye! <3

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 03:25 pm Title: Blow Job Revelations

So, I stayed home today cus I’m sick, so I went ahead and read some chapters. I was meaning to review for every one of them, but umm… I kinda couldn’t stop reading. So I’m gonna review for the past ones in this review.

Yay! Tomi is allowed in the hub. I loved Bill’s rules too, lol. No shirts. I can guess why XD Tomi is sooo not straight anymore. Their little double masturbation was HOT! Hehe, Tom and his pretty dick. Btw, have I told you that your chapter titles are amazing? They are! And their kiss in the shower was hot as hell too! The whole messenger monkey thing was so funny! I’m using too many exclamation marks.

Poor Tom has to plan a party for Bill now. Tom seriously thought that Bill’s tongue ring was a weird piece of gum? How is that even possible? The battle with the shower certain was intense! Ohh, so Andi was his boyfriend. It doesn’t surprise me that Bill couldn’t forgive Andi for going to Disneyland with his family. But where the fuck is Bermuda? That blow job was hot as well. Actually, every sexual scene you have written so far is hot! I really want Bill to open up! ^^

Ohh! I searched for Machu Picchu, and I’m speechless! That place looks incredible! And I could see the clouds around the mountain in some pictures. Could you see that when you where there? And is it really that high up? You know I’m still speechless. I can’t even… You’re so lucky to have been there! Btw, before I end this, then I was wondering when the epilogue for Precarious Serendipity would be posted? Or if you have even written it yet? Bye bye! ^_^

Author's Response: I'm so sorry you're sick! But I'm glad that you got some time to read :D I'm glad you liked Bill's rules! They are pretty crazy, huh? And yeahhh, Tom's straight points are quickly going out the window. I'm so glad you've liked their sexy little times together. There are definitely more to come! And thank you for liking my chapter titles, hehe. Ohhhh the messenger monkey...probably one of the strangest things about this story. I'm so happy that it made you laugh! Tom sure got himself in deep with the party thing! But it will definitely work out ;) I don't even know how Tom thought it was a weird piece of gum...I think he may secretly be just as strange as Bill! :D Shower curtains...I have personally had pretty bad experiences with those things. I may or may not have been writing from real life, haha. Bermuda...I don't even know where exactly it is. I just think it's a funny name for a place and so I just randomly use it sometimes, haha. Eeeeek I'm so glad you've liked the sexy scenes. I'm always nervous that they won't be as good as I hoped. Thank you so much! And Bill will definitely open up eventually. ;) Ohhh my goodness! I could definitely see the clouds when we were up there. It is SO high up. It was absolutely amazing and breathtaking...literally, haha. It was really hard to breathe up there because it is so high up. I really want to go back someday, it's so beautiful and almost otherworldly! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the last chapters :D I hope you continue to like it! Ahhh yes, the epilogue. I haven't written it yet but I'm planning on having it done and posted before the end of the month! :D

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:15 pm Title: That Time of the Month

Hilarious dear, simply hilarious! Bill on his period had me cracking up! How does he even do it? Just pretend that the he is, or does he convince himself that he is really on a period? Poor Nat, getting waked up 5 in the morning because of Billa. Aww, the hub is ruined! Rebuild it Bill, rebuild it! Haha, I actually like Tom’s mom. So entertaining! But Tom is getting a pink bathroom. Oh my. Poor Emily is suffering! What has the she ever done to meet Bill on his period? But seriously Bill? Lawn ornaments? Just why does he need that for the hub? Lol, the National Tickle Competition… Really? I’m actually wondering if such a thing exists. Probably not, would be cool though. I would certainly be a champion. I loved this chapter! :3

The trip sounds really nice! I haven’t seen any pictures, but I would love to! You know, I’ve been thinking about getting a twitter, but I’m not so sure. First of all I would probably not use it so much, and I’m not sure that many people would follow me and such. But I will let you know if I get one! I would love to talk to you there too. ^_^ hehe, it’s always nice to look. Just a little awkward if one gets caught staring, either by the person itself or by family. That’s why I never look after guys when I’m with my family. Okay, nearly never. Sorry for reviewing a little later, but school has been a bitch. I really want to kill all my teachers! I’m getting so tired of assignments *sigh* Bye dear! ^_^

Author's Response: I'm so so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I know it was definitely one of the crazier ones, haha. Bill is just...such an odd guy. I think that Bill puts Nat through a lot in their friendship! Bill must rebuild! And so he shall. I'm glad you like Tom's mom :D You get to see more of her later in the story. Man...I WISH that the National Tickle Competition existed. I would so enter that contest. You and I would have to battle it out! Again, so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much~ The trip was fantastic. You should google Machu Picchu so you can see. It's so cool. Girl, it's all good about twitter. But yeah, if you do get one, totally let me know! Agreed about the looking and getting caught, haha. I usually don't look at guys when I'm around my dad or brothers because they get all defensive. But when I'm around my mom and sister I'm all like, Oh hey there hotstuff. Haha. Not really but very nearly. ;) I completely feel you on the school thing! It's killing me slowly. I'm so happy you found time to read and review though! I appreciate it so much. I hope you've had a good day! :D

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/11 08:11 am Title: Massage Miracle

Bill really isn’t embarrassed to admit that Tom’s groaning makes him hard? Normally people would try to hide such things. Haha “You know...ugghh and oooh and ohhh yeahh baby, don't stop, and fuck yeah, that feels so good...” lol, just why would he say that? I understand the first two, but just what are the odds that Tom would say that? Lol, Bill and his dick. And yay! Tomi is confused! I’m just wondering how Bill could get lost. Hasn’t he walked home from the gym too many times to do that? Well at least he didn’t walk into that puddle again. Andi has called? Hmm... we will see. I’m surprised Tom didn’t ask how Bill had gotten his number a second time. He is easily distracted as well. Good that Tom admits to being attracted to Bill, now I just hope he will like him too.

And yes, I like fluff too! You are back from Peru! What did you do? Met any cute guys? That is if you are single, if you’re dating then you would probably not flirt with some. I hope XD lol jk. Did you sister get married there or was it just a little vacation? Bye bye hon!

Author's Response: Bill is just...completely unprecedented in his reactions to things. He has absolutely no shame in admitting things that would be totally embarrassing for the typical person. There's a lot of that in this story, lol. He's just a weirdo. That's the best I can explain it, haha. A weirdo that is obsessed with talking about his dick! Tom is indeed confused. The process of falling for Bill has begun! I don't even know how Bill got lost (I actually had to go back and read this chapter because I forgot I made him get lost again! haha). I think he is just very easily distracted, for sure. Thank goodness he evaded that damn puddle! I can't wait for you to read more about Tom and Bill's relationship. :D I feel so excited, I really do! I miss writing about these guys a lot, so it's really nice to talk to someone who is reading about them for the first time. Especially someone as lovely as you. :) Fluff for the win! I made it back from Peru! We did soo much. The BIG thing we did was go to Machu Picchu, and my sister got married there. We made it a family vacation/wedding trip. It was...indescribable. Have you seen pictures of it? I wish I could share some of my own pictures with you. You should get a twitter! I'm going to post some pictures on there and plus I'd love to talk to you on there. :D I'm not currently dating anyone but there were some beautiful people there! Unfortunately they mostly only spoke Spanish...which I only know a handful of words of, haha. But it was nice to look! Thank you so much for reading and I hope I get to talk to you soon! :D xoxo

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 05:09 pm Title: Ghosts of the Past

Loving this whole thing Huge Kudos to you Love messanger Monkey and Larry the lizard.....Bill and tom are adorable, I dont read AU,s very often but you had me reading for hours Great Job

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I am incredibly flattered and happy that you gave my story a chance. :D So happy that you enjoyed it, truly. You made me smile so big! Thank you for that, too. :)

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 11:22 am Title: Sweating Balls

You still have not replied to my email but it's okay because I have decided to go a different way with my story, which is waaaaay different. The only thing similar I think, is that Bill knows a lot about animals :3

Author's Response: I hope your new story is going well, love!! :D

Reviewer: aero1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/11 04:20 am Title: Stepping Forward and Looking Back

Such a funny and cute story. The part about "toots" had me rolling! Great job overall. =)

Author's Response: I am so delighted and grateful that you took the time to read my story! Thank you so very much! You're very sweet. Ahhh yes, the toots, haha. That word itself just makes me crack up. I'm glad I could make you laugh. Thank you, again!! :D

Reviewer: screamtillyoufeelit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/11 03:38 am Title: Our Hub

Lol bill brings out the worst in Larry!

Author's Response: Ohhhh goodness, he really does! Haha. I'm so happy that you're reading! Thank you so much for the review. :D

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/19/11 02:36 pm Title: Sweating Balls

I feel so totally bad right now. I got a pair of shark slippers! I feel like I am betraying Bill. He'd never let me into the hub wearing these! But they are just so warm and snuggly for my feet. And seeing as you will be back from Peru by the time you read this, I hope you had a really great time!!

Author's Response: Listen, it's okay. Even Bill can understand the need to buy warm and snuggly slippers. He can look past the fact that they are sharks...this time. You are still totally welcome in the hub! Hehe. Thank you so much! I had such a wonderful time. I just got back like 4 hours ago, actually. I am quite tired but I wanted to respond to your lovely review. And, I got your email! I shall reply soon. :D

Reviewer: Gabriella225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/11 02:33 pm Title: Old Man Balls

Some of Bill’s reflexes are to punch someone if they push him? I think he has gotten a little too much exercise. Not that I mind the exercise. That reminds me of real Bill. Ahh! Those arms! *melts* Anyway, I think that Bill did think of the thing that Tom thought he misunderstood it for. (ehh, make sense?) The last lines of the “fuckable” scene cracked me up! (Tom practically rejected Bill in the beginning of it though!) lol, the old man’s name is Tom too? Old man’s balls was the only explanation Bill could give? Beware of the old balls! I have seen way too many old men’s balls on omegle and chatroulette. Just… why? *shudders* But Bill was all cute getting scared like that! I just love scared!Bill for some reason. And Tom is feeling protective? About time! Is Bill seriously imagining Tom as King Triton? What is it with Bill and mermaids? Haha, cross your toes and hope to cry! I love this Bill! Or rather I love you for creating him! Bye bye for now! ^_^

Author's Response: Ohhhhh....real Bill's arms. Unnnf. I am very pleased by them. And even more pleased that you agree that they are melt-worthy. I think you just MIGHT be right about the thing that Bill thought about. That may not of made sense, either. But I get what you're saying! I'm glad those lines made you laugh, for real! :D Bill was just too frightened by the old balls, to explain it any further. I can't blame the poor boy. AND OMG YES, so many old balls on those sites! You've gotta be careful out there, k? I think that scared!Bill is adorable, too. I think it's because Tom gets to comfort him and then fluff ensues. I like fluff. Bill has a fascination with mermaids in this story, it's true. Haha. I'm so happy that you love this Bill and you totally made me smile SO big with the end of this review. I love you, too! And actually, this WHOLE review made me smile. Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy!! :)

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/11 12:34 am Title: Guinness Book of World Records

“Fucking take it out like the garbage, like I do every Wednesday night.”

This line made me laugh so hard that my dog ran away barking because she was scared that I was having a fit or something. At this rate, I'm gonna have abs like Tom's, the way I'm laughing so hard.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry that it took me so long to respond to this smile-inducing review! I've been out of the country. But, thank you so much! I'm so happy that this made you laugh. That's definitely my favorite thing to make people do and so I am completely delighted. Haha your dog. Tell her I'm sorry about that, but I'm not sorry that you were laughing so hard! You totally are going to have Tom abs. Keep up the laughing! Hopefully this story can continue to provide the ab work out material, for you. :D

Reviewer: starfirexkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/11 02:10 pm Title: Small Word, Big Deal

Awweeeeewwwwwww

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter! But I'm even happier that you're still reading. :D

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