Date: 09/10/11 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Ah! No, Amanda! You need to write more!! (this is del btw) :)
Author's Response: I'm trying!! I'm busy and I'm trying to find time! I'll do it when I can.
Date: 07/23/11 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Gosh Dani and Tom should get together. They make a cute couple (: I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always nice to hear from readers.
Date: 07/23/11 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Eight
OMG!! YOU ARE ALIVE! haha ha. And I was wondering when you would finally update this story. After reading this chapter I don't know whether to be mad or what just because Tom and Dani are great together and that Tom obvisously cares and likes Dani too. I get where you are going with this story and it is true that you can't find many stories where Tom is chasing the girl. Anyway please keep up your incredible and marvelous writing and update real soon. I most definitely cannot wait to find out what will happen next between Tom and Dani :D
Author's Response: Gah, I'm so terribly sorry for not updating in FOREVER! I'll just tell you know, you're one awesome reviewer. I was really hesitant to update at first because I STILL have not written much for the story, but I felt an update was very important. I honestly just don't know how to continue my story right now, so I really need to get on that...
Date: 06/08/11 07:53 am Title: Chapter Seven
This chapter was so great that I'm speechless lol
I think Tom REALLY does like Dani to where wants to commit to a real relationship its just that he's scarred. I say Dani should give Tom a chance. I agree who wouldn't want to make out with Tom haha ha. I can't wait to read more of this story and your awesome ideas :)
Anyway please keep up your miraculous writing and update real soon!!!
Author's Response: I'll update as fast as I can, I promise, I just need to start writing more (I only have eleven chapters on my computer) so my updates aren't too slow in the future.rnAnd for this story I wanted it to seem like Tom was chasing the girl rather than the girl chasing Tom, because I don't see that too often.rnThank you for being an awesome reviewer!
Date: 06/08/11 07:51 am Title: Chapter Six
This chapter was so great that I'm speechless lol
I think Tom REALLY does like Dani to where wants to commit to a real relationship its just that he's scarred. I say Dani should give Tom a chance. I agree who wouldn't want to make out with Tom haha ha. I can't wait to read more of this story and your awesome ideas :)
Anyway please keep up your miraculous writing and update real soon!!!
Date: 06/08/11 01:08 am Title: Chapter Seven
They are the most confused people I've ever seen and I love it! Finally, a real relationship/friend transition. It's not cliched and everything flows.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really hoping their relationship would seem as confusing as I saw it in my head
Date: 06/04/11 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Six
I really really really really really liked this. and tom as a pirate is 100 % SEXY AS HELL!!!!
Author's Response: thank you!!!! seriously, I always thought Tom would be one hell of a sexy pirate, I just couldn't help myself!
Date: 06/03/11 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Six
OMG! OKAY I TOTALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
It was so freakin GOOD! I was NOT expecting for Dani to agree to being friends with benefits with Tom she doesn't seem like the type of girl to me at least. But I think Tom only wants the friends with benefits with Dani because he really likes her and Dani agreed because she knows deep down she has the same feelings towards Tom, BUT its my thoughts :)
I don't dislike Rose all that much she just seemed like annoying but I know thats how friends are lol. Well I'm glad to know that there is still a lot more of this story. I can wait to read your great ideas in this story.
Oh well thats cool! well keep up your
inspirational writing and update real soon! I TOTALLY CAN NOT wait for more eep!! I want to know how this whole
'friends with benefits' thing will turn
out between Tom and Dani!! :D
Author's Response: It's definitely one of my favorite chapters, I have to agree with you there; I think Dani just likes making out xDrnI've actually started working more on the story, which totally makes me happy because I can't wait to write more. I have some REALLY awesome ideas that I can't wait to write and add to the story
Date: 06/02/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter One
Personally I love Rose, she just seems like a wonderful and amazing person, but that's just my view on things. Anywhooo,the story is great, from as far as I have read, I think the relationship with Bill and Rose will bloom into something amazing. Well at least I think it should. Well I'm going to stop rambling cause I need to go finish with the rest of the chapter's!!
Love you!!
Author's Response: xD lord, this made me giggle! at first I was like 'oh, this person is cool' then I checked the username and was all 'hm, familiar...'rnI'm a genius xDrngreat to know you like it
Date: 06/01/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Five
:) loved it!
Author's Response: Well, thank you.rnI'm glad you enjoyed it =)
Date: 06/01/11 09:03 am Title: Chapter Five
Yay!! I loved it so wonderful.
To be truthful I dislike Rose,
I don't know what it is that I dislike about her, but I do agree with her that Tom and Dani ignoring each is ridiculous lol. But at least they agreed on being around each other without the
talking. I can't wait yo find out how things will go at their homecoming. I think Tom and Dani might dance together at least once lol.
I love giving predictions on stories its what a great reader does :) and it's nice yo know you like my predictions. This story was partially pre written? Anyway please keep up your delightfully astounding writing and update real soon! :)
Author's Response: oh no, I don't want people disliking Rose! D= but that's okay, there will always be one character that people won't enjoy...rnThis story is actually nowhere close to being finished, I only have about eleven chapters, so I really need to get writing fast so my updating doesn't slow down. I have a lot of great ideas that one of my best friends, who helps me edit my stories, and I have been working out (the character of Rose actually takes some inspiration from this friend). So, hopefully I'll get more written soon
Date: 05/30/11 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Four
I really like this. :)
Author's Response: well, thank you for enjoying it =)
Date: 05/30/11 09:40 am Title: Chapter Four
I LOVED IT!
OMG! I was surprised like Dani was when
Tom kissed I wasn't expecting that either lol. I think Dani does feel the same as Tom she's just afraid to admit it. I can't wait to find out what will happen next between Tom and Dani eep! Please keep up your delightful writing and update real soon. OH jeez sounds like an apocolyps full of celebrities haha ha, it is weird :)
Author's Response: I like how you always give me little predictions and what you think will happen; it's nice to see what people get from my writing. I really need to start writing this story again soon, though, because soon enough I'll have posted every chapter and it'll take me forever to write.
Date: 05/27/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
Ha.ha.ha.ha well get used to it missy because your writing is glorious :)
Oo! I wonder what they will all do since they're skipping the rest of the day? Hmm...I can't wait to find out please keep up your stupendus writing and update real soon! OMG! Tom chasing people with a lawn mower sound like something from Friday the 13th lol xD
Author's Response: Yeah, the dream was a little scary; he was working with a lot of my other celebrity crushes to defeat some evil higher power that was some random chick... it was weird...
Date: 05/26/11 09:08 am Title: Chapter Two
I loved it!! It was really great. I agree with Bill Dani should try and get along with Tom, she might enjoy it. You really had a dream about Tom being a gardener? I bet it was a sexy dream jk lol. Anyway please keep up your glorious writing and update real soon!! I can't wait for more ^-^
Author's Response: Wow, I don't think I've ever had anyone call my writing "glorious" before... I really appreciate that! rnAnd that dream wasn't sexy to be honest; it was nice, but not sexy. He was basically chasing people with a lawn mower xD
Date: 05/25/11 07:12 am Title: Chapter One
I really love this first chapter it's really great! The idea of Tom as a gardner very hot ha ha anyway please keep up your marvelous writing and update real soon! I can't wait to find out what will happen next :)
Author's Response: Believe it or not, the idea of Tom as a gardener came from a dream I had xD And I promise I will update whenever I get the opportunity
Date: 05/24/11 09:59 pm Title: Chapter One
Oooaa!! I like this story!! :D
Author's Response: Well, thank you =D Getting this first review got me excited to add more