Date: 01/09/20 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!!
Date: 04/19/15 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
awh, loved it!
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 04/03/15 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this :)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 03/14/15 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect, just perfect.
Author's Response: <3 thank you!! <3
Date: 10/10/11 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want the one, where Bill is sleepy and Tom makes him go to bed, to be more!!! Soooo cute, all of it!!! I love aaaaall of your fics and you definitely need to lock yourself in a room and write write write!
Author's Response: I forgot I'd said I might turn these into proper length fics! Might have to think again about it ;) Haha you think? I've written a lot recently and there's still more to come. Thank you so much <3!
Date: 06/06/11 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1
:B :B :B so cute & perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you, bb! :D
Date: 05/31/11 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
i would love to have this:
“That man over there just called me gorgeous,” Bill burst, clearly buzzing with pride.
Tom glowered, whipping his head round to search for the offender. They’d barely dipped their toes into the industry and already Tom was getting a taste of the nastier side. Something Bill seemed oblivious to, apparently.
Beside him, Georg let out a low whistle, “I say go for it, man!”
Bill laughed, throwing back his neck for all to gaze upon and Tom snapped, standing up from the bar stool and storming away. Behind him, he heard a surprised, “What the fuck’s up with him?” From Georg but only replied with his retreating back.
Later, Tom declared Bill as his own, marking his territory very pointedly.
“Mine,” he growled, asserting his rightful position as dominant male and rightful twin.
Bill giggled but didn’t refute it.
as a one-shot ;)
Author's Response: Aw well I'll see what I can whip up after exams :D Thanks for taking the time to read and review ^_^
Date: 05/28/11 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I loved this so much!!! I can't even decide which one I loved most and since we definitely need more ~ real life ~ fics right now, I'd say go for it! I just want to *snugglehugglenuzzle* twins right now. :)
And I'm sure you understand to take this as an compliment, when I say that these drabbles were so JellyPencil'ish. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D We do need ~real life~ fics so much, don't we? I'm working on a couple but it's slow progress until after exams >_> Oh well, I have sumfink to look forward to :D Oh WOW of course I take that as a compliment! Psssh and what a compliment it is :D Wow, girl, thank yoou!!
Date: 05/27/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey!
I know how you feel about exams,
revision is pretty much Ruling my life too!
It's really cute and I loved it!
Good luck with all the exams! I know you're going to smash them!
Author's Response: Aw, good luck with your exams, too, sweetie! <3 Thanks for the lovely review and luck!
Date: 05/25/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading these drabbles while listening to the soundtrack to this Spirit movie. It helped the fluffiness. =)
I really enjoyed the drabbles where Bill was making clothes for Bill, it just made me smile. And the one where Bill walked the dogs was really cute. Oh! And don't forget when Tom came to Bill's room since he knew that Bill couldn't sleep without his kiss. And I also liked the one when Tom got jealous cuz one guy called Bill gorgeous.
I mean I really liked these drabbles, so to be honest I could just answer with all of them. Maybe you could write a story about them growing up together and include as many drabbles as possible? I know I'm not able to pick a proper favorite. The drabble where Bill was furious because he had been called a faggot and Tom kissed him, that drabble was great as well. And moving into their new home and.. yeah, I could go on like this forever.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Haha well maybe one day I'll write a fic for all of them, then. During the summer I'll have a lot of free time so maybe that's what I'll do with it :D I've always wanted to write a big long fic about their lives like this, but I don't know if I have the skill. Maybe it can be a summer project? ^_^
Date: 05/25/11 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
These are perfect! I loved them all. Especially this last one. It was unexpected but very appreciated.
If I had to vote... I'd want to see the 7th one written more in depth. Young twins making out, angst from Bill and comfort from Tom; all behind the shed. Yes please.
Author's Response: I've actually started something with the 7th one :D I don't know how long it'll be so we'll see. Thanks for leaving such a lovely review ^_^
Date: 05/24/11 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so much, I think every single thing you write puts a smile on my face :) I actually wanna see the first one! ;o Bill studying and Tom going like wtf and fluffly twin kisses at the very end *.* Gahhh!
Author's Response: Aw, that's such an amazing thing to hear, thank you :D Haha the first one would be fun to write, wouldn't it? I'll see what I can about it! <3
Date: 05/24/11 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Which was my favorite? Jealous Tom, but I really liked them all. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll have to crack on and see what ideas I can transform into fics. AS WELL AS WRITE YOUR TORG. Yes, I haven't forgotten, I'm just a shitty person >_>
Date: 05/24/11 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweetie those were wonderful. I absolutely loved each section. I have no favourites and leave it in your reviewers capable hands. I just look forward to reading more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/24/11 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey,read the story and loved it. the ending was sooo sweet :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/24/11 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
These were all lovely! I personally like them like this, just little glimpses into a beautiful relationship. But you're the author, and I'm sure whichever little drabble you choose to expand will come out beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Yeah, I rather like them on their own as well so I'm glad you do, too ^_^
Date: 05/24/11 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yayy! New fics from you always make me happy! I think every one of these ideas could be a fic, they were all really good and adorable, love them all! I especially like the last line, it really was the perfect way to end this. So sweet and cute and full of love, thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! And reviews from YOU always make ME happy :D I've started working on number 7 so we'll see what happens there. And maybe during the summer I can return to another one of these ideas ^_^
Date: 05/24/11 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how you wrote all those little moments from their lives, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank YOU! ^_^
Date: 05/24/11 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
simply wonderful!! I love it! each story is so cute!! such twins are perfection!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^
Date: 05/24/11 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so, these were all adorable, and hilarious, and teasingly erotic. I'm sure you know which are which.
I think I would love to see you expand the one where Bill was all "Would we still be twins?" Because I picture them, like, 5 or so, and itty bitty twinsies are too cute for words, and there aren't nearly enough fics out there of it.
I also would love to see more of,well I'm not really sure, because they all seem like they could be woven into one interconnected epic story of their life you know? The righful twin dominate one was pretty spiffy though I would definately want to see more of that.
I really enjoyed the goodnight kiss one, but that really does feel pretty well complete as a sweet little drabble.
I snorted mt dew out of my nose when I read the one with Tom half dressed in the vogue vampire outfit
It makes me proud to know someone knows how to do Kaulitz math other than the twins themselves, or rather Bill himself, because appearantly Tom doesn't know how it works.
I love teenager.kid logic. I'm not gay, I just like mackin' with my brother. It reminded me of the Emo Song because of the part where the guy say "My mom thinks I'm gay just because she saw me kiss a guy, well...a couple guys, but I mean its the 2000s can't 2 or 4 dudes make out with eachother without being gay?" and if you don't know that song GO TO YOUTUBE AND LOOK IT UP Its hilarious.
The last one was very beautiful. Something about it reminds me of the ending in Ever After. You know the voice over that said "and while they did live happily ever after, the important thing is that they Lived" This last one hits me the same way that line did. Like a punch to the heart, you know? I can't really decribe it any better, so I hope you know what I mean.
Great work. I can't wait to see if you continue any of these. And remember, there are never enough itty bitty twins fics out there.
Author's Response: Wow this is such an incredible review, thank you! :D You know what, I really enjoy writing little itty bitty twins so I'm sure that drabble will make it to a fully fledged fic at some point :) Awww yes! I have seen Ever After, and I LOVE that film. I want my life to be like that xD Thank you so much! Your review put such a smile on my face <3333 And btw, totally agree; there are never enough itty bitty twins ficlets out there!