Date: 05/31/11 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Two
Not the drumsticks! Anything but the drumsticks! Poor gustav.
The story is very interesting although it's a tad bit rushed. But it's still good!
ps. I always knew that Tom was going to regret wearing such big pants. :P
Author's Response: you should have seen this story before my friend and I edited it; the story was a mess! But there was a hell of a lot more comedy to the point where it wasn't as dramatic as I wanted...
Date: 05/31/11 12:35 pm Title: Chapter One
Yeah, I could have told those guys that the humaniods would be evil. Jeez, haven't they seen any Scifi movie at all? Robots are always evil! lmao. I'm surprised that you have no reviews, this is a very good start!
Author's Response: Thank you, especially for being my first review!rnI think when I came up with this story concept I was actually watching Scifi or something... hehe