Date: 10/27/11 06:11 am Title: Chapter Three
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to respond to you as well, if you read my bio you'll understand why I haven't been on here. I'm also sorry that there haven't been any updates in quite some time. I will be continuing this though an update might be a bit slow at the moment. In any case, I'm glad to hear you like it and I hope you keep reading. ^^
Date: 06/01/11 02:42 am Title: Chapter Three
this moves too slow. it's boring. it's generic. too many fics like this out there. nothing stands out. you have good grammar but the plot sucks and your main character isn't likable. work on making longer, more interesting chapters. -epic
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you don't really care for this one, though I do thank you for the review and for being honest. I am sorry that it has taken me so long to respond to you as well - if you read my bio you'll understand why I haven't been on here - but if you look at my other work that I've posted you'll see that the chapters are much longer and more involved than this one is. In any case, thank you for the criticism. I will keep it in mind as I write more. ^^
Date: 05/22/11 07:22 pm Title: Prologue
LOVE :) cant wait to read more, it sounds super awesome so far :3