Date: 05/21/11 09:17 pm Title: Turnabout
You two are amazing!! Lovely story :)
Date: 05/19/11 10:21 pm Title: Turnabout
Okay many things went through my mind when I saw this
1. I thought you guys were like dead or something! Like I swear it feels like it's been so long since I've last read anything by you two
2. I saw that this was by Majestrix and Little Muse and freaked out
3. Then I saw this only had three reviews and really freaked out!! Who doesn't love Biorg!?!?
Well overall great story! Love the way you describe how the twins relationship factors into Bill and Georg's. Loved it
Date: 05/19/11 05:50 pm Title: Turnabout
Thank you, ladies! *_*
Date: 05/19/11 04:12 am Title: Turnabout
So far, I haven't read much Bill/Georg, but that may be about to change... I loved this! :)
Date: 05/19/11 03:24 am Title: Turnabout
I have always loved the style of your combined writing, there's and air that's so honest and real about it. No sugarcoding.
"And yet, when Bill thought about Georg and his identity, he had rarely changed anything of note. Stopped wearing one type of tee shirt, began wearing another. Started working out more as they grew up. Gained a voice that sounded like gravel when he was half-asleep, and warmth when he was awake and joking." I don't know what it is about this line, but it just stuck in my head. I think it's the melody of your writing that get's me, the flow. Maybe that sounds corny but I don't know how else to describe it.
I also very much enjoyed your characterization of Georg, this is more how I imagine him to be, rather then the goofy bonehead he is often portrayed as on this forum.