Date: 01/27/18 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm in a weird mood so... I loved this! but man, poor George
Date: 09/10/14 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh what a sweet story! I wish there were a sequel!
Date: 05/19/12 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, It's a really cute story!!! I love it!!
Date: 01/11/12 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! :-) Sequal! Please!
Date: 11/18/11 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I am in a werewolf mood, hunting down wolf fics and there this was. I am just wondering have you made a sequel or will you please do so? I want to know what happens. Obviously because I like the story :) sequel?
Date: 11/06/11 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1
ohmygosh.! that was lovely (:
Mmm the strange Neko + the strange Werewolf <3 lol 'twas cute :3
Date: 06/01/11 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good still.
Date: 05/30/11 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
miaaaaaa i liked it!!! it awesome!!! so cute and hot! *O*
Date: 05/22/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Couple suggestions for paragraph spacing...
Since it is still Tom talking when he said "That will change tonight", I suggest making that line part of the previous dialogue, where it says "You did seem to favor them now that I think of it.”
Like: “You did seem to favor them now that I think of it. That will change tonight.” Tom smirked, leaning down to suck on the junction between Bill’s neck and shoulder. Bill squeaked in surprise at how utterly different Tom felt against his body and found that he was arching into Tom’s touch.
(Also, I suggest changing 'did' to 'do', since Bill is currently in that preference in that moment)
Same with the last little bit, with having it be like:
“You lied.” Bill said softly taking in how utterly sharp Tom’s features were in his human form. “You and demons look nothing a like in human form."
Bill nuzzled down next to Tom before closing his eyes. “You’re much more handsome.”
I don't know; it just reads easier that way. Easier on the eyes, I think.
Author's Response: Damn you girls are horny! You're like my 32 reviewer!! But I love ya ;D
Thank you for the grammar suggestions/corrections. I really do have terrible grammar so I apologize as most of my fics have various typos of some sort. I'll probably get around to fixing them when I have the time. But thank you for pointing them out and thank you for your review
Date: 05/21/11 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Weird indeed, but interesting and enjoyable to read. Expecially I Enjoyed the dialoque between two different spieces and ways to try to uinderstand one another. Nice job :)
Date: 05/19/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful!
I love it so much!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05/19/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I really adored how this story turned out, and it's going straight to my favourites ^,-
It makes me really wonder what happened after this though (:
Date: 05/18/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
i luved it!!!!
Date: 05/18/11 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
You´re too good for Oneshots! This should be a whole story!
Date: 05/18/11 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
you really should do a series based on this, 'cause its amazing!
Date: 05/18/11 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I need a really weally rough sex scene (or even rough rape? XD) I am starving of it! You always good in it, lol. Please. . . ;)
Date: 05/18/11 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
it was just way too cute LOL I almost wished there were more chapters to this :)
Date: 05/18/11 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a nice, if strange, story. I'm kind of sad that it is only a one-shot. I wonder how much is normal for a night with a neko. Seventy thousand sounded like a lot for one night to me, but Madame Bitch didn't seem too impressed. Just keep in mind that if you everget stuck on something, and need to clear your head by working on something else, this would be a nice thing to continue. Great work!
Date: 05/17/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
sweet and hot. i kinda like your weird moods. ;-)
Date: 05/17/11 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't really put into words how much I liked your story. So unique. If you decide to write a sequel it will be amazing. Cheers!