Date: 05/24/11 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
too cute for words!... thanks for the update.
Author's Response: and thank you for the comment!
Date: 05/24/11 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is sooooo cute ^_^ lol
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. I hope you keep enjoying it.
Date: 05/24/11 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
*glomps* Aww, Bill is his little Neko Princess. How they met was really cute. I am glad Dirk has kept in touch with Bill. And I'm glad he somehow found a way to convince Bill's dad to not put him down when he was born. Imean, we know they normally kill black kittens when they are born already, then on top of that Bill has the killing his mother thing (from the Dad's perspective anyway) plus the whole wanting to save Simone and not the cub thing..and yea, when I read the end of the second chapter, I was seriously wondering if Dirk was going to say he lost them both and take Bill with him and raise him or something, but obviously that didn't happen so. yea...
This was a really wonderful chapter. * flutter clapped when I saw you updated. This fic makes me so happy, and I don't even know why. I just have a really good feeling about it. Keep up the wonderful work! *snuggles*
Author's Response: First, I have to say I LOVE your comments. How Bill is still alive will come up in a later chapter and I did think about having Dirk take him and raise him, but then Tom and Bill would have known each other right away and that, to me anyway, took away from the story. Though I could have built up their friendship and closeness that way. I have a lot in mind for this fic and it's changing every time I write, so even I don't really know how it's going to turn out. I just hope it turns out good. Once again, thank you for the comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of the world I create.
Date: 05/22/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
You're prolly gonna think I'm real silly for this but I just wanted to comment 'cause I like your name. Aha. :P
I'm just wondering if it's Valo, as in Ville Valo? If so, you rock. :)
Author's Response: TOTALLY for Ville! I'm a BIG HIM fan. Thanks for the comment either way! :)
Date: 05/21/11 02:36 am Title: Chapter 3
I just stumbled upon this story and I just read the first few chapters and I like it so far. What a dramatic beginning and I love your writing style. I'll be reading and reviewing this one for sure!
Author's Response: Wow, Thank you. I always think I don't write as well as others, so a comment like yours really makes me happy. I hope you do comeback and continue to enjoy the story.
Date: 05/20/11 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwww... this looks like a really good story! So please, oh great one ;), update! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far and I hope I can keep you coming back. I'll update asap.
Date: 05/20/11 03:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this story so far! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank You! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 05/19/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey there! Well I'm really positivly suprised by your story! I didn't have that much expectations because most fantasy-stories are a bit lame (no ofence) because yours isn't. Seeing forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint you then and you keep enjoying the story as it grows. Thank you for the comment. :)
Date: 05/19/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. Can't wait to give you more!
Date: 05/19/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 3
So how old are they now?
Author's Response: I haven't put their ages in yet, but the next chapter is a flash back and you find out how old they are. Most people are guessing young because of Tom and his attics in his room, but that is just him playing with his maid. Tom is a little immature. In my head though I see them in their early, early teens. Thank you for the comment. :)
Date: 05/18/11 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Whhhhaaaaaaaaaaat a cliffhanger there?! But why!!? lol jk. Just wondering though, what age are Tom and Bill about around this time?
Author's Response: Nice place to end it huh? lol. I see them at 13 in this. I know Tom seems younger (his flying jump kick) but he is just a little immature. The next chapter is a flash back. ;)
Date: 05/18/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwww
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. :)
Date: 05/18/11 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Actually, no I don't remember how they first met. Because somebody *cough*you*cough* is keeping us in suspense as long as she can. Is it Bushido? Its Bushido isn't it? That wants Bill to "work on his farm". I really hope Tom does have the power to keep it from happening. Btw, how old were they in this chapter? Its pretty difficult to tell. By the way the chapter started I was guessing like 8, but Tom got pretty far from the palace/castle for an 8 year old. At least from what it seems from the other chapers to be fairly far.
Either way, this was a fantastic chapter, and you totally have me enthralled as of right now. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the amazingly fantastical work! *squishes*
Author's Response: Hmmmmm... Could be Bushido.... In my head they are 13 and yes Tom seems immature (His little jump kick off the bed...LOL) but that is just Tom. I was going to make them younger, but I didn't see 8,9 year olds being attracted to each other. You'll find out how they met in the next "flashback" chapter, and that is terribly cute! Sooo glad you like it and I hope I can keep you coming back for more. *snuggles*
Date: 05/15/11 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh my goodness...you have me in tears here! This is really good so far! I can't wait to see where this goes! I do have a question though. Is this already completed and you are posting every day or so, or is it a work in progress? I ask because you don't have the WIP warning up, but that doesn't mean to much sometimes. Some people put it up and forget to take it off later, and some people don't think to put it up at all you know?
This is really awesome. I am looking forward to finding out the intricasies of this world you have created, and to see how a youko nd a neko meet and become friends. Keep up thre wonderful work. I look forward to seeing more soon!
ps. in your author note you spelled it neCo, and in the fic you spelled it neKo
Author's Response: I had hoped I would get an emotional response from my readers. I'm sorry I made you cry though. :( I did forget to mark WIP, but thanks to you reminding me I went back and fixed it.rnI hope you enjoy the rest of the story and I hope I can keep you coming back.
Date: 05/15/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm still cOnfused. Wasn't Jorg the king? So he has two loves names Simone? Either way, I loved it. :)
Author's Response: No, Jorg is not the king and the reason for two Simones will be revealed in a later chapter.rnThank you for the comment and I hope you continue to read, enjoy and comment.
Date: 05/15/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bill certainly not an easy start to his life.
Author's Response: Poor Bill indeed. :(
Date: 05/15/11 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm addicted to this story already O.o
Great job! ^^;
Author's Response: Awesome! That makes me very happy! :) Hope the other chapters will keep you just as hooked.
Date: 05/15/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it!
Author's Response: I'm glad!rnHope you like the other chapters as well.
Date: 05/15/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
FYI - Your summary should spell "prejudice", it is currently written incorrectly.
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. I'll get if fixed right away.
Date: 05/15/11 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start I can't wait to see where you go with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. :) I was worried I wasn't going to get any. I can't wait to see where it goes either. I never have a plan when I write, it just comes out.