Date: 09/26/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree, it wasn't so bad after all! rofl
absolutly love it hun :D
Date: 09/19/11 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so hott I couldn't even handle it
Date: 07/14/11 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD STORY!
Date: 05/29/11 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
...DAMN. this is awesome X"3
Date: 05/27/11 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
So fucking hot. I totally jazzed in my pants. Dom!Tom & Sub!Bill combo was so nicely written theres no way not ot be turned on...keep up the good work please!!!
Date: 05/20/11 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice, very nice :).
I usually prefer Tom bottoming, but Tom dominating is always a nice change.The dominant dirty talk was hot. :P
Date: 05/15/11 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Nope. It wasn't bad at all. They should do it more often. ;-)
Date: 05/15/11 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow ! Hot, hot, hot !! Jesus, it was so good.
Date: 05/14/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
WONDERFUL SMUT! I was a little bit squikked at the het porn at the beginning, but thats just because that girl was so wet she was in danger of flooding... ;)
Tom was totally badass and I loved how he completely WRECKED Bill and how Bill was begging for it. Your descriptions were really hot and I'm not surprised that Tom got it up that fast with Bill so eager like that. :D
Overall great work!
Date: 05/14/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely done! :) A very nice and hot read. *-*
Author's Response: :] Thank you very much! I tried to make it as hot as I could xP
Date: 05/14/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
the smut was great;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! b29;
Date: 05/14/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
That. Was. Awesome **drools**
Author's Response: *hands towel* Thanks love! Glad you liked it! b29;
Date: 05/14/11 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jesus, this was hot as hell. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. :]