Date: 06/11/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
ahhhhh! u started writing again!
hahah =D im soo excited iv been waiting for this for like ever! where did u go? and yes ud better be writing more for this story its like my favorite!
plz update as soon as u can!
peaces =]!
Date: 06/08/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
One word: Love!
This chapter was awesome and I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 05/11/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Whahahahaha please post more:D I love it!!
Date: 05/11/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
hehehe, I diffidently had doubts about this, I really did, not sure how it would be, I sort of breezed through the first chapter, till the second one, where I read,
“Lady, I think yer bells’ ringin’.”
as
I think your bells a buzzin'
Let's just say I stopped to breezing over the whole story there :) I do like this, I just don't understand why she has such adversity to the boys knowing she's related to Alex, maybe I just sort of skipped that, but I don't think so... lol :) I love this though actually, didn't think I would, but I do. Giselle is such a funky girl, who doesn't act totally Mary Sueish, though I have to say she has her moments :) but then everyone does :) hehehe :)
“Feel me.” He urged and I snapped back to reality quickly.
but in this great chapter, that hadd to be my favorite line, idk, I was laughing my ass off, and considering I'm suppose to be sleeping for school tomorrow, bad idea. So I almost choked :) but its okay, because it was worth laughing to get through the story :) or choking... :)
there are a few spelling and grammer things here and there throughout the chapters, but no more than ten per chapter :) but they don't take away from the story, and we can always blame it on Giselle just thinking that way :) lol :) yeah, loved it :)
Author's Response: yay i am sooo glad to finally get a constructive critique, i am definitely trying to shy away from mary sue and this ff is helping me to explain and evolve my characters more than i usually do. i've tried to explain that giselle doesn't want the guys to know she's related to alex because they'll think that he's just helping a poor soul/family friend out and then take advantage of her teaching and being around and simply blow her off as their superior but i even felt i didn't do a really great job of explaining that. something to think about for me!!! i definitely need to proof read harder when it comes to my mix ups... by the time i'm done typing i'm so antsy to post and too eager to read over the whole thing until a week later when i want to re-read to refresh my memory and end up cringing at myself and my errors! thanks for reading and feel free to critique me whenever, i enjoy the challenge!!!
Date: 05/10/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh, please keep going!!!
Date: 05/10/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMG! I thought this story was abandoned! You have no idea how happy I am that you updated! This was an awesome chapter :) You've made my day with this :D
Author's Response: :) glad I could make your day! Hopefully I'll get my final papers done soon and be able to get another one up tonight!
Date: 04/10/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I love this story! Keep it coming, jaa?
Date: 03/23/09 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
i know you probably gave up writing this fan fic but please i'm begging you carry on, i need to know how it ends
PRETTY PLEASE :( i really need to know, i mean your stories are so great please
Date: 03/02/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
please continue on this soon, it's REALLY good XD
Date: 09/10/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Truly wonderful, please carry on!!
Date: 08/14/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Update soon woman!
Me like a lot!!
Date: 08/07/08 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
ahaha! she got him back!!
can't wait to read mooooore!
Date: 07/28/08 01:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
GOD-DAMN AMAZING! i love your sense of humour!
Date: 07/23/08 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
more please
Date: 07/18/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter One: Insomnia & Somewhat Broken Hearts
come'on and update allready if you need someone to telll its a good story its more than that its fantastic, great and just bowchikawowow really PLEASE PLEASE (pretty preety beautifully) please.
(and of course as quik as possible????
(:( please)
Date: 07/15/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter One: Insomnia & Somewhat Broken Hearts
update soon plz! i really wanna no what happens that night!!!
Date: 07/11/08 01:54 am Title: Chapter One: Insomnia & Somewhat Broken Hearts
PLZ update soon! I can't wait for more Tom/OFC-ness
Date: 07/04/08 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm so happy you updated! Please update soon!!! THis was a good chapter, though it was mostly filler, I want to read about Tom and Giselle together.
Date: 07/04/08 03:23 am Title: Chapter One: Insomnia & Somewhat Broken Hearts
I'm SO HAPPY that your internet is back :]
Finally i get to read more of this glorious story.
-dances around-
haha Tom and Giselle have to sleep together again!
I'm so happy for the update and I hope you can keep updating.
-Dan