Date: 05/21/11 06:46 am Title: { fifteen }
This was quite different from the previous two chapters, and angsty, but I liked it.
I hope for Bill that his second dream will come true as well.
And seriously, he humped Tom's guitar case when they were all in the van? Woah, now that's risky.
I really like Gustav in this chapter.
Author's Response: It took a very angsty turn, Bill surprised me! Let's hope Bill's dream is a bit closer to reality...
Ohhh yes, Bill is engaging in some seriously risky behavior. Maybe he wants to get caught?? Thank you, I'm glad you liked Gustav! I really enjoy writing him.
Date: 05/21/11 06:00 am Title: { fifteen }
Aw, poor Bill. This chapter took a more serious turn than I was expecting, but I really liked it! I also adored your description of his fantasy--how it's all about closeness rather than sex.
Author's Response: I know, the story surprised me! I was expecting sexy humor for this fic and Bill surprised me by opening up with all his angst. I'm glad you enjoyed it being about the closeness, for Bill. I feel like his connection with Tom is the most important thing, transcending even the potential for sex.
Date: 05/21/11 03:00 am Title: { fifteen }
Bill is quite the daredevil, and the setting seems spotless until he looses himself in the daydreams he's created for this purpose. I can imagine it must be a shocker finding out he's almost/most definitely left himself vulnerable for Gustav to find out what went on behind his seat Very good, Tay.
Author's Response: Bill is really being very risky! He's pretty sure Gustav, at least, won't say anything, though. ;) Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 05/21/11 12:53 am Title: { fifteen }
I like Bill's angst. And his nervousness and the fact that his desires leave him reckless, no matter how much he plans.
These chapters of masturbation are way hot, but I'm also looking forward to the 'caught' part. Hoping for some angst in that, too, because I can see the boy flailing wildly over being busted. But man, it's gonna be so good after this build up!
Author's Response: Ooh good, I was worried the angst would scare people away, haha! And that's Bill, you know, just throwing himself into things as he does. ;)
I'm really pleased you're enjoying the, ahem, build-up! And of course Bill is going to try to wriggle out whichever way he can. :D
Date: 05/21/11 12:12 am Title: { fifteen }
I like it! :D haha tom didnt get to understand anything :3
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! We'll see if Tom gets closer in the chapter I just posted. ;)
Date: 05/20/11 10:06 pm Title: { fifteen }
lol, nice. I was almost expcting bill to like, lay in tom's lap or something and have a go on his family jewels. I rmemeber the last chappie he liked the smell of tom so i though you were going to bring something like that in.
Author's Response: Now that would have been something else!! He's definitely starting to fixate on Tom's scent, huh. ;) Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy what's to come! ♥
Date: 05/20/11 05:01 pm Title: { fourteen }
Tom's clothes! Absolutely LOVE the idea. There has always been something very hot in other person's clothes, so I fully approve. And the scent... I wish I could smell that! Anyway, Bill is a bold teen. Curiously waiting for fifteen. :)
Author's Response: Oh yes indeed! ;D Man, I'd love to smell the two of them too, I don't care if it's creepy, I just want to knoooooow. Bill is definitely bold, and he wants what he wants! But things change as we get older...
Date: 05/20/11 04:41 pm Title: { thirteen }
Aww, so cute! So relaxing and nice top read teeaghe twins again, it always gives a certain careless - even timeless - feeling. I actually wanted Bill to get caught, but I'll be patient. I'm sorry it took me so long to start reading this, but I wouldn't have missed this for anything! :)
Author's Response: Hee! It's really nice to get back in and write wee twins again, really...it's always nice to explore different aspects of their backstory, you know? I think a lot of people were voting for Bill to get caught (by Tom) but I'd have a much, much shorter story, hehe. Thank you for reading, I'm happy you are, no matter when. :)
Date: 05/16/11 03:35 pm Title: { fourteen }
Like Tom of this era would say, SEXY HEXY! :)
Author's Response: Oooh, win! I'm really happy you thought it rated Sexy Hexy. *_*
Date: 05/16/11 10:48 am Title: { fourteen }
Getting off on Tom's bed, wearing Tom's shirt? That's so naughty! Me likey.
I'd like to see the twins wear each others clothes someday. I bet they've done it before, but not in public, when they lost a bet or something. *must steal Georg's camera* :P
Aww, can't you psych yourself 'in' again?
I'm sure whatever you come up with, it'll be a fun read. :-)
Author's Response: Yes, yes indeed! I bet he never got to do that again. And oh man, I'd love to see the twins dress up as each other but they don't seem to like playing the identical card like so many other twins do!
I did my best, I hope it's okay! Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 05/15/11 03:51 pm Title: { fourteen }
Oh wow, so so sexy! *_* I love Bill's sneaky little "personal time", especially when it involves Tom like this, even if Tom himself isn't so aware xD
You write sexytiems so well! I swear, I'll never get bored of them. I'm looking forward to Bill's sexy when he's 15 :D
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! Hmm, I wonder how unaware Tom really is... *headtilt* No, I really do wonder.
Thank you! I keep trying to make it different and new, a bit unique for each situation! Thanks for your review hon.
Date: 05/15/11 04:22 am Title: { fourteen }
I sure do like it Tal-I-am!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you thank you! :D
Date: 05/14/11 02:45 am Title: { fourteen }
Dude, that was ridiculously hot. I plumb forgot to breathe. ;)
Author's Response: Ooh, I'm glad you think so! :3 I hope it only gets better from here for poor misunderstood Bill ;D
Date: 05/14/11 01:49 am Title: { fourteen }
Bill, dressed in Tom's clothes, frotting on Tom's bed. BRB dying. *fangirl down*
Author's Response: Yes, I had to! :3 Fangirl down! Eep! Gotta send the kiss of life over there! ;)
Date: 05/14/11 12:50 am Title: { fourteen }
oo 15th year maybe he could try something a bit more risky, when tom is around him perhaps? :D i liked the chapter
Author's Response: Good plan, I had to go with that. ;) Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next!
Date: 05/13/11 11:54 pm Title: { fourteen }
I love this story! It's just so much fun to read! I'm always so nervous that Bill will get caught, cause it would be very embarrassing, especially if it's his mother that find him! Bill is such an entertaining character in this one, I enjoy it quite a lot! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you love it! :) Ohh yes, what Bill is doing is very VERY risky. I don't blame you for being nervous! Haha, I really think his mother would not have understood if she'd found him rubbing off while wearing Tom's shirt...so it's a good thing she didn't! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy Bill! ♥
Date: 05/13/11 11:34 pm Title: { fourteen }
oh goodness, every time he's about to get caught i feel like i'm having a panic attack. oh goodness. *breathes heavily*
Author's Response: Hehe, sorry about that! I hope the next one is, um, less upsetting. >_> Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/13/11 10:42 pm Title: { fourteen }
hmm, not sure what you meant by "Days without Tom are a great deal less tolerable without his twin by his side." but it's great nonetheless. ahh, poor bill...but man, that's one way of doing it. the world would definately be a better place if gave everyone the time and space necessary to get off :) but as it is, bill just has to be careful. fifteen? well, i gotta say you lost me with that last sentence, but i'd say that bill should hopefully have discovered insertion by then...:3
Author's Response: Lolwhoops. *fixes* Thank you for catching that! And the world can be awfully inconvenient when you're not able to get off regularly, lol. As for Bill at 15, you will just have to wait and see... ;3
Date: 05/13/11 08:52 pm Title: { fourteen }
Oh man, that was a close call! I love his cover story, and that both twins are Simone's favorite son. ;) I can't wait to see what you come up with next. :D
Author's Response: Clever of Bill to have one prepared. ;) Or is he just that quick of a liar?? I love the idea of Simone calling both boys her "favorite." Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the next chapter~
Date: 05/08/11 04:00 pm Title: { thirteen }
God Tay, how much are you writing at the moment?! NOT THAT I'M COMPLAINIG!
This was sexy hexy indeed. I love Bill and... anything xD I'm excited to see where this unpredictable fic is taking us. I enjoyed this first installment very much!
Author's Response: Um...QUITE A BIT? :D I'm not even posting everything I'm working on right now! There are two additional stories yet to come, and a new year of kits!
Very glad you thought so. More along these lines to come, I assure you, along with Bill getting ever riskier! Thank you very much for your review. ♥