Date: 05/29/11 11:20 am Title: { sixteen }
Well that was another close call. Poor Bill he just can't get what he wants at all. Though it seems like there may be some hope. *snuggles*
Author's Response: Yes, very close indeed! And he was courting it. ;) Hope indeed! Thank you so much for the lovely review, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 05/28/11 01:48 pm Title: { sixteen }
Oh Bill and his angst, my heart breaks :/ But mmmm, I have a feeling that brother dearest, considering they're identical, has feelings similar, or identical (ha!) to Bill's :) Love this!
Author's Response: Yes, he went surprisingly strong in the angst direction! I was not expecting that! And brother dearest...we find out soon, soon indeed. Thank you!
Date: 05/28/11 09:47 am Title: { sixteen }
Aw god Bill is such a sad character :( I want to just wrap him up and make things okay for him. This chapter was particularly beautiful. Twins that aren't quite right are so sad, they need each other!
I'm looking forward to the final year, and hoping Bill might get something more to smile about :)
Author's Response: He needs hugs! And Tom! I'm glad you thought it was beautiful, though. ♥
Thank you! Let's keep our fingers crossed for him. :)
Date: 05/28/11 07:34 am Title: { sixteen }
Aw, this is beautiful. This could have just been a silly or smutty story, but you're making it so much more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really hoping it would be. :)
Date: 05/28/11 03:37 am Title: { sixteen }
Another wank he got away with. But next time... :)
I love the change in Tom. Like he's gotten the point, too that they're not connecting as twins. Whether he has hidden feelings for Bill, too, only the last chapter will tell :)
Author's Response: He did, he got away with his secretive habits yet again! ;) But not forever...
Yes, Tom is definitely making more of an effort for here on out. Thank youuuuu for reading!!
Date: 05/28/11 02:53 am Title: { sixteen }
I don't care about anything but....yoooooooou...... ahh. The good ole Cardigans....
I suppose that I should leave a review. This is fantastic. But I am sure that you already knew that. ;)
Author's Response: Yes, I love them! *_*
Thank you so much, I'm pleased I rated a review! *wriggle* Ahh, I never know; I am always uncertain. :)
Date: 05/27/11 10:57 pm Title: { sixteen }
Ohh my, if only Tom hadn't called first! Bill's orgasm was hot as hell. :)
Btw, the language in this is fantastic. Some of the wording really jumped out at me. Wonderful job, Tay! ♥
Author's Response: Hee! But, I think Bill WANTED it to be that way. ;)
Thank you so, so much!! Definitely my goal for these odd little stream of consciousness stories.
Date: 05/27/11 10:53 pm Title: { sixteen }
:( just one more year... *sigh* im kidding, i know you have alot of stories your sorking on, and of course the appetite one that is going flippin great for you.... why the flip isnt it featured??
Author's Response: I do, I am working on so darn much right now! As for a feature, it really depends on whether people write in and ask for it; and whether the featured story team decides it should have that honor. I'm pleased you think it is worthy, thank you!
Date: 05/27/11 10:09 pm Title: { sixteen }
oh gosh, Bill!!!! jerking off while talking to Tom!!! this one was too close for comfort.
Author's Response: He is being so so risky!! Bill has really surprised me with this story. ;)
Date: 05/26/11 04:46 pm Title: { fifteen }
I really am enjoying this fic :D You definitely have me wondering what exactly the conclusion to it will be, there are several ways this could go I guess xD
I'm thoroughly enjoying sexy Bill though, and so so naughty Bill! And suspicious/all-knowing Gustav is pretty fun too xD
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! :D The conclusion has been a mystery even to me...Bill has had me worried!
Thank you! Sexy, naughty Bill is so much fun to write. And Gustav, that boy is always a pleasure. ♥
Date: 05/25/11 06:03 pm Title: { fifteen }
aw, bill's so desperate...poor baby, it's the worst thing to want something you think you can't have, i'm sure. so close but so far. they've got a lot of adjusting to do with their new lifestyle coming up, i expect
Author's Response: Yes! Desperate really sums it up. And he wants SO much and fame is going to deprive him of even more, poor baby. I hope you enjoy, and thank you for reading! ♥
Date: 05/22/11 07:01 pm Title: { fifteen }
Bill you're being really careless man...
Author's Response: Maybe he WANTS to get caught. :O
Date: 05/22/11 03:10 pm Title: { fifteen }
FINALLY I'VE TAKEN A MOMENT TO CATCH UP WITH THIS. And I'm glad I did, because I like where you're taking it so far. The fic's getting more serious and intense as we get closer to the conclusion... and on that note, poor Bill. I love this line: "Tom," he says, loud and deliberate, as he comes. He wants Tom's attention at all times, even when he shouldn't. And I hope, hope, HOPE the ending will give him everything he wants. *bites lip and crosses fingers hard*
Very interesting Gustav-Bill interaction at the end of this chapter, too. Perceptive!Gustav is the best. I can't wait to see where the next chapter and the end will take all of the boys, but especially Bill and Tom!
Author's Response: OMG HURRAH HURRAH! *_____* I'm so incredibly happy you took that moment, thank you! We're definitely increasing the stakes as we move toward the story's conclusion. Bill wants SO much, is it really going to be possible to get everything he wants??
I adore perceptive Gustav, he's so funny. I just love writing him as a wry, understated, observant kind of guy. ;D Thank you and we shall see where it goes from here...it's been kind of surprising for me, too!
Date: 05/22/11 12:35 pm Title: { fifteen }
I am loving this story... so so much... Please update? Before the Merry Month Of Masturbation is over? :P
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I updated, I updated! And whoosh, I hardly realized I was running out of May but you're completely right! I have five chapters planned...and only four days to write that last chapter, omg! Thanks for the reminder. :D
Date: 05/22/11 07:44 am Title: { fifteen }
Poor Bill, that's all I can say. His needs for.. well, everything and not least for his brother is making him quite anxious.
But dam,n, that was hot! This was even hotter than the previous chapter with Tom's clothes and that's lot to say when I always love fics where they use each others items to masturbate with. Add there an obvious risk to get caught, in the middle of a group of people, and it's so good...
You surely know how to do it :)
Author's Response: Yes, he's so sad and pent up!
I'm really glad you thought it was hot! *_* Thank you so so much. It was definitely risky but I think for Bill that made the payoff amazing! Thanks for the lovely review.
Date: 05/21/11 06:58 pm Title: { fifteen }
This is awesome! :D I can't wait to read more ad Gustav is so sweet xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Gustav was really sweet in this chapter, I hope I can bring him back in the final one. I'm glad you think it's awesome, thanks!
Date: 05/21/11 04:57 pm Title: { fifteen }
Ho boy that was either brave or stupid of him, perhaps a little bit of both, poor Bill never having the privacy he needs. Sooo curious to know just how much Gustav saw. I'm really curious to know where you're going to take this next, all I can be sure of is that I'll love it. *squishes*
Author's Response: I vote stupid! Haha, really it was silly, being SURROUNDED by the other boys and just going for it anyhow, but he's so sad and desperate! Thank you very much and I hope you do love what's next! :D
Date: 05/21/11 02:34 pm Title: { fifteen }
i love gustav. and i love how things have went from careless, humorous humpy-time to angsty, serious, this-isn't-enough-i-want-tom time. very, very nice.
Author's Response: He's so fun to write! And oh my gosh yes, Bill completely ambushed me with his angst. I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
Date: 05/21/11 11:57 am Title: { fifteen }
"Curly-haired slut of a bassist". You do realize that I'm going to turn that into the world's best insult. It's like an Orbit gum commercial phrase that didn't make the cut.
And what the hell kind of pills did they prescribe to Bill where he's gonna hump his brother's guitar in a van, surrounded by his bandmates? Ecstacy?
Author's Response: Hee! I'm really pleased you liked the term; it kind of leaped out at me, based on a few things with respect to Georg's reputation.
LOL ECSTASY indeed. No, just...he's blaming the meds, but really, the Bill wants what the Bill wants, and he's going to get it regardless of appropriate time and place. Thank you and I hope you enjoy what's to come!
Date: 05/21/11 09:28 am Title: { fifteen }
Wow it is getting angsty! Looking forward to when we have a little resolution to this story the horney limbo kind of slowly eats at my soul.
Author's Response: Bill surprised me with all his angst! Sorry about the horny limbo, hehe. I am working to make the conclusion worth all of this angsty build-up. :)