Date: 06/05/11 09:46 pm Title: { and after }
this was amazing m/ i love the end, its really concluding and cute :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you loved it! :D
Date: 06/05/11 09:45 pm Title: { and after }
This last chapter was so sweet, yet so hot and sexy.
I absolutely loved this story.
Author's Response: I'm so so happy you loved it, thank you!
Date: 06/05/11 08:12 pm Title: { seventeen }
Woah, woah, Tom watching Bill jerking off? Ooh, I like it A LOT! There is always something SPECIAL about it. This was really intense chapter, the way Bill felt he had nothing to lose and all cards were revealed.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you have figured it out already!
Author's Response: Yes, yes, and he can't stop! I'm really pleased you found it to be intense, thank you so much. :D It took me longer than I wanted, but I was happy with the way I finished up! Thank you.
Date: 06/05/11 12:21 am Title: { seventeen }
ACK~ ;-; why would you leave it right there? Do you get kicks out of leaving us in cliffies ;-; Post soon please xD
Author's Response: ;~; I ran out! Sorry for taking so long. ♥
Date: 06/04/11 11:51 pm Title: { fifteen }
Haha wow Bill, way to hump that guitar case!
Author's Response: He really went for it. ;) Sexy guitar case tiems for Bill!
Date: 06/04/11 03:48 am Title: { seventeen }
this is amazing xD i love how this is going lol
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you think so! :D
Date: 06/03/11 06:53 pm Title: { seventeen }
Ohhhh, you've really done it now Bill xD
I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! I wouldn't worry about not knowing what will happen next - I never really know where my stories are going. I plan the first chapter and the last chapter and just make sure I get to that point. :P Anyway, I would love to see some angry!sex, because that's just how I am. -nods- I'd also like to see some sort of a hint at a resolution between them. Not necessarily go straight into a relationship, but maybe hint that it may happen. Eh, I don't know. xD I know that I'll love whatever you decide! :)
Author's Response: Yes, and I think he did it on purpose!
I had a general idea, when I started; but the direction this story took really surprised me! I thought it was going to be funny and lighthearted and sexy. Bill took it for the angst! Thank you for the support, I appreciate it!
Date: 06/02/11 05:48 pm Title: { seventeen }
OMG...
Author's Response: Indeed. :D
Date: 06/01/11 07:09 pm Title: { seventeen }
Oh! Sense The rest of the story is not in may can it not be just wanking? Can we get some interaction?
Author's Response: Definitely some interaction. ;D
Date: 06/01/11 06:26 pm Title: { seventeen }
Man, not only did Bill look like pure sex, this whole chapter was pure sex. *___*
I really can't wait to see what's gonna happen now. Some nice smutty twinsex for the sake of June maybe? :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! :D
Definitely more than just Bill masturbating, for sure. ♥ Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 06/01/11 05:46 pm Title: { seventeen }
Sigh, the merry month of masturbation is no more... Which means Bill can no longer go it solo. Tom should take over the reigns now ;)
And when he says mad, I hope he means 'we are so going to have hot sexy angry sex...'
Author's Response: Very right, no more masturbation. ;D Tom definitely has meanings beyond "mad," for sure!
Date: 06/01/11 04:24 pm Title: { seventeen }
NNNNGGGGHH! OMFG need more. Tom just sitting there emotionless and watching, and now all angry and in the bed almost naked and holy hell you like reducing me to goo don't you!?
Date: 06/01/11 04:20 pm Title: { seventeen }
NNNNGGGGHH! OMFG need more. Tom just sitting there emotionless and watching, and now all angry and in the bed almost naked and holy hell you like reducing me to goo don't you!?
Author's Response: I am so incredibly glad it gave you that reaction! :D Yes, Tom has lots of ~FEELINGS~ and he needs to express them, now. ;D
Date: 06/01/11 02:13 am Title: { seventeen }
Whoa, I somehow imagined this would be five chapters, but it's not! And good because I thought as I read that when Tom arrived, the chapter was too short to fix what ever happened when Bill was caught :)
Anyway, terrific chapter. I loved how Bill snuggled in those sheets before he started wanking. It was so sweet really :) Tom's quiet staring was unnerving to me, too. Sexy sexy. And now I can't wait for Tom's 'angry' repercussions *G*G*
Author's Response: I just couldn't fit it all in! And they kept getting longer and longer... yes. ;)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And, Tom was definitely a bit unnerving but I think it was just the right move to get in good with Bill. Hee. We see where it goes from here...
Date: 06/01/11 01:19 am Title: { seventeen }
O-oh X___X
Author's Response: Twinlove overload? ;D
Date: 06/01/11 01:06 am Title: { seventeen }
Holy god, woman, that was HOT. HOTTT. And if the writhing and hip thrusting and Tom's dark eyes weren't enough, there was come-licking. NGHHH.
The next chapter's gonna kill me dead. I welcome it.
Author's Response: Oh good good good. :D Bill just had to deliver that coup de grace! Hehe.
I am pleased to deliver such a death! XD
Date: 06/01/11 12:47 am Title: { seventeen }
OHHHH MY GOD I WASN'T QUITE EXPECTING THAT. I mean clearly I was expecting twinly sexiness but slfg;ljfkdg *_* the moment when Tom stripped down and climbed into bed with him was one of the hottest moments ever, and then, nghhh, the moment when he pins Bill totally outdoes it. Holy crap.
Gah, and I love that Bill just relaxes, doesn't freak out once he's, uh, finished. I'll be bouncing until you post the next chapter, so it better happen soon! Or I'll bounce a hole in the floor or somethin'.
Author's Response: LOL WHAT WERE YOU EXPECTING, CARD GAMES? ...chastity rings perhaps? :D
Oh yes, Bill was like...boneless, he had nothing left to lose. I hope you enjoyed the last chapter. ♥
Date: 05/31/11 10:59 pm Title: { seventeen }
Hot dammmmnnnnnnn!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy~~~
Date: 05/31/11 09:22 pm Title: { seventeen }
Oh so Help me GOD! If Tom doesn't fuck Bill senseless next I'm gonna scream!
Author's Response: Go find out. ;D Thanks, I'm glad it was suspenseful!
Date: 05/31/11 09:05 pm Title: { seventeen }
Oh my God, there's more?! *_* Tom's sooooo mad! Bill's in sooooo much trouble. They're gonna do it! xD /incoherencies
Author's Response: Yes indeed! Tom is mad and Bill had better placate him. ;D "They're gonna do it" is a pretty good assessment, lol. ♥ I hope it left you equally incoherent.