Date: 05/06/11 06:34 pm Title: One and Only
ROFL
great fanfic
can you make a sequel about Gustav? I mean, cause he knows about them now
Date: 05/06/11 06:28 pm Title: One and Only
It was soooo hilarious! Thank you :D
Date: 05/06/11 06:02 pm Title: One and Only
Funny and sexy! I can't ask for more =P Thanks for sharing!
Date: 05/06/11 05:17 pm Title: One and Only
hahahahaha, that was great! poor Bill, embarassed so much XDDD
Date: 05/06/11 03:38 pm Title: One and Only
Ahh this was completely amazing! I just, wow, this was too awesome xD
Date: 05/06/11 03:11 pm Title: One and Only
I liked it.
Date: 05/06/11 12:54 pm Title: One and Only
*Blink* Wow...talk about an awkward situation there lol...good story.
Date: 05/06/11 12:36 pm Title: One and Only
Hi.
Your summary litteraly caught.
I was, like.....No I read wrong, it didn't say "While still in Bill."
It seemped so kinky that I HAD to read this.
I was not disappointed.
Their "twins" moment was a bit rushed, lots of frustration, and a tad desperate but in the same time, so full of tenderness and love.
But what was priceless....
* Georg who is oblivious of the situation...
* Gustav so smug to put the twins in this embarrassing "I know now" situation...
* Bill who is so ashamed of it all...
* But most of all...Tom who can hold it back.
I burst out laughting....Once again, it was totally priceless!
How could he still be hard despite the situation, and moreover, how could he come?
Sure, he was clenched tightlier by Bill because of Bill's nervousness....
But I thought being walked in would be a strong turn off....
Really kinky, Tomi!!!!
A wonderful story, short but amazing nonetheless, so easy to read and a good way to relax....Almost perfect!
I really love it.
Ps: I do a few translation - I'm french, by the way -
And it would be enormous for me if you allowed me to translate it.
I wanted to translate it even before fI finished reading.
Please would you allow me to do it?
Thanks in advance.
Love
Kiki
Date: 05/06/11 12:31 pm Title: One and Only
That... was amazing :) There are far too little "Bill and Tom get caught having steamy sex" stories...
Loved it! :)
Date: 05/06/11 10:11 am Title: One and Only
Hahaha! OMG, what did I just read? This is AMAZING !
Bill was completely mortified, while Tom was still so horny that he came.
The unintentional phone call to Gustav is priceless!
That was so hot!
I loved it.
Date: 05/06/11 07:36 am Title: One and Only
i laughed and blushed and all that...i loved it...gusti at the end was hysterical...poor boys...
Date: 05/06/11 03:27 am Title: One and Only
Hahaha, incredibly funny, especially the ending! :)
Date: 05/06/11 02:32 am Title: One and Only
oh my dead god *dies laughing* oh. THIS. just this. It was one of the best thing's I've read all night. Bless you for writing this! Hehehe, I love Gustav so much by the way haha
Date: 05/06/11 01:53 am Title: One and Only
Surprisingly this made me blush hard core... I felt so bad for Tom... dear god. Great One shot!
Date: 05/06/11 01:47 am Title: One and Only
haha. Thats funny
Date: 05/06/11 01:14 am Title: One and Only
lol! This was hilarious. I absolutly loved it.
Date: 05/06/11 12:50 am Title: One and Only
Hahahahahahah! This was sooo hot, and brilliant! Hahahahah! ^^
Date: 05/06/11 12:27 am Title: One and Only
THAT...was a work of art! Just fantastic! And the line at the end had me laughing. Good story!