Date: 05/20/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5
I love the ending i was cracking up just thinking of the scene in my head. AND the picture of the red convertible...haha yea, so Great story!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha ;D Thank you so much! :D
Date: 05/19/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
also like melrose apearing at there door and being like "i made a mistake i still love you tom and i always will" lol idk
Author's Response: Haha :P That would be a desperate aftershake from her, aye :P
Date: 05/19/08 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
no don't finsih this is a great great great story lol i think what u should do is like fast foward a couple of monthes and dun dun DUN melrose comes in there lifes and yea a bunch of drama with melrose and bill mabey even a cat fight o_O
Author's Response: Haha! Could be xD Thanks.
Date: 05/19/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
that was wicked! i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! ;D
Date: 05/19/08 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
i luv it update soon
Author's Response: Meebe :P
Date: 05/19/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
dude you updated!!! i love it! (does a little happy dance) i want to read some more of this story. the chapter was perfect. i was all smile from the beginning. :D :D
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! ;D
Date: 05/19/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
I fucking loved it....it was soooo funny....hehe
Author's Response: Thanks! :D:D
Date: 05/19/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Amazing!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 05/19/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
This chapter was awesome!!!! About your question...I don't know. It's quite a plot but depends. You should continue if you think there's still some interesting parts of this.
I really liked the video. Wouldn't it be nice to have one of those in your video collection? *blushes*
Author's Response: Thank you! :) And yeah, I see what you mean. At this rate, I'm thinking an epilouge ;P
Date: 05/19/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
HA! xD
*loves tom*
*loves fic*
*loves alva bear
:DD
I WANT MOOORE! X]]
Author's Response: Hahah :P Loba for youuuu! :D <3
Date: 05/19/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww =D I want more, or aleast a sweet fluffy epilogue ;-)
Author's Response: Will think about it :)
Date: 05/19/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lovely!!!!^^D
Haha, loved the pert when he showed them the movie, and the part were he just jumped into the car and kissed Bill on the cheek before they drived into the distance^-^
I can actually see that like a movie inside my head, and in my head, it was absolutely greate I must say;)
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! :D
Date: 05/19/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
omgomgomg
loba! LOBA, DAMMIT.
i would love to see more , are you out of my mind? ♥
Author's Response: LOBA IS SPREADING!! :D Hm, then I will ask YOU for help! :O
Date: 05/19/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
I almost peed myself from happiness when I read that! *grinns uncontrolably*
Author's Response: Hahha! ;D
Date: 05/19/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ohhhh :O AMAZING! Just wonderful job Tom, you couldn't have done better! I loved how he left those bitches speechless ;D I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Bill (A)
Author's Response: :D Looking forward to see if this _will_ go on :P Thanks, though.
Date: 05/19/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really want one more chap, but on the other hand, this is a nice end. But I want more!!!!!
Author's Response: Hm. Then maybe a sequel? :P Thanks anyway
Date: 05/19/08 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha, awesome! I loved it!
this could be a good ending, but it's so sweet, that I just want more.
But you know best, so I guess it's up to you (:
Author's Response: Thanks! I will think about it. If I find a continuing plot and so on ;)
Date: 05/19/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG you have to keep going! I seriously love this story! IT's hilarious and I'm glad Tom showed the tape to that Bitch...but did it hurt her? Omg and do they live happily ever afer or does she get revenge.Well...I want more!
More please *hugs and cookies given*
Author's Response: Then I'll think about it :) Thanks!
Date: 05/19/08 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
brilliant!!!!
Author's Response: Danke :)
Date: 05/19/08 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
that is so cute but i think yu should continue, it would be a really sweet place to stop. but i like it and i want it to continue please!!
*huggles*
Author's Response: I'll think about it :) Thanks!