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Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay for revenge!

Author's Response: Revenge is fun, eh?

Reviewer: Ravyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh wow that was really good! I love it seriously and I can't wait for more :D :D

Author's Response: Thankk youu!

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG I have to now what she says to that!
Please update soon! XD

Author's Response: Haha, it'll be exiting, no? Thanks!

Reviewer: Mistydimma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this chapter so much I want to marry it = ) It's a great way to take revenge on a homophobic soon to be ex-wife. And hot, too. Great, as always. I love all your stories = )

Author's Response: Haha! I'll invite people to the ceremony, then :) Thank you!!! ;D

Reviewer: bleedanarkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

I want that tape!!! Who cares about Melrose they need to send it to me, moi, mim...
Gosh, this chapter was the hottest chapter you've ever wrote...I loved it, feel free to write more like this one. ;)

Author's Response: I want that tape too! ;D Thank you so much!!!! :D

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

You're a geniuos!!! The video tape idea is like...one of the greatest ever!!! And Bill...

“And now, Tom is going to fuck me, and he is going to fuck me hard!” he said, winking at the camera.

OMFG That was amazing...A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!

Author's Response: Hehehe, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: Kablatow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

*dead*
that was probably the best chapter of any story i have ever read, im not even joking. xD god, alva, you are wonderfuffle.

Author's Response: Wow! That is like the biggest compliment ever! Thank you!!

Reviewer: Charlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

THEY ARE WICKED!!!
GO THEM!! lol

Author's Response: Yaaay, they says thank you!

Reviewer: princesspss Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

wiii!that bitch got what she deserved!and Bill and Tom love each other!

Author's Response: They sure do!

Reviewer: slashslash Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 3

i loved it.
i love this series.
Please continue writing it!!!
:]

Author's Response: I will and thank you! ;D

Reviewer: princesspss Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

no.don't make us wait too long again.This is greeeat,! plz.
*does puppy eyes*

Author's Response: I will try my best not to. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Mecki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/08 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

loved it^^

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: dixxi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/08 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like your story just like a cupcakes ^____^ i've got a really hard exam tomorrow, so thank you for relaxing me ;)
uhhh all this betrayal is exciting
i hope that Tom's wife will find out that her husband has a lover, a MALE lover ^___^ and i hope that she'll see them in her and tom's bed, having mindblowing sex and screaming their lungs out...
no, i am not cruel. at all ^^ i just don't like this hoe n_n
please, update soon.

Author's Response: Hahaha! Glad to hear that and thank you for giving me ideas! :D

Reviewer: helene5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's really good!!
I hoop you update soon

xx__

Author's Response: I hope I do too :P Thanks

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really dont like her. He should go to Bill!
Please update when you can! :)

Author's Response: I will, thanks! ;D

Reviewer: julia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hope it makes it easier to write! You'd better start publishing books soon you know, your stories complete me!



Author's Response: It did help, thanks! *blushes*

Reviewer: XRose_ThornX Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

i liked it! i dont like melrose she is mean and nasty!! good chapter *huggles* please continue!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Kablatow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

so happy to see this updated

Author's Response: Yay, then.

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 08:56 am Title: Chapter 3

Ew, that woman!! She's a bitch, and LUCKY Tom knows better than to beat her, although it's what she deserves. I mean, how dares she talk to Bill like that?! Grrr! Anyway, he was always so nice :) and Tom too :D lovely together. I hope you'll post sooner the next time, but however it was worth the wait ;)

Author's Response: I will try my best. Last time, I left the chapter feeling awful about myself, but Now, it feels a bit better :P thanks!

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 08:01 am Title: Chapter 3

*nodnod*
Me likes it very much^^
You should definately write more!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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