Date: 05/19/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm leaving last chapter and marrying this one. Or can I marry both? Because I love this so much, I scared my family with my laughter. I wish I was there when Tom showed the video.
You're amazing, and I really hope this isn't the last chapter = )
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! ;D I'll try figuring out how to continue it :)
Date: 05/19/08 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
lol. i want a copy of that tape! Ugh, Melrose, I have never hated someone so much in my life. I can't wait till she sees the tape, lol.
Author's Response: Hehe, then my work is done for her :P
Date: 05/19/08 10:52 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG, IT'S LUNCH, TOM!! lol.
He is so going to get caught. I'm actually excited for it, just so I can watch Tom pick Bill over his wife, lol.
Author's Response: Hehehe, ah! :D:D
Date: 05/08/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is good need 2 write another chapter. oh and every time i hear the name melrose i think of that bitch from america's next top model. keep writing
Author's Response: Hahahaa! That was the one I took the name from! xD Thank you :)
Date: 05/05/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter 4
New reader!!
And I just looove this idea!!
Tom and Bill actually filmed it??
Ooo!!!
Melrose is going to faint when she sees it!!!
Author's Response: Welcome! ;D And thank you! :D
Date: 05/04/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh! Bad boys! But I liked it! That Melrose is such a bitch! Show her what you've got, boys!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/03/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Shiit, this was hot. *.* I frigging love you! *flails* Omg, I can't wait to read more. Tell me, where do you get all these ideas from? You are my hero, girl. *squeeze*
Author's Response: 8|!!! Well, I don't know where the ideas come from. They just do. And HOLY CRAP! Thank you so much! :D
Date: 05/03/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is soooooo good. That will teach that bitch. I can't wait to read about her reaction when she sees the film. How will they deliver the film? At first when they said revenge I thought that Tom intended to get themselves cought by Melrose when she comes home. But this is good to. Should be interesting if the mother sees it too and perhaps findes out that her housband is gay too :D
I'm sooooooo evil XD
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! And you will see how she reacts. I'm not sure how yet, so give me time :P
Date: 05/03/08 06:08 am Title: Chapter 4
OOh next chappie please! I cannot wait to read about Mel's reaction!
x
Author's Response: :D Can't wait to write it, then :P
Date: 05/02/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
YEAH ALVASONDA, I LOVE YOU FOR THIS *___*
it's even better than my idea of Melrose catching them, because she'd see only the small part of the whole thing, and now she'll see EVERYTHING ^____^ [if she doesn't have a heart attack in the middle of watching xD]
*wild dance*
Ohhh write new chapter soon, I can't wait to see her reaction n____n
You made my night [00:10 here in Poland xD]
^____________________________^
Author's Response: Oh, I wish I could thank you in Polish, but I can only say a bad word in that language.. RANDOM! But whatever :P Thanks! I will try having the chapter for you soon :)
Date: 05/02/08 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4
i think Melrose is going to die from heart attack...weeee...let's party..LOL
Good Job
Author's Response: Haha! Maybe :P Thanks!
Date: 05/01/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh come ON!!! dont stop there!!! i want to know how that bitchy wife reacts when she sees it!!!!
Author's Response: haha. You'll find out :)
Date: 05/01/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ouch!!
that's very hot and seductive.
i didnt want to be in Melrose's position.
More Alva and do it in this way.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. But remember, she gets to see the film :P
Date: 05/01/08 10:23 am Title: Chapter 4
AH!! That bitch is going to know something new about his husband, just like he knew somethig about her after marrying her! It's only fair ;) god this was so hot *drool* I can't help it but I want more and soon and now and bah é.é
Author's Response: Ah, thanks! :D And I just need some time to find where this is going. Thank you again!
Date: 04/30/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
I never thought I liked a story of a man cheated on his wife, but you made it. That woman is such an annoyance. The tape shooting is steaming HOT.
Author's Response: Aye, I'm not that into men cheating in marriages and women too, so I had to make that woman as idiotic as possible not to feel guilty. Thanks! :D
Date: 04/30/08 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
SOOOO HOOOT!!!
i really love this one~
Author's Response: Thanks yous
Date: 04/30/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
gosh i LOVE it update soon omg that sex scean was HOT hehe i don't mean to sound peverted buttttt if they did that vid i would TOTTALLY buy it
Author's Response: I'd buy it too! :O Thanks! :D
Date: 04/30/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
aww their first 'I love yous' and it was on camera, very nice ^_^
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! :D
Date: 04/30/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, God!! Me so want that videotape!!! ;)
Damn, I need more!
I can`t wait to read her reactions!!
Author's Response: So do I!!! Thanks for your review!
Date: 04/30/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
*pees*
Author's Response: you and your body fluids! x)