Date: 05/06/11 03:30 pm Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
I think you should have lsabeled this as angst, because I think it definitely fills every standard for a wonderful angst! I like it howe you didn't tell too much - like it was just passing moment and everything was in there, everything important. The fear, sadness and love this fic held were lovely. Yes, I did imagine what happened on the patio. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Angst really isn't my strong point, and you simply can't write angst if you're in any sort of good mood, which I am constantly in because I hate being sad. So I'd probably always argue that my angst isn't true angst. ;)
rnThank you so much for your review! :D Though I wish you'd told me what you thought happened on the patio. ;)
Date: 05/01/11 02:13 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
i like your plot better, honestly :L haha no problem, it was a cute little story! (Although cute may not be appropriate to say, but whateveer)
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. <3 I thought it was cute at some parts, too. :P
Date: 05/01/11 02:01 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
I imagine that he goes, hugs Bill, says something stupid even though he feels like same, Bill leaves, then Tom finds him and makes up for it. Then Bill decides he's not strong enough for this and leaves again. Tom doesn't follow. Eventually, Bill finds a new partner but Tom hates it, because he loves Bill. Then, Bill comes home sad because he partner cheating or something and it's like it was before, taking a while but eventually the twins end up together.
How did you imagine the ending?
Author's Response: Wowww, definitely an interesting ending you thought up, there. Kudos!
rnIn my mind, he and Tom talked out there for just the longest time about everything, they probably strayed from the topic a few times, but always came back to it. I don't think anything too big happened that night, but I think a little spark was lit, yanno? Like the first ignition of a flame.
rnThanks so much for your review! :D
Date: 04/30/11 10:20 pm Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
I wanna know how it ends. This was so good because it had no meaning yet it meant everything. Dear goodness I make no sense thats how cute it was :)
Author's Response: You guys are making me want to do a sequel. xD But thanks so much for your review! <3 I'm so glad you liked it. :D
rnIn my head, he and Tom talked out there for just hours and hours, working it out and talking about it, and nothing REALLY happened, just the start of something. <333
Date: 04/30/11 07:35 pm Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
ugh,you stopped it in such a moment! please write more, it's very interesting!!
Author's Response: Lol! I want you to use your imagination with the ending. ;)
rnThanks for your review! :D
Date: 04/30/11 10:18 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
Damn, Amy! That was awesome!! In its own angsty way, it was really quite adorable. *favorites* Chh, I definitely think Tom returns Bill's feelings! *optimism* But if it had gone on, how would you have ended it?
Author's Response: Awww, Andra. <3 Thank you so much sweetie. <3 I love your optimism. ;)
rnI think Tom went out there and they talked. THey just talked and cuddled for a while, as they talked everything over. I can't say that anything happened for sure, but a little something began to form. <3
Date: 04/30/11 06:07 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
I liked this fic. Kind of sad that there was no ending, but I liked how Bill brought up the sticky subject and how Tom took time to think about everything, how everything was just talking, not any kissing or jumping into bed immediately which we've all read too many times. I like how they still talk to eachother and its not too awkward even after such a confession. Seems realistic to me.
As to what I think would happen next.... oh boy... *takes a few min to think*
I think Tom would tell Bill he loves him too, just never thought about him *that* way before. I think he would ask Bill what he wants to do about everything.
Now you have to tell me what YOU imagine happening next! :P
Author's Response: To... be completely honest, I was a total loss for a real ending. :x So I came up with this, I want you guys to use your imaginations. ;) I love hearing what you thought happened. <3 I also love that you liked how realistic it was, I haaaate fics where they express their love and then go fuck.
rnAs I've said before, I think he and Tom went out there and just talked, and worked everything out and nothing really happened, at least not that night, but something started for sure. :)
rnThanks so much for your review! :D <3
Date: 04/30/11 02:26 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
oh twinny this was good. I feel like I've read it before though and I dont know why. I bet Tom came to his senses and requited the feelings *nod nod nod*
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. <3 And yeah, you have I think, lol. Only it wasn't finished then. But look! The badly written angst is still there. :P Jkjk.
rnAww. :) I can't say if Tom made any decisions that night, but I can say something changed that night. <3
rnThank you for your review, twinny! :D
Date: 04/30/11 01:31 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
okay i wanna know what happened but i think he wants their relationship to be public.
Author's Response: Nice ending! :D I really don't think anything was decided that night, it may have happened a month or even a year later, but that night, I think they just talked to each other and held each other for a long time while they reassured one another that they'd always be together no matter what Tom decided. <3
Date: 04/30/11 01:17 am Title: (Giant) Baby Steps
Ok where to begin? I think he went out there and pulled the cigarette from Bill's fingers and kissed him. That he let his actions speak for him. To tell Bill that he loved him too, he'd just buried those feelings down deep. Now I'm dying to know what you saw. I really liked it though at some points I didn't know if t was Tom or Bill talking. Not sure if you did it that way on purpose but I was a little confused. Nice job though
Author's Response: I love your ending! So sweet. <3 Though in my mind, Bill and Tom talked for a while, there on the patio, and then they sat together for a long time in the dark outside and just... more or less let their hands do all the talking- but without being overly sexual, yanno? And I can't really say whether or not Tom reciprocated the feelings, but I think something happened that night. <3
rnAnd as for the parts where you were confused, they may or may not have been on purpose. I wanted some of it to be confusing, but I'm also super rusty in this fandom at the moment, so I'd say it's a mix, lol.
rnThanks so much for your review! <3