Date: 01/07/20 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
this was a good story!
Date: 08/28/11 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
very so nice and could be even better if not this constant "Billa"....even one is too much. it sounds like ugly feminine name. what's wrong with "Bill"?
Author's Response: Nothing is wrong with "Bill" Its that "Billa" Is supposed to be a Nickname from Tom. Like how "Tomi" is Tom's nickname from Bill.
Date: 06/22/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Itsss HAWTTTT.... And I dont only mean the weather in here. Great job! *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Lolz, thank you for your review! :D
Date: 06/21/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I liked it hot stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 05/07/11 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
It wasn't horrible at all!! I rather liked it! ;)
Author's Response: Thats good to know! thank you!
Date: 05/04/11 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
NICE
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 04/30/11 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wait, hold up... seriously? lol. well now, that makes me want to read that next chapter. Can't wait for more ^___^
Author's Response: haha, thank you. :D