Date: 05/25/11 05:54 pm Title: i should have never opened the door
Awh no D: poor Bill! This is definitely your best chapter so far - you did a great job! :)
Date: 05/11/11 04:54 pm Title: i shouldn't have taken that tour
i like this! XD hope you update soon again!
Date: 05/05/11 06:34 pm Title: i shouldn't have taken that tour
Yaaay I was super happy to see this updated! I think I prefer it in 3rd person so I would stick with that. Then again, if you're happier writing in 1st, then go for that - both are great. :)
Date: 05/03/11 11:03 am Title: I should have left him there...
very good first chapter ^.^
I added it to my tracked stories so I hope you update soon!
Date: 04/29/11 10:57 pm Title: I should have left him there...
hey I love ur story. continue and make it longer if possible :D it's great.
Date: 04/27/11 06:01 pm Title: I should have left him there...
This was a great start! I particularly loved
Abso- fucking- lutley no way-
“Yeah…sure” I sighed.
that bit. That's exactly the sort of thing I'd say :')
Date: 04/27/11 05:54 pm Title: I should have left him there...
a banner to your story catched my attention so I added it to tracked stories, then started to read and everything was perfect, but this writing in first person X.x heh, will wait for another of your stories then! anyway, very good!