Date: 01/11/12 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE THE ENDING!!! Hahahaha, Bill is such a smartypants. lol.
So, ok, this was fun to read, but highly unrealistic cuz of the rushed pace. Take time to write everything out, it'll turn out better in the end. Oh, and "he pulled his fingers out and licked at them" is very unsanitary, not sure you actually meant to go *that* kinky there. LOL.
Other than that, I liked your scenarios and you had a good plot idea, and I love that Tom was the bottom! :) Just work on the execution next time. ;)
Date: 04/24/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahah this was great. Then again, with a summary like "just some smut" there was no way it wasn't going to be great :D
Author's Response: LOL! Im glad you liked it zoe :3
Date: 04/24/11 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah i did
that was SOO funny
hey did you read the fanfic that someone did for ester? I fogot the name of it but it has a banner with a cookie in the shape of a bunny face and in the fic, Bill is afraid that the ester bunny is coming to kill him.
Author's Response: woot! I didnt intend it to be funny but it sort of turned out that way =) and yes i believe i have a long time back though :D
Date: 04/24/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
"giggles"
Author's Response: lol! well I'm hoping that means you enjoyed it :)