Date: 09/02/11 07:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 05/09/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3
hmmmm I will definitely add this to my watch list
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 05/08/11 06:20 am Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE THIS STORY :((
Author's Response: Thank you. Really, thank you. :)
Date: 05/08/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm rather proud of it myself ;)
Date: 05/08/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like this chapter
Date: 05/07/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
omg please write more i love tis story lol when you mentioned lena i always think of lena katina from tatu i abso love this story
Author's Response: Gosh, I don't know what to say... um, thank you!! :)
Date: 04/24/11 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it.. it has a great background on how things are gonna go.
It's off to a great start but, just keep on your toes about spelling, grammatical, punctuation errors ect. :)
I'm giving you the encouragement to keep going! XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! And yeah, will keep spellchecking!
Date: 04/23/11 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far. Bill and tom are so cute as kids
Date: 04/23/11 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it! It's a good start. It's a nice, cute glimpse into their start of an innocent, young friendship. Although, I do think you should look through it and correct it, slightly - there are numbers in the middle of certain sentences, and it's distracting from the story. xP
Otherwise, I love it. I hope you continue on with it and update soon! I'd love to read more. :P
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so far! Sorry about the numbers, I've been struggling with submitting the story-I tried to convert to html and copy-paste it into the text area, thus the irregularities. Fixed!