Date: 04/30/11 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg *_________* This is amazing!!
Bill cries :( Poor thing! I'm so happy he's got Tom now. ♥ I felt really bad for him in chapter 1 but I kept thinking that Tom would appear at some point. And now he did!
I love that Bill loves flying! The descriptions are just wonderful. I love that Tom asks him to fly with him -- that he wants them to fly together. ♥ It's so lovely!
Your writing is fantastic. I enjoyed them showing up (and showing off!) at the Games and then the moment when everyone just stared silently was so suspenseful. The crowd going wild made me grin and grin, though! Such a pleasant surprise. I don't know why I worried, though. Tom is an awesome dragon, right? They couldn't have reacted in any other way! *g*
Simone meeting them is so lovely. ♥ I really like that she reaches them first, and aww, Bill feeling like his fiance is meeting his mother! I love that Tom and Bill both make wide eyes at her. :D
Soppy Bill. ♥ ♥ ♥ I don't think Tom minded at all! I wish we knew what he was thinking. But he can't have minded Bill's kisses. :)
I love this: "Riders weren't really supposed to bare their necks to their dragons." Because it shows that Bill already has a special relationship with Tom. ♥ The scene where Tom bathes Bill is absolutely wonderful. You combine funny and touching and sweet so well, and Bill's shivery feelings. :D Thank you for including them! Mmm, I love how Bill finds Tom's licks surprisingly pleasant, and rationalises that this must happen between every dragon and their human. Sure, Bill, keep telling yourself that. *g*
"Bill swallowed, staring down at him. Dragons' tongues always felt damp and velvety, and just a tiny bit rough" *____* This is so hot and inappropriate! (Did Tom lick Bill's nipples or did he save that for later?) I love it. Bill being "floppy and satisfied and tired" is the best description ever. I want to know what Tom is thinking in this scene! Did he just want to make Bill feel like that? He's so good with Bill. ♥ It makes me so happy to read about it.
"He had the real thing" is so sweet and sad at the same time! All those years without Tom. :( But Bill has him now. I love that they cuddle close and Tom covers Bill with a possessive wing. ♥
I think I've abused hearts in this review. But THEY ARE SO LOVELY AND LOVING, I can't help it!
And Kiiiiiish. The way you end chapters with cliffhangers! It makes me feel so needy and yearning! I want to know more. This is such a fantastic, fun, happy chapter, and yet by the end I want to leave a review that says only "more pls." Hee. Suffice to say, I really look forward to the next chapter! Will we learn more about what Tom is thinking? How will they cope with these new, unexpected circumstances? How soon will Bill be thinking about Tom's tongue and wanting to feel it on his skin again?
Also, Tom must not have been holding onto Bill tightly enough if Bill could just tumble off the bed like that! I hope he will pay more attention to this in the future.
Date: 04/30/11 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooh Tom turned all humany! And Bill with a beard is very very disconcerting. Not bad... just strange. I love this chapter and your absolutely wonderful line: since only a person with a suicidal amount of confidence would ever consider climbing onto a flying lizard in the first place.
Wonderful job.
Date: 04/30/11 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
HA!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!
It will be great finding out how human Tom reacts to Bill...lol
Thanks for updating even with computer problems >
Date: 04/30/11 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohhhh, this is getting good. I love their interaction and I crave for more of this.
And yes, I want to die seeing bill with beard.
Date: 04/30/11 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Fabulous development. Bill's joy at finally havign his very own, top gorgeous rare and über handsome dragon
is charming and touching at the same time. Tom has this special way of dealing with Bill and they communicate wonderfully. Of course, had Bill know his new best friend would turn into a human , he might have understood a lot of more things. But he didn't know and now I wonder if all the other boys' dragons can do this trick too, but never bothered telling Bill because he had no dragon anyway? Or maybe it's just Boll's Tom ? I love the little important spin here and look forward to what human Tom has to say.
Bill's Beard is epic. Hopefully, he'll keep it for a while so we can enjoy it longer :D If he lost a bet, I hope its for a month lol
Date: 04/30/11 10:31 am Title: Chapter 2
This is the most amazing thing in my life right now and my survival depends on more, I tell you.
Date: 04/30/11 10:05 am Title: Chapter 2
awww i like this story its something different besides the usual story... can't wait for more
Date: 04/30/11 08:59 am Title: Chapter 2
I forgot about the beard...
WHAT IS HE THINKING? D:
lol
Hope he'll get bored about it very soon. xD
Date: 04/30/11 08:52 am Title: Chapter 2
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Such a tender, super cute chapter. I had a big smile on my face at every gentle gesture/look/word and omg, I was so hoping for this kind of cliffhanger!!!
You made my day girl! :) (and I have just gotten up lol)
Date: 04/30/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter 2
omg yay~ thanks for the update! I want a new one ;_____________; fantastic chapter~!! so many fun moments! yay Bill!!!! yay Tom!!!!
Date: 04/30/11 06:30 am Title: Chapter 2
AAAAA! SO exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter! *___* I'd love to wake up next to Tom's warm body, mmmmm
Bill has a beard. LOL. I hope it's just a stubble and he'll get rid of it XD Not that he's less awesome now ;3
Date: 04/30/11 06:12 am Title: Chapter 2
O_____________O *holds breath* OMG!
Date: 04/30/11 05:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more! XD Great chapter!
Date: 04/30/11 05:09 am Title: Chapter 2
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I screamed when I saw this updated, and I squealed at the end. Lord, if you knew how early it is...
I love it. I was just as happy as Bill when Tom found him. I almost teared up! Awesome job.
And um.
Beard!gate. Yeah.
Date: 04/30/11 04:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story so far, I'm glad I started reading it. This is going to be great XD
Date: 04/30/11 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG ITS SO TRUE, NOTHING ELSE DOES MATTER! ahhh beard, it's just...the absolute last thing i'd ever have expected! i don't even know what i think about it apart from...BILL HAS A BEARD.
but beyond that, yayyyy bill has his dragon! woo, interesting licking scene there...and then, ooh, hello warm human body. yay.
Date: 04/30/11 03:56 am Title: Chapter 2
*drops jaw* oh come ON! you had to leave us hanging there??? *flails* it's so good though! why you leave it off like that? *pouts* i guess you leave me no choice but to wait for the next update.
Date: 04/30/11 03:34 am Title: Chapter 2
I had considered rambling at length about all the adorable bits of this chapter, but instead I'm going to say THAT IS AN EVIL PLACE TO LEAVE THINGS WHEN YOU HAVE NO COMPUTER TO POST MORE ASAP. That was not completely unexpected because you *did* say this was a remix of those two stories but MORE. Please?
Date: 04/30/11 03:24 am Title: Chapter 2
I want to see Bill's reaction! O,O
I love this story! ^^;
and yeah Bill has a beard... It doesn't really look that great, but I'll get used to it.. Bill is great no matter what he looks like ^^;
Date: 04/30/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2
ok so first, the fic. Wonderful so far. I really look forward to more. I was feeling so very bad for Bill, not having his own dragon, and being picked on by those assholes....
Question. Twice scorched poatoes...anything like double baked potatoes?
The tongue bath was a little weird in the sense that Bill didn't want to shower after wards. I love when my dog decides I need a bath, but I have to take a shower after. I can only imagine dragon breath is much ickier than dog breath.
As for Bill's new facial features... life will never be the same will it? Though, as of the filming of the vid its barely more than 5 o clock shadow. Is it horrible that when I first saw the vid I thought "omg he really can grow facial hair" I then proceeded to think, however mean it may be "aww hes a real boy!" you know the way pinocchio says it? I feel kind of bad...but not...because at least now I don't feel so bad about my facial hair. I was beginning to wonder if I had more than him...but I don't.
great work! I can't wait to see what comes next!