Date: 05/07/11 03:43 am Title: Chapter 3
oooooooh at the very end I squealed and slapped my hands to my face, I'm not kidding. Good lord I'm blushing like an idiot like I'M the one who got caught. OH gosh this is brilliant, and I cannot wait for more!
Date: 05/07/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter 3
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
I knew there would be a cliff hanger but to have one so bad as this!? Are you trying to kill me!?! I'm so anxious to read what happens next and now I'm going to be useless until you update again. T.T So cruel dear author, so cruel...
Date: 05/07/11 02:38 am Title: Chapter 3
If you feel like posting two chapters a night, that would be acceptable. I wouldn't complain.
Date: 05/07/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh! I don't even know where to begin. There were so many funny things in this chapter that the mental list I was making got incredibly long. I was on my way to bed when I refreshed THF and there this update was. I got so excited. This is the first thing I've read since MaNoWriMo started.
I hope Andreas isn't going to be too judgy. What was he doing out there on Bill's island? Just a side note, I hope that Tom doesn't become one or the other. Bill needs a dragon but he also needs Human Tom too. This was a really great update, they are so cute together. I'm excited for more.
PS.
I'm willing to crack whips or threaten you with tasers or other unwanted things if it helps your motivation with other half finished works. ;p
Date: 05/07/11 01:43 am Title: Chapter 3
oh you evil lady! As if we would've cared that the chapter was ten thousand words! I am really curious to find out what is up with Tom and why he can turn into a person, and IK am super interested in finding out what happens nrxt. Keep up the fabu work.
Date: 05/07/11 01:31 am Title: Chapter 3
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH
*flails* *trips* *rolls on the floor* *squee*
IZ SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUTE!!! *flutterclaps*
I knooooooooooooow it's supposed to be kind of sexual buuuuuuuuuut... BUT BUT BUT..XDD I dunno.. It's just sooooo cute!! Ahahahahaha... Tom never losing those dragon mannerisms and Bill all too enthusiastic with the ehmm.. You know.XDD Doing the not-for-kids stuff with Tom!!XD They're just sooooooo cute and so perfect together!! And Tom's really über protective of Bill. That's very nice. Gaaaaaaaaahhhh They're so adorable...*_______* Where can I get an adorable dragoooooooooon looooool..XD
I'm starting to think maybe Bill's kinda half-dragon-ish because of this. But mehh...XD That could be wrong. Maybe they're just the soulmate type. Whichever!! Can't wait to find out mooooooooore.. Could Tom/Bill belong to a very ancient/magical tribe, then?:O Whoooooaaaa... Waaaaaahhh more updaaaaates!! *flails*
Their hormonal levels are shooting up UP UP!!! Bill was really funny being enthusiastic and all about sex..XDD I was really waiting for that part since the last chapter when Tom became human. YES I'm waiting for the Smut part!! Hahahahaha *perv* But their gestures were still... They feel less sexual when I read 'em and more adorable instead. Hmmm. But they're still not doing innocent stuff..*___* TOO BAD ANDREAS WAS A PARTY-POOPER!! BOOOOOOO!! TOTAL COCK-BLOCK!! *perv*
And now I'm wondering whether that PG-13 will change in the next chapters.. *deep thought* Hmmmmm... Heeeeeee...
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH I totally LOVE THIS FIIIIIIIIIC!! Thanks for the awesome updaaaaaaate!!:333
Date: 05/07/11 01:20 am Title: Chapter 3
This is. Just. *______* You are so much win, I just asdfadghfghfjfd can't even coherently express it without keyboard smash! This fic is pure magic, and I look forward to each new part so eagerly, *_*
Date: 05/06/11 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMO ~! i saw this coming! i swear i did! haghasdgvask i loved this chapter so muchly!!!!! :D :D :D
Date: 05/05/11 03:09 am Title: Chapter 2
WAAAAAAAAAAAHH..*superflails*
I know. Crazy me..XD But Tom-dragon-and-Bill interaction was just sooooooooooo CUTE!!! Hahahaha... And I see Tom's dragon image as the something like the black dragon in HOw To Train Your Dragon. THE BIG EYES!!XD Those Goo-goo eyes when he stares at Bill.. Eeeeeekkk!!XD Well that's how I imagine it. Big doe-like, goo-goo eyes.. Ahahahahahaha..XD I sooooo love their interaction t's cute, funny and sweet:3333 Like the part where Tom was trying to feed Bill too. SO SWEEEEET!! Unf, they're just soooooo cute:333 *flutterclaps*
And now I'm back to thinking/wondering about Bill's true heritage..XD He'd known Tom since whenever, because he drew him before right? Is it something like, Tom's been with him since the day he was born? A soulmate kind of thing? AND AND AND!!! Tom turned humaaaaaaan!!! Does that mean it's mating season already??XD Or Tom wants to mate.. But.. Errr.. Or maybe Tom can just transform whenever?? Hell, I even started to think Bill's half-dragon too. Hahahahaha silly..XD
ANYWAYS. Love, love loooooove this!! Can't wait to see what happens with Bill and human-Tom!!XD
Date: 05/03/11 03:11 am Title: Chapter 2
*flails* I'm so happy for Bill and Tom. Their flight was awesome and I'm so impressed at how they just swooped in and won the race even if they were disqualified. I love how supportive Simone and Gordon are and Tom trying to bathe Bill was epic. The last two and a half lines have me in a complete tizzy, cannot wait for more!! *snuggles*
Date: 05/01/11 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHHHHH HE'S HUMAN!!!!!!!!!
Speaking of humans, BILL'S BEARD IS SO SEXY I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE IT.
(but to give it a try I'm gonna go for a more feminine Joe Jonas with sexier everything)
AWESOME CHAPTER.
Date: 05/01/11 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg, i seriously love this! all i have to say :')
Date: 05/01/11 02:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Tom!
I'm loving this story to bits. I'm so glad Bill and Tom are finally together, they are so very cute!
Bill is so funny and Tom is such a sweetheart (showing off for Bill and everything) I love them both!
I'm absolutely looking forward to read what's next.
See ya!
Date: 04/30/11 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
HA!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!
It will be great finding out how human Tom reacts to Bill...lol
Thanks for updating even with computer problems >
Date: 04/30/11 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omggggg an ending like that?! How am I supposed to... do ~anything?! This was such an exciting chapter :D I read it all smiling so hard, aw it wa fabulous! And whoa whoa WHOA I can't wait to see what happens next o__O Your writing is incredible! I always always enjoy it ^_^
Date: 04/30/11 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Bill and Tom are so sweet together! You did a lovely job showing them getting to know each other, and how they instantaneously fell for each other. Adorable! And I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment.
Date: 04/30/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooh Tom turned all humany! And Bill with a beard is very very disconcerting. Not bad... just strange. I love this chapter and your absolutely wonderful line: since only a person with a suicidal amount of confidence would ever consider climbing onto a flying lizard in the first place.
Wonderful job.
Date: 04/30/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooh Tom turned all humany! And Bill with a beard is very very disconcerting. Not bad... just strange. I love this chapter and your absolutely wonderful line: since only a person with a suicidal amount of confidence would ever consider climbing onto a flying lizard in the first place.
Wonderful job.