Date: 07/03/11 04:14 am Title: Numb
OMG she will know!! I think Bill is pregent! yes he is!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm not saying it by I updated today :X
Date: 07/03/11 03:54 am Title: The Waking Dream
cool chapi :3 I love ur story ^.^
Date: 07/03/11 03:42 am Title: The Killing Moon Part Two
OMG THAT WAS TOM >:O poor Billiiii
this chapi was awesome :D
Date: 07/03/11 03:32 am Title: The Killing Moon Part One
this story is so great! :3
Date: 06/30/11 05:39 pm Title: Suckerlove
I can't wait for that Dr. to arrive!!! And when is tom showing up?
Author's Response: The Dr. will basically say what we all know :) Tom will show up when he resigns himself to retribution :)
Date: 06/30/11 05:17 pm Title: The Killing Moon Part Two
OK, first of all I love it, it's quite original, it's always good to read something new.
Now, call me a sadist, but I was hoping it was Tom who raped Bill, idk, guess you have something more planned, lol I can't wait to have they meet again soon and see how Bill reacts, it's only chap 5, I wish you could write longer chaps, I'd keep in touch over here;)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! It was Tom who raped Bill, it was him in the hotel room freaking out over it :)
Date: 06/30/11 03:49 pm Title: Suckerlove
Bills pregnant! I can't believe Jorge would have sex with his son! I just read this entirely and I'm in love with it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is pregnant ;) Its so flattering to hear you like this story when I adore yours!
Date: 06/30/11 03:32 pm Title: Zophos
ok, I don't understand this, does Bill wanted to have sex with Jorg or he doesn't?
maybe he had to be ready by noon for a dinner? *just kidding*
btw, is it sci-fi ,creaturefic, or period piece story?
Author's Response: That a question that I want asked! No he doesn't want to have sex with Jorg, in fact, I would dare say he was raped. He just doesn't have control over how he comes off to men. That's why I nicknamed him Seraph; he ignites a fire in men that cannot be put out fully without consequences. rnrnNoon and midnight; I just love that time, but it is also a significant number and it will be put into play later on.
Date: 06/30/11 02:38 pm Title: Suckerlove
Actually I have wondered that. WHy does Bill have to be ready by noon? O.O
Great chapter
ALso I dont understand why he's so tempting, is he idk some kind of heavenly creature or something? xD Just a little confused x.x
Author's Response: I like to use a lot of symbolism with the number twelve, the witching hour, and noon! I just think that its an important time so I use it a lot. I didn't even realize it until I was posting this chapter and I used it once again. rnrnAs for why he's so tempting, he is a seraph; a burning one, the angel that kindles and makes hot, of poison but one when enraptured seeks freely :)
Date: 06/27/11 06:36 pm Title: Numb
This is a great story, and I can't wait to read more of it! Update soon!
Date: 06/27/11 03:15 pm Title: Numb
very short chapter but very good too! thank you! is Bill pregnant?
btw, you used a quote from one of most famous writers/poet from my country!
Author's Response: I really didn't want to reveal if Bill was pregnant or not but you pick up on everything. I love readers like you, and I really do love your feedback. I wanted to add to your other review response. I wouldn't say its a creature fic or science fiction but I do use a lot of symbolism in that regard. A lot of them are hidden but I'll start posting questions at the end of each chapter to reveal them!rnrnThanks again,rnSabrina
Date: 06/27/11 02:44 pm Title: Numb
this is pretty good, it kept calling to me, cause the summary is so mysterious it tells me nothing of what to expect! :)
Keep writing, cant wait for more ^^
Date: 06/15/11 07:20 am Title: The Waking Dream
Like it, very good!!!
Date: 06/14/11 06:00 pm Title: Zophos
or maybe he IS a hermaphrodite?
Date: 06/14/11 05:59 pm Title: The Waking Dream
I reread this part again, and I like it even more than before. will try to ignore Bill's anatomy and think about him as a hermaphrodite instead :)
Author's Response: Yeah, that is the best way to think of it :)
Date: 06/14/11 05:38 pm Title: The Waking Dream
oh God, Bill with menstruation X.x vagina is already too much but this? hahaha, I feel like this story will give me some hard time, since it's sooo close to HET. anyway, it's very intersting, seems Bill is starting to be more serious! can't wait for more!
Date: 06/02/11 11:38 am Title: The Killing Moon Part Two
Oh Tom;( what did you do... I hope that Tom man up and take care of his mistakes. Yes, bill broke rules when he go swimming but tom was THE Adult.
I don't know if I want to know what happens in morning when everybody found out:(( nothing pretty I think.
Author's Response: Yes, Bill was foolish but Tom is the adult is should have known better. And will anyone find out, we'll see!
Date: 06/02/11 10:46 am Title: The Killing Moon Part Two
The truth is, maybe I would be a little disapointed if it weren't Tom xD. But I still don't understand why Andreas didn't come back. And can't wait to know what will happen next!;)
Author's Response: For this story to unfold the way I want it to, it has to be Tom, and the reason why Andreas didn't return will be revealed in a few chapters.
Date: 06/02/11 10:38 am Title: The Killing Moon Part Two
ummm, what is Bill exactly? a boy with a vagina?
Author's Response: Yeah, I know its complicated basically he has both parts and he can reproduce that's the only important part. And when Tom raped him he broke a mostly sealed cover of his vagina that proved his chastity.
Date: 05/31/11 07:57 am Title: The Killing Moon Part One
I feel like Bills personality is a bit changed, he is less sweet somehow.
I just hope that this horny brainless man isn't Tom.....>.>
Author's Response: I guess his personality seems different in this chapter, but its probably because I didn't write it. He's still sweet, innocent, and child-like and you'll see that in the next chapters, but then he will go through a transition as well.rnrnWe will see who the man is in the next part of this chapter, which I'll post tomorrow! But all things have consequences...