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Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/11 03:23 pm Title: Scarlet Fever

She watches him bathe? That's awkward.. and his Father touches him lie that? That's even more awkward. This chapter has all kinds of awkward lmao.

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/11 03:15 pm Title: Zophos

Whoa this is beautfully written and I'm excited to see what happens next. Great job!

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 05:51 am Title: Secret Letter

Billllllllllll.... >_< I can't stand imagining his flat stomach been stretched... I seriously love this story, you have a brilliant idea about memu.. I love every side of this story so please please continue please...

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 05:45 am Title: Suckerlove

GUUH... Perv dad!

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Date: 09/06/11 05:42 am Title: Numb

*gasp* he is pregnant!

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Date: 09/06/11 05:40 am Title: The Waking Dream

Bill... he was alone trough the ordeal ..

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 05:39 am Title: The Killing Moon Part Two

huhh *pant* *apoplexia* it's so... uh... sexy? yeah! omg Tom, rape him again please! XD so... Memu is like that., :3

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 05:36 am Title: The Killing Moon Part One

oooh.... he is too naive! or stupid ow poor bill. the man had to be Tom!

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Date: 09/06/11 05:33 am Title: Angel's Tale

yess... he is a natural seductress!

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Date: 09/06/11 02:24 am Title: Scarlet Fever

jeez... perv pedo father! >

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Date: 09/06/11 02:22 am Title: Zophos

SWEET memu *_* ... but..what is memu? I think I am gonna like this story! AU and rape!!!

Reviewer: MissBlueeyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 09:21 am Title: Secret Letter

;_; oh poor Bill. But now His family know and maybe they don't kill Tomi if he go and tell them. Maybe Tom even can ask Bills hand and make everything better and be sweet and kind to Bill:) (My inner romantic just wakes up) Big maybe, because Jorg seems to be very very overprotective. I read Georgs finansees name maybe three times and just think about is it really that name or bill writen wrong XDD
Can I ask what memu is? How memu child is different than normal kid? Because I have understand that bill is hermafrodit (not sure if I write that correctly) but are there something else that makes them called memus.
And so good that they can't abort that baby but I hope they let bill keep him after birth too.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 08:45 pm Title: Zophos

Thanks

Hey, can you maybe do a fanfic with me or do one of my fic prompts? you sound like your good with fantasy. I cant write fantasy

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 08:42 pm Title: Zophos

Okay thanks
I think I get it.
Not sure what a memu is but, whatever

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 12:03 am Title: Secret Letter

is bill engaged to georg?



Author's Response: No Georg is engaged to another named Blith :) who also have dark hair but looks nothing like Bill.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 08:18 pm Title: Angel's Tale

im still having trouble understanding what is going on

Author's Response: Sorry, this is my first fiction written by myself so I'm probably missing a lot of information.rnrnBasically the story starts off with Bill being in seclusion when he turned 14 (its a part of maturity; a right of passage so to speak). It is also during this time, that he is irresistible to men. Even though he's supposed to be restricted to the house, he loves to sneak out anyways. On the night of the hot spring, he encounters a man (which is actually Tom) who rapes him. At that point he matures a lot because he realizes that he should be more careful ecetera. A few months pass and he is feeling sick, his father has sex with him and at this time, his father sees that his sickness may be more than just a sickness. Turns out, he pregnant with Tom's child. However, Bill is having a hard time remembering the man who was at the springs because he was trying to forget about it. Meanwhile, Tom is stricken with guilt so he behaves rashly ( he is mean and just not himself). He also discovered that the person he raped at the spring was Bill Kaulitz, only child of a fellow aristocrat Jorg Kaulitz. He feels he must do something to repay them somehow. rnrnGeorg is marrying a memu named Blith also have dark hair etc but its not Bill.

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 01:58 am Title: Secret Letter

I love it this is story!!!!

Author's Response: Awww....Thank you!

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 11:27 pm Title: Secret Letter

Wow! Tom should get his ass out of that bed and do something about that guilt taking over! :P
Great chapter!

Reviewer: vikomiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 09:53 pm Title: Secret Letter

I'd say he MUST speak to Bill and try to apologize at least and George can kick his ass as a retribution also! lol

Author's Response: That would be a fun scene. I can see it; Georg kicking Tom's ass, then forcing him to apologize to Bill.rnrn

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 04:32 am Title: Suckerlove

omg why Bill let his dad fuck him? O.O
this is so interesting :3 so diffrenet! I'll be waiting for more <3

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