Date: 06/10/11 07:31 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
I'm enjoying the story very much. Unfortunately, I'm noticing some grammar and spelling mistakes that are slipping past your beta. I would offer to be your beta but you already have one. Just let her know to double check your work because it really is an interesting story and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much for reading and liking it! I'll remind her, I promise :) I feel awful, the next chapter is barely done! D: but I'll try to finish it tonight!
Date: 05/20/11 09:05 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
I really like this so far. You do need a beta though. Silly mistakes detract from what is otherwise a really good. I look forward to more. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm sorry my silly mistakes distract you, I'll ask the beta to be more thorough :)
Date: 05/18/11 09:40 am Title: One Letter Changes Lives
oh no i didn't mean that it was boring, sweetheart, i just meant that it just wasn't that much action, you know? it was good though. promise!
Author's Response: haha ookay, thank you :)
Date: 05/17/11 03:39 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
I like it! :DD
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 05/17/11 01:00 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
good chapter, even though it didn't happen very much in it. and yes you spell review absolutely right. i don't want to seem like a total bitch about it, but the grammar isn't right everywhere even though you've got a beta, just thought i'd let you know, because it annoys me. you switch between present and past time, which is pretty annoying. just sayin'. besides that it was good.
Author's Response: Your not a bitch! I love the criticism! It helps me a ton! I'm really sorry it was boring, I thought it was too but something exciting will happen next, I promise! This is my first story so I'm still kind of, or all together, really bad at this :) I'm sorry my grammars awful too! I'll ask the beta reader to do check that more closely for you and everyone else! I'm still happy you read this after the awful job I've done! If you have any suggestions that could help further with my grammar, contact my e-mail at crhenne@Juno.com :) thanks a million!
Date: 05/17/11 12:14 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
It keeps getting better & better. Can't wait to read what's next =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review just put a smile on my face! What an awful day could be turned around by one review :)
Date: 05/16/11 11:22 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
you are spelling eview right, and i loved this chapter, wot cliffhanger! I hope you update soon! we saw a glimpse of Bill's power but im really interested in a graphic descriptio of fire and earth, that'd be way cool :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm spelling review right! Thanks so much for reading! I'll try and be really descriptive for fire and earth bending!! :)
Date: 05/16/11 10:27 pm Title: One Heart Falls For Another
I LOVE these Chapters!!! More, More, More!!
But spelling and grammer need the tinciest upgrade :3
Btw you've spelt reveiw right
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Sorry my spelling and grammars off!! I new at writing and all this stuff :) and I did?! Yes! I always spell it wrong! I forget I comes before e except after c! Lol
Date: 05/12/11 07:55 am Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
i hope you update soon! this is damn intriguing and i havent read a fantasy fic like this on here so i hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Soon is my middle name! hahaha :) thanks for reading :))
Date: 05/08/11 05:30 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
XD
Author's Response: Haha :D
Date: 05/08/11 04:18 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
Tom is so planning trouble.
Author's Response: Oh definatly! XD
Date: 05/08/11 01:34 pm Title: One Letter Changes Lives
I shall do that. I would love to beta this.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! :D
Date: 05/08/11 02:47 am Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
I knew Tom was up to no good lol. I'm ready for more xD
Author's Response: More is on the way then! :D
Date: 05/08/11 12:39 am Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
Hhahah Tom is really funny hahaha Bill is soooo cute and intelligent and powerful!!!!
Love this fic!!! Please continue!
This story is amazing!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! XD I will definatly keep writing!
Date: 05/07/11 06:52 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
lol Tom makes me laugh.
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad he does! Lol hey, do you still wanna beta the story? :) If you can could you mayb, possibly email me at crhenne@Juno.com? I would appreciate it a ton! XD
Date: 05/07/11 05:15 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
No need to make up anything, impromptu vacations are glorious, I completely understand! :D Tom, that goose, won't be thinking of Bill as just an enemy for long I'm sure! Also, I foresee some convenience in Bill having a room to himself, yes? This was a lovely chapter, thanks for sharing. :)
Author's Response: Ok I'm glad you understand! :D it's like you already know the relationship stuff of Tom and Bill! Haha! Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/07/11 03:59 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: You're very welcome!
Date: 05/07/11 02:58 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
this was goood, but did anyone beta read it? if you haven't found a beta yet i could help you, even though i'm not really good at english. man, i'm from sweden lol we don't speak americano. no lol jk, but yeah i could help you if you haven't found anyone yet or whatever. and as for your question... perhaps a faster update next time? ;) and sorry that i just keep talking about beta, but i find it pretty annoying when texts aren't correct. sorry once again! xoxo
Author's Response: It's ok! I'm happy to get the criticism! It helps me grow as a writer! :) I'll make the next chapter as soon as I can and if the one girl I asked can't do it I'll be happy to contact you for it! :)
Date: 05/07/11 02:23 pm Title: Friend or Foe? Maybe both?
loving it!
Author's Response: Haha Thanks so much!! :)
Date: 05/07/11 08:58 am Title: One Letter Changes Lives
I'm so sorry for the wait! I'll post today! I'm really truly sorry though! I went on an unexpected vacation and I feel bad I could give you a heads up! But for the last two days I've been writing away! XD