Date: 03/21/13 07:00 pm Title: Simple Commands
this was amazing
Date: 06/15/11 08:03 pm Title: Simple Commands
Please don't stop writing BDSM! It was really hot!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 05/09/11 01:26 am Title: Simple Commands
Hi. No do not forget about bdsm. I usually am rally catious when it comes to reading bdsm, bc of the violence, but yours was really sexy in a submissive way.
I'll keep on reading the rest of your stories, sorry for the absence and the lack of reviews, but I've been really really busy.
Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked my bdsm, it's not typically something I write. :D
Date: 04/27/11 06:07 am Title: Simple Commands
Bring it!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/23/11 10:26 pm Title: Simple Commands
I hope you do more!
Author's Response: I plan to! :D
Date: 04/22/11 01:26 am Title: Simple Commands
That was good and not too hard core. We like it, like it, like it and we can handle more!
Author's Response: Yea, I tend to think all bdsm is hard core. I guess I'm comparing it to regular sex, not other bdsms lol. I have a few other fics planned along these lines... xD
Date: 04/21/11 08:25 pm Title: Simple Commands
Oh, I just lovelovelove doggy play! It is so damn hot! This was cute and just the way I like it - a good mix of dominance and affection. Yup, definitely hot! :)
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Doggy play is such a cute way to think of it. Hehe, I love Bill's little collar :D
Date: 04/21/11 06:48 pm Title: Simple Commands
I definitely enjoyed it! :) For a second attempt at bdsm it was really great - far better than I could do. Smut or bdsm - it's all good :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope to practice a lot more at writing BDSM, so hopefully I'll still improve! :D
Date: 04/21/11 12:01 am Title: Simple Commands
what re you talking about abandoning the BDSM? You may be inexperianced at it, but you couldn't tell by reading it. Very smexy stuff. Don't go giving up on this genre, remember, practiced makes perfect. Not thsat you need much practice.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so!! I usually write smut, so I'm glad to hear that I haven't butchered this genre. :D
Date: 04/20/11 09:45 pm Title: Simple Commands
Hmm not too hardcore..I actually wanted to write simething like this awhile ago but couldn't find the time so I was quite excited when I saw that you wrote. Going into this though I thought you'd have Tom cover his dick in peanut butter or something idk..it's just some hardcore porn ppl do that cover their dick in peanut butter and have a dog lick it off...I liked it! Sequel?
Author's Response: Hehe, yea, I just think all BDSM is considered hardcore in relationship to... fluff. Haha, just kidding. And there'll be a couple other one-shots in this universe soon. :D
Date: 04/20/11 07:18 pm Title: Simple Commands
This was just so incredibly hot...definitely continue to write BDSM! You had great characters with a full story and dynamic, plus really hot scenes of submission. I hope you consider writing more from this universe!
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to!! I have a few more stories for this universe in mind :D
Date: 04/20/11 07:11 pm Title: Simple Commands
WOW!
... Yeah, it's a good WOW. Haha.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 04/20/11 02:09 pm Title: Simple Commands
From one kinky mind to another (hehe), I think there's a lot of potential to your BDSM-writing! Remember, bdsm is really just about mutual trust and care. I would recomend you to read "Safeword" by Azaria.
I really liked this story, but don't be afraid to write longer stories that involves and explains the relationship between the characters.
And don't be too harsh on yourself; practise makes perfect! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so, because I do really enjoy this genre, so it's good to hear that I don't fail at it. I LOVE that story, and it's actually in my favorites. I would like to write a really long BDSM fantasy of sorts, (Bad Romance is one of the greatest BDSM stories on the site I think) but at the moment I'm just sticking with one-shots. :D
Date: 04/20/11 11:09 am Title: Simple Commands
Nnngh! That was so HOT! I'm normally not for BDSM, but I really liked this.
I wouldn't mind you writing more stories like this from time to time.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, even though you're not usually into BDSM. I do plan to write more similar stories to this one in the near future :D
Date: 04/20/11 05:36 am Title: Simple Commands
Wow, even though it wasn't my cup of tea, it was very good. You should not stop with BDSM, as your writing clearly indicates that you have a great understanding of it. The style in which you depicted this scene was very unique, and worked extremely well. I liked the way Tom ordered Bill around, not really bothering with the niceties. Please do continue to explore with this hard-core stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That's good to hear, as my first BDSM was a major fail. I think I am going to continue with this kind of Tom/Bill relationship, because their love of dogs and the way people usually command dogs have given me so many possible fic ideas already. Hopefully I'll be able to work up to the really hard-core stuff! :D
Date: 04/20/11 04:19 am Title: Simple Commands
ZOMG i loved this it was awesome :DD
but im confused is bill actually humen orrr is it a dog . . . .
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And Bill is a human, sorry for any confusion about that lol. xD
Date: 04/20/11 02:10 am Title: Simple Commands
Very hot!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/20/11 01:00 am Title: Simple Commands
I think you're doing a fine job.
Ahem. brb, I'll be in my bunk.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hehe ^^
Date: 04/20/11 12:39 am Title: Simple Commands
Damn...that's all I can really say, lol. I don't know if bdsm is really my thing, but this was still very much entertaining. I just don't like seeing Bill so abused, whether he enjoys it or not. But it was still a good little story. Very well written :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it entertaining even if you're not usually into bdsm. I think that an abused Bill is okay when he's well comforted by his loving Tomi. Thanks for the review! :D