Date: 10/29/11 09:46 pm Title: Whitmore
Wow u had 2 do that for a school project in middle school?? thats kinda cool =) wow im really startin to hate dylan =/ hes like super overly jealous i think shes to nice wit the guy or mayb its cus i would completly cuss him out for beiing so stupid but then again thats me aha... and ashley all she seems to think is about popularity seems narrow and closed minded but i cant wait for the next chapter =D i dont mind that u posted this early im sure no1 minds that it was early aha I hope the next chapter comes soon i cant wait to read it
Author's Response: Thanx :p im starting on the next chap 2morrow
Date: 10/29/11 08:03 pm Title: Whitmore
I'm thinking if Dylan continues to be a prick then it won't last long. At least i'm hoping =) I'm curious about what Tom's deal was, with the questions & all. Great chapter, can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: Tom was just looking out for his little brother, though Bill has never really mentioned the project to his brother (who heard it through the grapevine) I cant wait to write more
Date: 10/29/11 06:56 pm Title: Whitmore
Hmm I wonder what Tom meant I'm still confuse at that part, also why did she take Dylan back she is oblivious to notice that he's abusive towards her. He grabbed her as in harmed her and she doesn't see that. He stalks her and doesn't trust her, and it was childish of her to take him back just because Nicole was watching. Now she's gotten herself in a big old mess that Dylan boy will only get more possessive and hurt her :( an Bill. Dylan scares me :(
Pleaseeeeee UPDATE SOOOOON!!! PLEASEEEE!! I need to know what happens next!!
Author's Response: Dylan's just insecure cuz he knows Bill looks better lol no seriously, im going to post the new chap either tues or wednesday. :)
Date: 10/29/11 06:32 pm Title: Somebody's Watching Me
Oh I enjoyed it no worries. But Dylan is scaring me :( he seems crazy sphyco :( I'm afraid for bill and her.
Author's Response: Oh but he is... And you should be lol
Date: 10/29/11 06:20 pm Title: Whitmore
Yay! Another chapter. I'm so happy.
I'm not gonna lie, I did not like this chapter because of the fact that she took Dylan back. Meh :(
I wonder why Tom kept asking her about his brother...? Hmm...
All that aside, this chapter was lovely like always. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Everyone notices tom's presses, though its not what most think. he's not referring to a crush or anything because he doesnt know about Bills thoughts on her. Did that make any sense?
Date: 10/29/11 06:08 pm Title: Feeling sorry and Dopplegangers
"But no. I get his Doppelganger, Count Fagula, and his supreme irritability as a partner for a whole month."
XD she's so mean haha. And Tom eh? I'm a Tom girl but for some reason your story caught my eye, I really like it.
And I'm starting to find Bill hot -___- what are you doing to me >:-O
Author's Response: lol im converting u :)
Date: 10/29/11 05:48 pm Title: Pizza and The Lion King
Lol Bill caught her staring XD I love it!
Author's Response: he did? i have 2 reread tht... lol
Date: 10/29/11 05:34 pm Title: THE EX-periment
Cute guy. Bill know he's hot stuff huh? That cocky bastard.
Author's Response: lol the kid IS HOT Stuff ;)
Date: 10/29/11 05:23 pm Title: The Experiment
I like it and bill looks hot! :P
Author's Response: Bill IS hot :)
Date: 10/26/11 05:55 am Title: Somebody's Watching Me
nein I won't let it die! :DDD I hate Dylan want to kill him for doing that to Bill Cool Chapter I love it! :DDD
Author's Response:
thank you! I'm honestly having so much fun writing this!!
Date: 10/26/11 05:05 am Title: Pizza and The Lion King
xD lol LOVE IT LIKE BEFORE :D
Author's Response:
yay!
Date: 10/26/11 01:12 am Title: Somebody's Watching Me
just randomly felt like reading this story for fun but im actually getting really caught up in it and love the way its going! looking forward to more chapters
Author's Response:
me too! :)
Date: 10/26/11 12:56 am Title: Somebody's Watching Me
Oh, I wouldn't like if the story dies... It's interesting, really, though I hate Ashley so much.
She's the kind of girl I dislike. Those who want to be "popular", liked by anyone when she's stupid, hateful and rude.
Bill, in the other hand... I like him a lot. He's quite funny, actually.
Update soon? Because I'm looking forward to more from this!
Author's Response:
nooo! don't hate ashley! that's the whole point of the story is to not hate!! yep. update very soon :)
Date: 10/26/11 12:54 am Title: THE EX-periment
LIEBE ...
Author's Response:
danke schoen :)
Date: 10/26/11 12:49 am Title: Somebody's Watching Me
I wanna murder dylan!! *angry face* poor Bill :(((((
Author's Response:
lol. i should kill him off in the story... lol just kidding :)
Date: 10/26/11 12:40 am Title: Somebody's Watching Me
Wow Dylan's quite the creeper. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
lol. he's over-protective and domineering (as if u haven't already acknowledged that...) :)
Date: 10/25/11 11:42 pm Title: Feeling sorry and Dopplegangers
Sounds like someone has a crush, even if she doesn't realize it yet =D
Author's Response:
yep. she's oblivious... and so is he
Date: 10/25/11 11:29 pm Title: Somebody's Watching Me
oh no!!!! the chapter ended D: please keep going and update soon... I really like your story
Author's Response:
next chapter will be poster either saturday or monday. and thank you :)
Date: 10/25/11 10:19 pm Title: Somebody's Watching Me
OHMYGOD! I don't want to seem like a weird fan-girl or anything but f***ing loveee your story ^.^ this is one of my favorites that I have ever read in my life and I hope that you finish writing the story rather stop right in the middle and never update. Ever. Again. O.o That would be horrifying. I can't imagine not reading this story.
I loved the chapter :) it was beautiful. I feel like I'm sensing some romance between the two :) you know what they, "all great loves start with hatred, blah, blah, blah."
Sooo, can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon :) pretty please.
Btw, I want you to know that I'm gonna stick by your story the whole time, so whenever you need a motivation to write, you can always come find me :D
Author's Response:
aww, thank you. i'm really enjoying this story myself :). i aspire to become one of america's greatest writers, and the reviews that i'm receiving are really helping me! i appreciate u!!
Date: 10/25/11 10:02 pm Title: Somebody's Watching Me
Wow she fits into the typical judgemantal chiks that i hate =/ but i really like this story... i dont meen to offend u but she ashley seems like a biitch nd then her crazy ex bf wow... its so captivating i really like this story i cant wait to see wat hppns in the next chapters to come... i hope she gets over her popularity thing nd finally gives bill a chance
Author's Response:
oh! none taken! its just like this experiment we had in middle school pretty much. yeah, she is a bitch, but she'll change evenutually