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Reviewer: tz44556677 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/11 02:31 pm Title: THE EX-periment

cool story :3

Author's Response: thanx

Reviewer: 9skittlesXandXstars6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 09:26 pm Title: Lunchroom Affairs

Oh God! I've literally died waiting for you to update this. And you did today! I am sooo happy :D

I hope you update pretty soon cause I don't know if I'll be able to wait any longer.

Just one question; will Bill be at Ashley's volleyball game, or no?

Author's Response: Im thinking up ideas for the next chapter and by tomorrow midafternoon, ill start writing (it takes me two days max to finish a chapter) so u could expect the update sat., sun., or mon., though it could be sooner... And the answer to your question is no.

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 09:50 am Title: Lunchroom Affairs

hmmmm I didnt fall alseep, this chapter was gr8 and entertaining....I think Bill likes her big time ^.^ but I really dont know why she is with this damn Dylan sheesh he is annoying -.-'' but anywhoo cant wait for more *O* I want to see more of Billy boo :) he excites me hehhehehhehee...

Author's Response: I kno! I like addin bill into the scenes

Reviewer: Xxdark_angelxX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 02:39 am Title: Lunchroom Affairs

He might b magic but he sure ass hell seems controling =/

Author's Response: Lol he is very

Reviewer: dimmortalemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 01:38 am Title: Lunchroom Affairs

ENJOYING though I want Bill and Ash moment :D but I really love this!!GREAT!! :D

Author's Response: Sorry lol. Im trying to put a good amount of emotion in my work so i try not to rush things. A bill and ash moment will come up. Just be patient

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 11:03 pm Title: Lunchroom Affairs

She's so wishy-washy about Dylan. She likes him when it gets her something, but at the same time is annoyed at him. She's such a teenage girl!

Author's Response: Ah but she is a teenage girl

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 08:21 pm Title: Lunchroom Affairs

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanx

Reviewer: dimmortalemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/11 08:25 pm Title: Cute Couple

jA I agree with Zac Dylan was a fucking asshole bam!bam!bam! Bill is much better LOL XD i love the pregnant idea WHAHAHA woooooh! that was cool haha LOVE IT!

Reviewer: dimmortalemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/11 08:06 pm Title: Whitmore

The fuck wah I really hate Dylan damn him LOL XD I love it though how I imagine her being angry whahaha LOL XD WEIRD okay moving onto the next chap. :D

Author's Response: Whaaa? lol

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/11 08:03 pm Title: Cute Couple

There's no update :( *is sad now*

Author's Response: Im sorry!!!! Im very busy editing the eighth chapter to make it perfect... And i have dance practice n guitar lessons, and college work and other bull. so sorry!! expect the chap early next week maybe

Reviewer: Jokers Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 04:38 am Title: Cute Couple

se needsto stop caring what people think and get a restraining order on dylan. love this story though!

Author's Response:

lol i'm glad :)

Reviewer: Jokers Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 04:31 am Title: Whitmore

no! dylans a total tosserr!

Author's Response:

lol do u mean loser? :)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 12:39 pm Title: Cute Couple

I like that Ashley was asking herself why her popularity status was so important. It's about time =) Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

happy you're somewhat enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Carpe Diem Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 08:34 am Title: Cute Couple

Oh god!!! This is such an amazing story!!! Im already obsessed!!! I wanna read more moments with Bill! Please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Author's Response:

woah seven boring chapters already got cha hooked?! ;p

rn

lol it should be posted saturday

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 11:35 pm Title: Cute Couple

nice chapy ^.^ I really want to know what he writes in that book it boders me lol!!!

Author's Response:

you will eventually :)

Reviewer: Xxdark_angelxX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 11:30 pm Title: Cute Couple

I liked that shes rethinkin about popularity Its really not all that great... well thats wat i think... in the 3 high schools i went to popularity wasnt a big issues i dont even think their was cliques nd stuff.. but its good that shes Rethinkin things about herself cus now mayb she will actually listen to zac =) i hope u post another chapter soon

Author's Response:

yep. i will post the other chapt by saturday, i think. i'm working on it right now

Reviewer: 9skittlesXandXstars6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 11:03 pm Title: Cute Couple

I loved it ^.^ Such a beautiful chapter. I think that that Ashley's second thoughts are better. Because now, she's actually beginning to see (hopefully) that popularity isn't too important.

And we also got to see some stuff happen between Ashley and Bill, even if they didn't declare their undying love to each other :P

Billy's in loooveee! He haaas reeeddd ooonnn!

Author's Response:

lol yup billy's in love. But the question is, with whom? :)

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 10:32 pm Title: Cute Couple

“I want to talk about my chances with Mr. Man Candy!”
^THIS I Lol'ed so bad! XD
Bill is man candy! ;-) a mysterious man candy :P
...I'm so sorry Tom :-(..

Author's Response:

lol. delicious and expensive man candy :)

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 10:12 pm Title: Whitmore

I liked seeing more of Tom! It is cool that he cares about his brother even if he's weird.
Dylan is creepy and possessive. I'd be scared to say no to him without someone there to back me up. :-x

Author's Response: tom isnt under the impression tht his brother is weird. he just knows tht bill is different. and yes. dylan is creepy

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 12:29 pm Title: Whitmore

I really enjoy reading this story it just keeps me wanting moooooooreeeee *0* lol... If I was Ashley I would have puchnhed Dylan from the moment Bill told me that he treatened him, lol then again I will punch anyone that treatens Bill ^.^ pweedy pweedy pwease update soon :(

Author's Response: Im writing the 7th chapter right now! look out for it early winter! lol jk itll be posted early next week

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