Date: 11/30/11 11:28 am Title: Big Gulps
HHAHAHAHA AWESOME CHAPTER!! I really loved this one...ok soo I HATE Dylan I dint like him b4 but now he should burn in hell for doing that to my sweet Billy :( and then Ashley she needs to sort out herself why the hell does she associate herself with those kind of plp anyways god she just wanna fit in soo badly I hate that kind of shit!! And LOL when Bill "father" I am guessing walked in the room and tell him he had to hang up the fone Lol too funny!! Also I think ashley isnt trying hard enough with Bill I mean she says she is different and whatever but I think she still treats Bill a bit distant sighzzz......and I wonder if Bill puts on a front or he is naturally that cold O.o hmmmm....
Author's Response:
that's a front, most definetly. Bill Kaulitz is a sweetie lol
Date: 11/29/11 11:23 pm Title: Big Gulps
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE
Author's Response: Soonsoonsoon monsoon
Date: 11/29/11 09:22 pm Title: Big Gulps
Dylan needs to die, her father is an asshole...and she needs to be less of a doormat.
I'm curious as to why the curfew hmmm I'm super curious..
Author's Response: Lol the curfew thing was quite funny as i wrote it
Date: 11/29/11 05:56 am Title: Big Gulps
WTF I really don't trust thaT Rachel bitch wah!! whahahahha I love that part half naked Bill bwhahahha WTF O.O I hate Dylan I'm gonna kill that pig grrrr...AYEEEEH THAT'S A FUCKING SIGN ASH! YOUR IN LOVE LOL XD This is great as always and I weally weally enjoy it! Yeaaaaaah??? I want to know why? tell me please? phone curfew ? why? why? why? please tell me :))) ???
Author's Response:
nope. ur gonna have to wait like everyone else, my friend.
Date: 11/29/11 01:58 am Title: Big Gulps
Ash is getting it bad for Bill. I'm excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
yeah. she does! expect more satuday or monday
Date: 11/28/11 11:59 pm Title: Big Gulps
love this story so far. mehr bitte
Author's Response:
danke schoen :) mehr am sonnatag oder nachste montag :)
Date: 11/28/11 08:34 pm Title: Big Gulps
Another great chapter :)
I really liked this; I think that it's really a turning point for Ashley with her feelings. I'm pretty sure that she's going to realize the attraction she has for Bill. And I'm pretty sure that something's going to happen between the two when they meet again at Saturday.
I have no idea why Bill got off the phone so early o.O That was weird. Maybe their parents don't like it when other people ruin their "family time." I'm pretty sure that they're not poor (you mentioned about Bill owning and Audi) so they can pay the phone bills :P I'm gonna go with the family idea.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really excited ^.^ Do you have an estimated day to when you will be updating again?
Author's Response:
i might post satuday or monday, but i'm busy with some other things, so rele don't know when i'm actaullt going to post it
Date: 11/28/11 07:12 pm Title: Big Gulps
Dylans an ass... but im happy bill finally told her off To think for herself.. i cant wait for the next update =) Love this story
Author's Response:
i'm working on the 11th now... but it might take a while really cuz i just got fired and now i can't find a job :(
Date: 11/27/11 09:08 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
hahahah ok wth is wrong with Ashley friends Bill IS NOT the devil!!! I think ashely is going to get herself in a load of shit if she doesnt come clean about how she really feels about Bill... sighzzzz and that Dylan he is giving me the creeps big time O.o
Author's Response:
lol @ the devil part (r u talking about the part where it says 'satan knosw you're a poser'?) lol that's just how dylan is. a real creeper
Date: 11/27/11 12:52 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
She is so awash in self denial. lol
Dylan is going to be a wife-beater when he grows up, ugh. I wonder how Tom would react if he found out Dylan hurt his brother...
Bill is cool, as always (even if the 'cool' kids don't see it).
Author's Response: Tom and dylan arent exactly friends as u can see in the chapter entitled 'whitmore', but they do greet one another from time to time. And as said before, bill doesnt really tell his twin everything
Date: 11/27/11 09:39 am Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
Great chapter! I can't wait til Ash admits her attraction to Bill & Dylan gets to stepping. Although I'm sure it won't go down that easy.
Author's Response: Oh sorry. Me only write reality, babe lol
Date: 11/27/11 07:50 am Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
I am really enjoying this, though I am wondering why he seems, well, mean, and why she is with that guy? He is a total ass! And, I'm curious as to why Tom and Bill aren't hanging out more? I guess when it comes to fanfics i'm used to them being like way close, you know? And Georg and Gustav? Are they going to be coming in at any time? Just...curiousity.
-megk's friend-
Date: 11/27/11 07:50 am Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
I am really enjoying this, though I am wondering why he seems, well, mean, and why she is with that guy? He is a total ass! And, I'm curious as to why Tom and Bill aren't hanging out more? I guess when it comes to fanfics i'm used to them being like way close, you know? And Georg and Gustav? Are they going to be coming in at any time? Just...curiousity.
-megk's friend-
Author's Response: Who doesnt not like dylan? lol and tom n bill r close, but bill rather not associate with him becuz of social barriers at school (poor bill afraid of wrecking his brother's rep) and be patient, my friend. The 2 G's will come in soon
Date: 11/27/11 07:47 am Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
I hope no one tells..I still don't like Dylan...but yea why would we hate you??? D-: what will happen next?? Don't you dare hurt our Billy boy >:-(
Author's Response: Who doesnt hate dylan? and just stay tuned! next chapter will be posted monday or tuesday
Date: 11/26/11 08:39 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
yeaaaaaaaahey I love it!!That was cool and amazing haha hmmm I guess, I have no trust to Rachel LOL XD because I don't know her XD I love the part when Ash look deeply through his eyes whahah I was like OH MY GOD! haha then start to hyperventilate LOL XD
Author's Response: Hehe im glad ur enjoying the story!
Date: 11/26/11 08:17 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
i think rachel should tell:p
Author's Response: Would that be a good thing?
Date: 11/26/11 06:31 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
Jeez those girls r do fuckn narrow minded and annoyn i wna slap sense into them.. sry if im beeing mean but i cant beleive ashley actually lets them get to her, and then dylan omg sumone needs to beat the crap outa that kid nd hopefully its bill or tom but hopefully bill.. hopefully ashley gets sum sense into her or tell her off for letting people manipulate her.. but i love this story nd i cant wait to see wat happens =) yet again im sry if wat i say sounds meen, i dont meen to be rude
Author's Response: Dont apologize! these r ur opinions. and besides i think ashleys an idiot as well but things might change in the near future
Date: 11/26/11 04:51 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
If anyone I knew spoke to me like the people in this chapter speak to each other I would beat them with a sack of oranges... especially Dylan. It seems like the only sane one of them all is Bill. I really really like this story but honestly the side characters disgust me.
Author's Response: There are people like them thats why im writing the story :)
Date: 11/26/11 04:21 pm Title: Paranoia, the Destroyer
:O
That was f***ing wonderful! I don't know how manytimes I should tell you this, but I seriously love this story, and I just can't get enough of it. The more I read, the more I want to read.
About Rachel, I think that she's gonna spill everything to Dylan. And I'm guessing that there's gonna be a fight in the next chapter since you said that we're gonna hate you and that there's goingto be Bill in it.
Now I seriously can't wait for Monday. I'm really excited. I can't wait for something to finally happen between Bill and Ashley :)
Once again, this was a lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Lol u got it. I am working on the chapter right now and i am telling u u r going to hate me... more of not me but my characters..
Date: 11/26/11 02:31 pm Title: THE EX-periment
cool story :3