I loved this! Tonight was the first chance I've had to read anything in ages and I'm so glad I got a chance to read this one. So cute and hot--I loved the idea of it and the way it unfolded. And I love, love that they were virgins for each other. *_* Just perfect Mel. :)

Author's Response: Hey! I've been thinking about you! I'm so tickled that you haven't had much time to read and yet you read mine. That's really awesome and puts such a huge smile on my face. Thank you so, so much, Jen! ♥!

Okay, for starters I just love how this story opens - Tom waking with a song in his head and his fingers itching to play. It's so wonderfully descriptive and it already establishes how integral Georg is to his playing. It's a great way to set the scene for your story and what's going to unfold.

Tom catching Gustav on the pot is just priceless. It's comedy gold from the crumpled financials to the toilet paper bouncing off Tom's head, and I grinned all the way through. "Unsuccessful but entertaining" indeed. XD

The moment where Tom crawls in with Bill is just essential twin-ness to me. I can't read any relationship with either of them if the relationship that is the core of their very being is handled with respect, left intact, and that's very much the case here. It's a sweet, twinny, adorable, delightfully humorous scene. Then Bill is out, hee.

Tom jumping to conclusions is SO TOM, he's about to hyperventilate, which really emphasizes Georg's importance to him - another nice touch. Then Georg arrives with his coup and Tom doesn't even realize. As for Georg. KEEPING SECRETS. He ought to know that's the wrong tactic to take with Tom...

I adored Bill being Mr. Exposition. It was cute and a fun way to really get into the storyline...and, oooh, the tantalizing hints of fantasy...knowing what's going on, that's just HOT. *_* It really is. But, bahaha, Georg asking the twins whether they have any decency. DECENCY. He ought to know better! *snickersnort* They don't. They really, really don't. :P

I enjoyed Tom's realization that it might be him, and the fact that it didn't right away smack him in the face that he liked Georg, in return. It's playing out more realistically. It IS something he'd probably struggle with.

Poor Tom, missing out on a hot one night stand just to find out what's on those shades. ;) Once he thought about being with a man, though, he turned her down flat! Iiiiinteresting...

Poor Tom, the game not turning out in his favor at all. *chortles unsympathetically* Sometimes, your dearest Bill can be your worst enemy, my boy... Also, clotheses making an appearance = precious. And Gustav! That's some secret you've been hiding. *chinhands*

That is so thoughtful of Bill, getting the glasses and leaving Tom to take himself to his bunk. Very nice. ;) I like that Georg knew Tom's tell right away, and that it led to the true revelation. It was so very real that Georg's reaction was fear, not anger - his deepest fantasy has been exposed to its object, after all, but it leads to something real between THEM. *_* And that's sexy and lovely and just beautiful.

As for the sex, it starts out with "boyfriend" and that's just starry eyes from the get-go. The scene is sensual and loving and I like hearing about Tom losing his virginity. And it's especially perfect to me that they swapped and shared the experience. And their sex is incredibly hot, and I'm so glad you got them there.

Poor Bill, I bet he's a bit sexually frustrated. ;) And has a new appreciation for Gusti's charms...

This was a fun, sexy story, and I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing it!

Author's Response: Tay. Holy wow, you were serious about a detailed review! This is amazing and I think my jaw literally dropped when I opened it. Reading all these thoughts, seeing the story from someone else's eyes, especially someone I respect so much, is really fascinating and very validating. I can't even thank you enough for this, but I'll try--Thank you so, so much, Tay. ♥!

Read half of this this morning before I had to run for the bus (I debated on "missing it" just so I could finish readingXD) and finished it now after university. Unf! I love this concept, WHERE CAN I BUY THESE GLASSES?

It was great and I loved the last part with Bill and Gustav xD

I want to know exactly what the fantasy in the glasses was *flail* XD

Author's Response: Aww, it's a huge compliment that you considered missing the bus to finish this! Thank you so much for the kind words. And you know, I kinda wanna know what the fantasy was, too, but Tom and Georg weren't talking. ;)

Great story! Loved when the twins are fighting over the glasses the first time. And when they're all playing I never. And the ending was perfect! I would have to say no to getting a pair of Visi-Tech's since I have a tendency to lose my sunglasses. They do sound like fun though.

Awesome story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Ohhh yes. That was HAWT!!!

It's about time there was some good Torg posted here! I loved this!! I would kill to get my hands on those glasses too! XD

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And man, so would I. *_*

Oh for the love of Torg you MUST make a sequel for Bill and Gustav *drops to knees and begs* PLEEAAAAAAASE! I can't pick a favorite part of this because I absolutely love all of it. Though Tom in girls panties is just priceless.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. And I'm a terrible tease, I know. I won't promise, but maaaaybe on the sequel. We'll see. ;)

You know they had to be red panties. With lace. And maybe ruffles on the butt. ;p

Oh gosh... Girly, I am NOT one to read Torg cause it scares me (only slightly) but I think I will read any Torg you write. You have made me a believer. u_u

As far as my favorite part? The first kiss. I'm such a sap, I know... but oh my gosh it was cute! -squee-

I think your Tom character was just plain awesome. He was funny, and he had the whole package. It was great, along with the part of Georg you got to see. - ♥ -

Yeesh, this fic was exactly what I needed to make my day, today, and the fic just made the already good day, great. -snuggles loves- You're awesome sweeties.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

(( A little side note, I do hope you do another one shot with Gustav/Bill. You've not got my interest in what Billbaby's fantasy is. ;) ))

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm tickled to have made you a believer. ;)

I liked that kiss, too. Very simple and sweet, and cut away. But I'm really happy you liked Tom! He was so fun to write. The first part of this story came so easily, just because of him. And you know, any day I can make your day is a good day. Thank you, darling girl! ♥