It was sadly beautiful! I loved the way u write very in depth and haunting in a good way. I am gonna be honest and say I wasn't too happy about Bill and the OFC killin themselves, especially after she would be granted freedom when she killed Tom. But I guess not everything has a happy ending, but I get what u mean about the Romeo and Juliet. All in all well done =] Aussie, Aussie, aussie...

Author's Response: thank you so much xD i have to say that i didnt feel right keeping Bill and Lilly alive, since it would just cause drama with Tom being killed, and ya know all jail sentences and the whole sha-bang xD i actually for some reason got this idea from songs by a band named A Bloody Canvas..i dont think they are on youtube but their lyrics are online and very powerful xD oh my god Go The Aussies...all the way xD anyway, thanks for the review hopefully i will have my other ones shots up for Tom and Gustav soon xD