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Reviewer: YaoiYuriFangirl13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/09 02:59 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

This story is sooooo cute!I think I found a theam song for the story.It's "Making Memories Of Us" by Keith Urban.I was listening to my I-Pod while reading the story-mostly the last chapter-and though it fit.So not you can say your story-which is awsome and is going on my fave list-has a them song,and keep writing,ja!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 08:17 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

BEAUTIFUL story! It would be a shame if this was the end, but I am glad that Tom finally came to his senses and went after what he needed, because it brought them both the peace of mind and heart that completed them.

Love it, love it, love it! Thank you for writing this.

Reviewer: forever_or_never Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 10:36 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

Hi I love your story and in my opinion you shoul continue it please please
see you

Reviewer: Nanashi Nijino Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/08 10:56 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

You have to continue it... I think it would be so funny for the twins to deal with the first diaper change... awwwwwww shit.... I'm gunna be imagining that for the next two weeks. lol Anyways. I love the story so you have to continue or I'm gunna sick my evil ninja plot bunnies on your butt. LMFAO

Reviewer: gurr730 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 07:51 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

i really want to read about what happens after!!! please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Akuji Seyyuki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/08 09:44 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

I'm not sure if you should continue or not, it's your decision so yeah.^-^

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/08 12:06 am Title: Are you kidding me?

More, more. I want to see how the relat.ionship develops with them as parents now.

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/08 10:03 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

Heyyy, where did this go? D: chapter, epilogue, sequel, whatever you want, just post *-*

Reviewer: Sexylittlefeet22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 12:21 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

I miss this story. I hope you'll update again soon.

Reviewer: JackalChan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/08 10:44 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

personally I would love to read more, but if you do decide to end it here, it was a beautiful story

Reviewer: lostinthemoment Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/08 05:31 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

I really enjoyed reading this fan-fic, personally I'd like it to be left where its currently at otherwise thered be so many sub plots that it would take away from the original story.

nicely written

jay

Reviewer: szasz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 02:32 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

that was good... thoigh the vicous Simone thing.. was just so abruptly dropped.... maybe reconciliation thing now?!

Reviewer: Tavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 08:55 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

oh this is so lovely *grin*
please continues

Reviewer: stasi24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 06:54 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

no no please dont end here!!!
continue.... i love this story so much :[

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/08 12:21 am Title: Dawn of a new day.

Oh, you should definately continue this! Or write a sequel! Please?

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 08:28 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

ohh Bill finally woke up^^
sorry I don't know either if you should end it or continue:/
Great story:)

Reviewer: Sexylittlefeet22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 07:31 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

Oh keep going! I wanna see how Bill and Tom handle raising the babies. The baby twins are to cute. XD

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 06:02 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

OMG AAAAAAAAWWWWWW

"You did this, you know that right. These perfect little monkeys were what have been kicking the shit out of you for the past three months."

LOOOL
THIS IS SOOO GREAT!!! I LOVEEE IT!!!!

end..? humm...you could do just another chapter.. like: 3 years later.... lol
I use to do that when I'm in your situation.

gosh..this is so damn good! x )

Reviewer: Lilly99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 05:00 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD KEEP GOING!!!! PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!! omg you cant end it here please dont!!! omg its such a good story and i want more!!!! more more more more more more more!!! pretty please?!?!?!!

xoooxoxoxoxooxox

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 04:29 pm Title: Dawn of a new day.

Wellllllll, I would add another chapter or two, just to say more about Bill and the babies and end it at home, not in the hospital, you know ;) but I want a sequel right after! :D Like, them buying a house, feeding the monkeys, normal things parents do lol pretty please? *.*

Author's Response: well. since you guys are asking so nicely. I'll most likely do an epilouge to this one. and then get started on the sequel if you guys really want it. LOL

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