Date: 09/12/13 04:09 pm Title: The First Time
THIS IS THE BEST BILL+OFC ONE-SHOT I'VE EVER READ! I'm adding this to my list of Favorites. So beautiful and realistic and sweet and passionate and funny and lovely and everything nice.
Date: 07/02/12 09:14 pm Title: The First Time
im going to admit, i haven't read your story yet (though after reading this: I WILL!!!) but it was beautifully written; realistic without being stupid or gory- it was wonderful how their love so obviously came through their actions...to be honest it actually reminded me of my first time {without the pain and with an orgasm...}
Date: 04/10/11 11:27 pm Title: The First Time
ahhhhhh *_*
Oohh mmyy
Author's Response: *giggles* I'll take that as a good response. ^^
Date: 04/07/11 04:25 pm Title: The First Time
oh, i meant trebuchet.
Author's Response: *giggles* ^^
Date: 04/06/11 08:39 pm Title: The First Time
This definitely sounds like it was written by someone who has not had sex before. The concept that a woman is expected to be in pain during intercourse for the first time is a very outdated myth and is completely untrue. But altogether it was a very very good read. I am in love with these characters you have written, as far as I am concerned you have made the best Bill/OFC pairing on this site. I have never read anything better, and I highly anticipate the rest of your one shots. Thank you so much for sharing their world with us.
Author's Response: Expected to be in pain, no, but it is different for each person and I know some who've experienced pain to varying degrees, though truly, none like described in this oneshot. Then again, it's my understanding that men don't really respond to prostate stimulation as /strongly/ as they do in most of the slash fiction I've read, soooo... lol.
I can only assume you haven't read the main story, Trebuchet, but sadly, I'm not the original author. ^^ Ella has granted me permission to post her story, originally "Catauplt", and it's residual oneshots with the knowledge that I will give her /full/ credit and refrain from changing the story's content sans character names, character descriptions and locations in an effort to move it from one fandom (Hanson) to another (Tokio Hotel).
Thaaaat being said, lol, I'm delighted that you think so highly of Alley and Bill's character. It's important to me, personally, that people take away their story with them. Though the main story is finished, it truly does linger with you when you read future fics. Thank /you/ for reading and enjoying. <3
Date: 04/06/11 07:37 pm Title: The First Time
Well if they have read trebucent or whatever how it is u spell it. They should not expect smut for their relationship is based on LOVE not greedy lust. So don't worry love!
Author's Response: *beams* Should've thought more along those lines, lol.
Date: 04/06/11 06:46 pm Title: The First Time
Awwh, yup, I did enjoy it! ^^ This was amazing. They are so sweet!
I loved it!
Author's Response: \o/
Date: 04/06/11 06:34 pm Title: The First Time
And imma have to agree with Jster on this one.
Author's Response: \o/
Date: 04/06/11 04:58 pm Title: The First Time
o_O okay..../that/ was a bit more detail than the original...not that i'm complaining ;)
Author's Response: *shifty eyes* Than the original story, Trebuchet, or than the original oneshot? o.o 'Cause I didn't change anything from the original oneshot aside from names, character descriptions and locations. ^^
Date: 04/06/11 03:22 pm Title: The First Time
Sexy >:)
Author's Response: >:D
Date: 04/06/11 02:58 pm Title: The First Time
I loved it!!! Soooo Amazing. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! ^^ Next oneshot will be posted on Wednesday, and if you haven't already, check out the main story in the series; Trebuchet. <3
Date: 04/06/11 02:30 pm Title: The First Time
hehe, noo...... bill with children... *giggle* i loved this...... great job!!!!!!
can't wait for the next one!!!!
Author's Response: Psh, you know it's going to happen at some point. ;D
Date: 04/06/11 12:34 pm Title: The First Time
And oh yeah, this chappy is sexy and at the same time, adorable.
Author's Response: Isn't it though? *swoons*
Date: 04/06/11 12:32 pm Title: The First Time
Gah, they're so cute. So innocent. This is love.
Author's Response: <3
Date: 04/06/11 11:08 am Title: The First Time
Heisjvashsnxnxx!!! Holy beavers!!! WOO! *opens up a window* it just all of the sudden for stuffy in here. Beside the good hot smexy stuff, the awkwardness and learning experience captured alot of beauty! Boy I worship Ella at her feet! The woman is a freakin genius! The graphics is amazing too love! Just sheer utter beauty with a whole lot of good wholesome lovey dovey love making. I loved hearing bills hound dog mind going "please say yes, please say yes." he is a man after all. Haha
Author's Response: *gigglefits* I'm glad you liked it! ^^ I was worried that it wouldn't be all that well received seeing as it's not your typical smut that's usually found on THF. I should've known better. <3